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Thread: "Rainfall..." - Bloomquist and T-West

  1. August 23rd, 2004, 03:38 AM #1
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    "Rainfall..." - Bloomquist and T-West

    Rainfall

    It starts pourin' rain...but this isn't the first...
    an image takin' shape...this is life at it's worst
    Thoughts rift, eyes shift...mind drifts to unstable...
    catch myself starrin' at my dusty turntables...
    "When will it stop rainin'?...I urned for the sun-
    to come...imaginin' fields where I could run...
    rememberin' the hikes...the times I climbled trees...
    fallin' off my bike...big cuts on my knees...
    these were the scenes that I breathed...
    the reasons I lived...
    stories I'd give, when I had kids...
    my pain from the rain...others never understood...
    life bein' slain...from my short childhood
    I started to imagine things I could be missin'...
    The finer parts of nature, i'd never get to listen
    The eyes of my life...would they ever glisten?
    my soul now compared to a Vinyl record...
    "Drip"....the rain on the window pane...
    not original but plain...all drops sounds the same
    they came...they left...neither bringin' any new...
    mark lasts for a bit...but then it goes through...
    this is all I can do...only sit and observe...
    but everynight I dream of "what if it curved.."
    no blinds, or curtains...it's always in sight...
    cuz if I blocked the rain...i'd be blockin' my life...
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    Raindrop's stall as these opportunities call..
    Hate dissolves as this society falls..
    Symbollical flaws are dispursed with fleets of rain..
    Pain calls the rainfall to stop, pursue its self and contain..
    Re-Construction of the art in a philosophical being..
    De-Corruption is to start without all deceasing..
    Raindrops hit the pavement, shrouded in silence..
    Muted as Evaporation barriers violence..
    So time is, of the essence as blind minds retract..
    So find this, teaching lesson as these signs react..
    Hidden reasons in scriptures of raindrops falling from truth..
    Expressing seasons of emotional conquests calling our youth..
    Will the raindrops reform together? Or will it slowly die?..
    Cowards disgrace all bretheren as the feelings collide..
    Lives are stolen from family as the rain begins to tame..
    But fear not, for the sun will appear without shame..
    Clouds will clear, raindrops will gather and return to thier skies..
    A golden age throughout.. no regrets or demise..


    The water blurs words that are scripted on paper..
    but I pray for the day when it might turn to vapour..
    as the rainfall pours...it captures my thoughts..
    when will the sun come?...and shine on hip-hop..

    Verse One: T-West
    Verse Two: Bloomquist
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  2. August 23rd, 2004, 03:41 AM #2
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  3. August 23rd, 2004, 07:32 AM #3
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    First verse was nice, I saw a bit of wordplay in there
    Quote Originally Posted by Verse 1
    It starts pourin' rain...but this isn't the first...
    an image takin' shape...this is life at it's worst
    Thoughts rift, eyes shift...mind drifts to unstable...
    catch myself starrin' at my dusty turntables...
    "When will it stop rainin'?...I urned for the sun-
    to come...imaginin' fields where I could run...
    That was a nice and solid way to start off the shit
    The whole verse was pretty nice. It's just that stuck out a bit
    Dont kno why, but it was a nice drop by T-west

    Bloomquist, you also came off with a nice and solid start
    Quote Originally Posted by Verse 2
    Raindrop's stall as these opportunities call..
    Hate dissolves as this society falls..
    Symbollical flaws are dispursed with fleets of rain..
    Pain calls the rainfall to stop, pursue its self and contain..
    Re-Construction of the art in a philosophical being..
    De-Corruption is to start without all deceasing..
    A bit of wordplay, and some vocab. Nice combination
    Imagery was nice. This was a very nice drop too.
    Quote Originally Posted by Verse 2
    Lives are stolen from family as the rain begins to tame..
    But fear not, for the sun will appear without shame..
    Clouds will clear, raindrops will gather and return to thier skies..
    A golden age throughout.. no regrets or demise..
    Vocab was there. Imagery was nice. And flow was good.

    Both had some nice imagery and flow
    Overall.. this was one hell of a piece
    Props.. keep it up you two.



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  4. August 23rd, 2004, 12:25 PM #4
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  5. August 23rd, 2004, 03:22 PM #5
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  6. August 23rd, 2004, 05:02 PM #6
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    I thought this was a great piece....keep it up guys...the verses went well together, the flow was on with lots of multies and internals from both of you....Like Ill said, I saw a little wordplay and some nice references, T your opening few lines were real nice and Bloom your closer was also solid....I thought this was a real nice collab by the both of you...Good job....Keep em comin...Peace...

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  7. August 23rd, 2004, 05:21 PM #7
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    Good shit. West, your verse was aight. The flow was cool, and the imagery was good. Nice descriptive verse. Decent shit. Not your best, but still above average shit. Bloom, your verse was also nice. The flow was a lot better than the last shit I read from you. Nice immprovement. Overall, nice collabo. Keep writing, fellas.

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  8. August 23rd, 2004, 05:35 PM #8
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    Question: does anyone understand what we were even talking about it this piece?
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  9. August 23rd, 2004, 05:45 PM #9
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    I didnt really understand the topic all that well.. Its like you were saying the rain holds you back from ever doing anything.. I dont know its raining right now damn I hate oregon weather.. But you both had a smooth flow in each of your verses.. Also you both had good description and image qualitys..
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  10. August 23rd, 2004, 05:54 PM #10
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    Quote Originally Posted by BQ'
    Question: does anyone understand what we were even talking about it this piece?
    ^nobody will get it...I'm 100% positive that nobody won't...n' I doubt anybody picked up on the symbolism...I told u that we shoulda told them lol.

    Thx for the feedback.

    And what we are talking about...is Hip Hop...I didn't throw in a dusty turntable...or compare my soul to a vinyl record for nothin'...
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  11. August 23rd, 2004, 06:37 PM #11
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    Yes but no one will understand the symbollism how mine relates to hip-hop.
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    Very nicely done. T west started it off with a good flow. Alot of imagery was put into his verse. The ending two lines of his verse really caught. I like how he did that. Nicely done as always T. And Bloom good flow. You put more emotion into your piece. A little bit of imagery. And I see it that you were talking about your own life or you are the rain in this peice. Am I correct?

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  13. August 23rd, 2004, 07:02 PM #13
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    No you are not. I am in no way the rain. But that is your view on the writing, so so be it. Everyone views differently, the piece can mean anything in the eye of the beholder. I doubt anyone will understand the symbollism i tried to portray though. Anyway, replies?
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