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  • Rival

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  • lyrical swordman

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Thread: Rival vs lyrical swordman

  1. #1
    lyrical swordman
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    Rival vs lyrical swordman

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  2. #2
    Rival
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    30 min



    ayo make this an hr..i gotta make a run

  3. #3
    Rival
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    nah i had time..keyed

    this guy isnt on top, if he was it was a quick reign
    and its natural i take him out, like whatever took rick james
    i heard he thought out the box, so he wont be a damn hassle
    he tried going against the "grain", and got beat wit a sand castle
    i dont think his punchs connect, so now i'll provoke the nerd
    cuz im keepin L'S away from my face, like im trynna stop smokin herb
    kid you such a lame, dont think yur better i'll burn...
    and take this win by storm,flood nd the rest of the metrological terms
    i guess he came to enjoy the site, but imma prove this guy wrong
    cuz i'll punch and move his body, like that 1 nina sky song

    weak key...pz

    g'luck

  4. #4
    lyrical swordman
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    yo my lyrical sword ready for another killin
    ima win this battle cause you know its lord willin
    got a new nigga thinkin hes my only rival
    but after this battle hell be runnin fo survival
    he cant be my rival cause he aint my nemisis
    so get your bitch to walk yo ass off my premisis
    this battle is easy like gettin laid by your mom
    cause the only rival you done have is in pokemon
    so as the swordman comes in fo the final strike
    you better run or youll get cut up with yo rhymes an mic.

  5. #5
    d2dak
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    u won nigga..........................................

  6. #6
    lyrical swordman
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    what up nigga yo get into a battle.

  7. #7
    lyrical swordman
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    yo uppin man vote on this its good shit

  8. #8
    Rival
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    ayo uppin this shit
    this aint good when folks dont vote

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  10. #10
    Rival
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    are you serious?...vote man^^^^ you cant just drop a link

  11. #11
    Rival
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    vote man
    wtf does it take?




















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    this guy isnt on top, if he was it was a quick reign
    and its natural i take him out, like whatever took rick james
    ---no, predictable...
    i heard he thought out the box, so he wont be a damn hassle
    he tried going against the "grain", and got beat wit a sand castle
    ---pretty wack, forced this
    i dont think his punchs connect, so now i'll provoke the nerd
    cuz im keepin L'S away from my face, like im trynna stop smokin herb
    ---played, and not good
    kid you such a lame, dont think yur better i'll burn...
    and take this win by storm,flood nd the rest of the metrological terms
    ---decent
    i guess he came to enjoy the site, but imma prove this guy wrong
    cuz i'll punch and move his body, like that 1 nina sky song
    ---meh, not much





    yo my lyrical sword ready for another killin
    ima win this battle cause you know its lord willin
    ---so what?..this aint even a diss
    got a new nigga thinkin hes my only rival
    but after this battle hell be runnin fo survival
    ---boring, no creativity...no punch
    he cant be my rival cause he aint my nemisis
    so get your bitch to walk yo ass off my premisis
    ---no wit, no punch, no creativity, no good....just statements
    this battle is easy like gettin laid by your mom
    cause the only rival you done have is in pokemon
    ---fucking wack
    so as the swordman comes in fo the final strike
    you better run or youll get cut up with yo rhymes an mic.
    ---gay,

    lyrical dude aint got no creativity or wit...AT ALL...learn
    to throw a punch instead of boring threats and statements..
    rival wins...with a less weak verse..

    V.Rival
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    around a call but when I pick up I don't know what to say"


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    Easy vote here

    Rival - Could have been better, but for a newbie not too bad. None of your punches hit hard, but they all hit and the sand castle thing was a bit amusing. You had a good flow going and some good ideas, just keep elevating and thinking of more creative punches. You have something here.

    lyrical - You don't have something here. Sorry but your verse was very basic and bad. Extend your bars a bit and make them longer so they don't seem as basic and work on creative concepts for punches. Don't just say your killing him.. say how you are killing him. And stay away from mom jokes.

    Vote - Rival

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    Yo Lyrical no offense but you could've did a lot better; you completely wasted like 4 lines. Rival good shit keep it up. Overall I no excitement.

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    ^yeah i was thinking that same thing about Lyrical.. he could of done a lot better, ^but what are you voting for? you need 100 posts to post the poll... but ^he was correct, Lyrical had NO creativity what so ever... but Rival, his verse was alright, but he could of came harder and his structure could of been better, and the verse was just boring i didnt really "get into it" but i still think you took this battle compared to Lyrical... good job to the both of you though.................

    V/ Rival...

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