cameronj86 (2-1) vs. Macabre (2-1)

**SmokaJoka** · August 22nd, 2004, 11:55 PM

Rules.

^Read & Good Luck

Check Ins Due By Wednesday
Verses Due By Friday
Voting Ends Sunday

**>Inertia>** · August 23rd, 2004, 12:48 AM

Er..10 good?

**Icarus** · August 23rd, 2004, 05:16 PM

wtf? I wanted Daz? Check in... lets get this done quick

**Icarus** · August 25th, 2004, 07:42 PM

Okay you said you were dropping today too, but someone deleted the posts, anyhow here's my verse...

Kid was stuck on Writer's block last week so none of his talent hit home
Now me and him are hand in hand... cuz Mac can't cross the street alone
Macabre's en-dangered and gonna bleed. Will someone take heed?
IJL? They constantly killed and quit, you literally last of a dying breed
Cat's in my face saying "Mac will win in here", it's just as I feared
The league must think I'm really gay...whispering nothings in my ear
But even you predicted you would win??? Now that's a crock of bull
Well at least you got a vivid imagination....yet you suck at topicals
You could merk a spellcheck, scary... Grammar's damn near deplorable
I'd say befriend a dictionary... but even it defines Macabre as horrible!
Macabre welcomes any challengers. he's like Clint Eastwood... but gay
I guess it's only fitting he flirts with death...but I don't swing that way
Should I knock him out quick? Nah, not when his sex life's looking up! Shit
Career's in the middle of fucking nowhere so he's already laying motionless

**>Inertia>** · August 25th, 2004, 08:47 PM

This herb doesn't compare to me..the outcome? Lemme guess.
I'd say he'd be elevating a few levels..
..'cept there's no wheelchair access.
I keep calm when I merk kids..unlike this wack spaz,
'n yea, Cam's on the dope text tip..and it belongs to Daz.
You suck..the league knows it..I never read your lines, cunt.
..cuz if I had..I wouln't even have predicted your way ONCE.
Get some exercise..go outside, doesn't matter because I win,
Fatty, you couldn't step to me on those machines at the gym.
Beef list is stretched as his lines..but what can we expect,
Drop science on this foo'..'n match his inferiority complex.
I destroyed his verse..another rival he'll have it seems,
cuz the Aftermath will treat him shitty..like his idol Rakim.
Trying to beat me? Fuck kid..shit's sink or swim..
..I'd finish him off, but I'll let his Ambition kill him.

He begged to face Ambitious next..for the last line.

**Elwood** · August 25th, 2004, 09:02 PM

boo @ mac..

some of his lines were played, and concepts have been used before... I actually think cam got this.. Mac underestimated..

v/Cam

**>Inertia>** · August 25th, 2004, 09:03 PM

Out of curiosity, which ones were played? If you're going to accuse me, break it down at least. Most of my verse was personals

Pz.

**menolin** · August 26th, 2004, 12:00 AM

cameron
Kid was stuck on Writer's block last week so none of his talent hit home
Now me and him are hand in hand... cuz Mac can't cross the street alone
not bad

Macabre's en-dangered and gonna bleed. Will someone take heed?
IJL? They constantly killed and quit, you literally last of a dying breed
should of been worded better

Cat's in my face saying "Mac will win in here", it's just as I feared
The league must think I'm really gay...whispering nothings in my ear
weak

But even you predicted you would win??? Now that's a crock of bull
Well at least you got a vivid imagination....yet you suck at topicals
okay

You could merk a spellcheck, scary... Grammar's damn near deplorable
I'd say befriend a dictionary... but even it defines Macabre as horrible!
weak

Macabre welcomes any challengers. he's like Clint Eastwood... but gay
I guess it's only fitting he flirts with death...but I don't swing that way
good

Should I knock him out quick? Nah, not when his sex life's looking up! Shit
Career's in the middle of fucking nowhere so he's already laying motionless
so/so

you should spend a little more time re-wording your verse.
some good concepts verse came off pretty much average though.

macabre
This herb doesn't compare to me..the outcome? Lemme guess.
I'd say he'd be elevating a few levels..
..'cept there's no wheelchair access.
average

I keep calm when I merk kids..unlike this wack spaz,
'n yea, Cam's on the dope text tip..and it belongs to Daz.
good

You suck..the league knows it..I never read your lines, cunt.
..cuz if I had..I wouln't even have predicted your way ONCE.
nah

Get some exercise..go outside, doesn't matter because I win,
Fatty, you couldn't step to me on those machines at the gym.
weak

Beef list is stretched as his lines..but what can we expect,
Drop science on this foo'..'n match his inferiority complex.
nice

I destroyed his verse..another rival he'll have it seems,
cuz the Aftermath will treat him shitty..like his idol Rakim.
lol, good

Trying to beat me? Fuck kid..shit's sink or swim..
..I'd finish him off, but I'll let his Ambition kill him.
good

a weak begginging, but some nice bars at the end.
slightly better punches than cam.

vote-macabre
only just

**Kaput Mundi** · August 26th, 2004, 06:30 AM

Stretcher
Kid was stuck on Writer's block last week so none of his talent hit home
Now me and him are hand in hand... cuz Mac can't cross the street alone
setup lacked a connection...but punch got a laugh
Macabre's en-dangered and gonna bleed. Will someone take heed?
IJL? They constantly killed and quit, you literally last of a dying breed
par
Cat's in my face saying "Mac will win in here", it's just as I feared
The league must think I'm really gay...whispering nothings in my ear
this didn't make great sense to me.If anything you want to say he's gay..
But even you predicted you would win??? Now that's a crock of bull
Well at least you got a vivid imagination....yet you suck at topicals
lol
You could merk a spellcheck, scary... Grammar's damn near deplorable
I'd say befriend a dictionary... but even it defines Macabre as horrible!
nice
Macabre welcomes any challengers. he's like Clint Eastwood... but gay
I guess it's only fitting he flirts with death...but I don't swing that way
okay
Should I knock him out quick? Nah, not when his sex life's looking up! Shit
Career's in the middle of fucking nowhere so he's already laying motionless
meh

This herb doesn't compare to me..the outcome? Lemme guess.
I'd say he'd be elevating a few levels..
..'cept there's no wheelchair access.
Remeber that mop punch of mine?I had came up with this too but then switched to the mop deal because I didn't like it.
I keep calm when I merk kids..unlike this wack spaz,
'n yea, Cam's on the dope text tip..and it belongs to Daz.
mediocre
You suck..the league knows it..I never read your lines, cunt.
..cuz if I had..I wouln't even have predicted your way ONCE.
meh
Get some exercise..go outside, doesn't matter because I win,
Fatty, you couldn't step to me on those machines at the gym.
very bad wording
Beef list is stretched as his lines..but what can we expect,
Drop science on this foo'..'n match his inferiority complex.
this was nice
I destroyed his verse..another rival he'll have it seems,
cuz the Aftermath will treat him shitty..like his idol Rakim.
meh
Trying to beat me? Fuck kid..shit's sink or swim..
..I'd finish him off, but I'll let his Ambition kill him.
nope

Vote Cameron

**Elwood** · August 26th, 2004, 06:49 AM

nah i wasnt acussing you of biting/flipping.. just the concepts are old...

wheelchair..... gym concept...

props to both.

**Escar** · August 27th, 2004, 08:46 AM

Shit was close. Both came good, decent punches from both MCs. I was just feelin' Cam came a bit harder, although your lines were stretched as hell man, try to make 'em short yo.

V/Cam

Props, close battle.

Peace