Sexual Harrassment...with a twist.

[Born To Kill]

What a journey, what a pace, whirlwind lifestyle...
It must read on my face, I ain't been fucked in a while.
But here at your office, your girl looks so hot...
Gently pouring my coffee from that warm pot.

I've flown 10,000 miles to make you a millionaire...
And while time is money, you're just standing there.
Now go get that bitch and tell her to put out...
Or I'm back on my jet, me and this deal gone south!

Australian fucker, rich like the day's long...
I'd tell him to fuck off, but my spine isn't strong.
What do I say to my assistant? How do I ask...
Her to take one for the team, flat on her back?

I'm scared by her expression, the look in her eyes...
The contempt she feels hides behind no disguise.
Her eyes burn with hatred, then fires cease...
And what came outta her mouth, I could not believe.

Your business has been sagging, yes, I understand...
But what you ask of me, proves you're not a man.
You haven't even paid me these past three weeks...
Then you have the nerve to ask me something so bleak?

I'll tell you what, boss, I'll do your dirty deed...
But having me whore's gonna make your bank bleed.
I know the Aussie's holding 20 Mil inside his pen...
So I'm taking 10% of profits before I even begin.

10% of profits? But, you're just my secretary...
And I know the Aussie's ugly, but he isn't THAT scary!
I've always helped you, employed you even when slow...
And I haven't paid you lately cuz my account's read zero.

But now you take advantage and turn on me quick...
When even Jesus knows he won't be your first dick!
I'm trying to save my company so please say yes...
And make sure when you fuck him, you give him your best.

I'll jot what I need, and since I'm a notary...
One click of my stamp makes this legal tender, see?
Now sign right here and I'll save your company...
But never work again as your whore secretary!

I've no choice, he's impatient, the deal's gotta close...
So I'm forced to turn this bitch into a million dollar ho.
Make that two, cuz it's doubled, the amount she'll get...
So consider ME the pussy, cuz my ass got whipped!

Dealing with 2 Faced Bitches - Queenstyle

Tragic Outcome - Charlie Manson

[noncentz]

Graphic Twisted Alomt Into The Mind Of Aperson Capable Oof Such Thought And Action U Used A More Simple Style Then I Am Used To From U And It Helped This More Gave It Almost A Mr.lif Appeal.very Creative Thought Indeed

[Born To Kill]

Thanks, my man...

Now...more of you kids need to read this...

It's cool!

[B.I.Detained.]

lol this was a nice piece. The twist wasn't like "maaaaaaaaaan" but it did reverse the roles on the sex eating scenario. I liked how you started of very vague then built the story up at the end. I like to read to read story's/OM's with a plot so well done for keeping me interested. Not many do lol. It seemed to me a delicate situation for the boss but when mentioned to the secreatry he was met by a very strong, level headed woman which was refreshing to see as most OM's on here just see woman getting raped, hit and abused lol. But you changed the whole thing and props to that. The only fault I feel is tht you struggled on the line which eeded in "bleak". That needs re-wording for the better...
But mostly plus points.
Props
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Your lover Brix

[Born To Kill]

Ya know, my man...

As I was just now re-reading it...

I didn't like the "bleak" either.

Great minds, dude.

Thanks and Peace

[Tha Phoenix]

lol, funny as fuck BTK, it had a nice twist, with the girl screwing the guy over at the end, hilarious.

[Born To Kill]

Thanks...

Bump!

[Tim]

lmao great twist at the end fuckin good shit ive showed my friend this and they liked it alot

I'm trying to save my company so please say yes...
And make sure when you fuck him, you give him your best.

classic right there good flow and rhyme sceme feelin this concept alot havnt seen much like this good job can you please hit mine up with crit thanxs stay up

[Endeva.]

i liked the whole concept and content, nice the way it panned out, only thing i didnt really like ws the stanza's, thought it would have been better if they were longer, the way it was with a coupler of rhymes in each one, it seemed quite poetic.... other than that nice man

[Q.S]

I like it how you started off, and your pieces always tell a good story with wordplay and other writing devices. Your ending was good! The part that really stood out to me was :

10% of profits? But, you're just my secretary...
And I know the Aussie's ugly, but he isn't THAT scary!
I've always helped you, employed you even when slow...
And I haven't paid you lately cuz my account's read zero.


Good open mic, I enjoy reading yours and always have.

God Bless- M.D

[Rule.]

That was badass man, I liked how you alternated between characters. Funny idea to come up with man, really enjoyed the read. And yes, that was quite the twist at the end..and to be honest, you'd be suprised how much of this really goes on in the real world.

Funny ass shit man, stay up.

[JAY DOT.]

creative...

[◄Patʁone►]

This story kept me goin, mos def
Imagination and Creativity combined
I could do with a million dollar whore
Props
I'll keep lookin for your drops

Peazoz.

[Born To Kill]

You guys give me the warm fuzzies inside...

Awwwww!

Thanks, people...much appreciated!

[Freeman]

Lol ^

Ok, nice piece, man.

Very unusual, not original, but unusual.

Thats a good thing.

Im too tired to give a long comment, i hard trouble even reading it, lol.

Keep dropping this quality.

Peace.