iight..
10-12 lines,
i spit first,
NO DR, NO hate, you know the usual....
good luck.
Tha Return
AFI_KILLS_RAP
iight..
10-12 lines,
i spit first,
NO DR, NO hate, you know the usual....
good luck.
MondoThugs.
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CHECKIN IN LIKE MALE DOMINANCE AT ITS BEST!!!
this be my verse...::::::MT::::...
Im wastin this bitch, but hell bring his dickrider.... hes already got the lube
Cause he came back for Tha Return..... and he STILL get wins from noobs!
So fuck TR.... ill show rage, as i make this Westide Warrior stage this show
Cause Returns still reppin the crew.... even though it got closed ages ago!
Ill engage to flow.......TR's luck to drop a jewel.. but me?......i throw gems
Cause ill have TR's mind blank.... like the number of good replies to his OM!
This show ends... fuck goin further, hes fucked.. he should see im the star
But ur right, ur name is movin up.................a lot slower then the real TR!*
After my shit...ill pause like a VCR, fuck readin Returns..... id rather go hide
Cause as my name says, afis killin rap,but have u noticed that ur still alive?!
*The Realist has had the initials TR longer then Tha Return has.
UR TURN...
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M unit yeah right bitch, i'm bout to hit you 9 times like you fifty
stick to ya guitars and drums cuz them rhymes won't hit me
gimmie tha mic cuz i'm bout to take this metal head to school
you just entered at lyrical mosh pit and this mic is my 'Tool'(the rock band)
why is this fagget repin manson and his win against lyrical violators
i just seen his verse I laugh now and he's bout to cry later
yeah faggets like you and the insane clown pussies do kill rap
why you gotta go an fuck wit the frontliner thats lyrical straped
you straight outta Arizona so you probably used to the heat
after this battle you should rep ur record and show RB ur used to defeat
let the voting begain............pz
and i ain't reppin the westside warriors I'm letting bitches like you know that i am a westside warrior!!!!!!!!!!!!!
pz
oh yeah and by the way...
"why is this fagget repin manson and his win against lyrical violators"
Marilyn Manson isnt in my sig idiot, its Dani Filth... and what does Tool (the rock band) have anything to do with a mic?
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AFI_KILLS_RAP
Im wastin this bitch, but hell bring his dickrider.... hes already got the lube
Cause he came back for Tha Return..... and he STILL get wins from noobs!
Nah..played, not fellin in
So fuck TR.... ill show rage, as i make this Westide Warrior stage this show
Cause Returns still reppin the crew.... even though it got closed ages ago!
ehh, decent, took a nice little chuckle out of me
Ill engage to flow.......TR's luck to drop a jewel.. but me?......i throw gems
Cause ill have TR's mind blank.... like the number of good replies to his OM!
Decent... could of been better
This show ends... fuck goin further, hes fucked.. he should see im the star
But ur right, ur name is movin up.................a lot slower then the real TR!*
lol i get it, ok punch...could of been better as well
After my shit...ill pause like a VCR, fuck readin Returns..... id rather go hide
Cause as my name says, afis killin rap,but have u noticed that ur still alive?!
VCR line is played, next line was ehh ok
Tha Return
M unit yeah right bitch, i'm bout to hit you 9 times like you fifty
stick to ya guitars and drums cuz them rhymes won't hit me
nah...
gimmie tha mic cuz i'm bout to take this metal head to school
you just entered at lyrical mosh pit and this mic is my 'Tool'(the rock band)
played concept...
why is this fagget repin manson and his win against lyrical violators
i just seen his verse I laugh now and he's bout to cry later
no...not feelin it
yeah faggets like you and the insane clown pussies do kill rap
why you gotta go an fuck wit the frontliner thats lyrical straped
nah..sorry but not feelin your verse at all so far..=\
you straight outta Arizona so you probably used to the heat
after this battle you should rep ur record and show RB ur used to defeat
Best line in your verse....right here
neither came too hard though i felt that tha return could
of come a lot better then he did, i have seen much better
from him, he came played in this battle and i just wasnt
feelin you verse whats so ever tha return you lacked a good
verse and lacked in a lot of your lines. AFI you came played
in some of your lines too, though you did have better
punches and wordplay then tha return is why you take
my vote....both need some work i say...just keep doin
what your doin and you'll get their.
pz
V/ AFI_KILLS_RAP
thanks for the vote man.... UPPIN #1..................
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yeah umm VOTE this needs to close,,,,,,,,,,
UPPIN #3
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Afi Kills Rap
Good lines:
So fuck TR.... ill show rage, as i make this Westide Warrior stage this show
Cause Returns still reppin the crew.... even though it got closed ages ago!
This show ends... fuck goin further, hes fucked.. he should see im the star
But ur right, ur name is movin up.................a lot slower then the real TR!*
Overall: ur verse was iffy, i mean u got skill just didnt come as hard as u could have, if you would have reworded alot of your shit. But you came iight. Some played lines
The Return
only 1 good line as efusive said
you straight outta Arizona so you probably used to the heat
after this battle you should rep ur record and show RB ur used to defeat
otherwise everything was played dawg, 0 - to no creativity.
OVerall battle: alot of played lines, u guys both had skill coulda both came better, if u woulda reworded ur shit. anyways, Due to flow, creativity and harder punches i vote for that kid afi..iight battle
The Return:
Cuttz The Best Pound For Pound
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AFI - You've gotten better as this was not a bad verse at all. I liked the flow and multies you had going as they only added to the value and you had some creative punches. The opener wasn't as creative, but it definately hit him well and the personal about his crew was nice. Good verse
Tha Return - You've gotten better, but still not there yet. I felt like you were lacking in creative concepts and he wasn't. You also had a lot of basic rhymes like school and tool and I just wasn't feeling your verse though your flow was okay and your punches were okay. They mostly hit, but they were more weak jabs than really punches so AFI takes this
Vote - AFI
Please return the favor fellas and hit up one of my battles
Im wastin this bitch, but hell bring his dickrider.... hes already got the lube
Cause he came back for Tha Return..... and he STILL get wins from noobs!
7/10
So fuck TR.... ill show rage, as i make this Westide Warrior stage this show
Cause Returns still reppin the crew.... even though it got closed ages ago!
8/10
Ill engage to flow.......TR's luck to drop a jewel.. but me?......i throw gems
Cause ill have TR's mind blank.... like the number of good replies to his OM!
7/10
This show ends... fuck goin further, hes fucked.. he should see im the star
But ur right, ur name is movin up.................a lot slower then the real TR!*
8/10
After my shit...ill pause like a VCR, fuck readin Returns..... id rather go hide
Cause as my name says, afis killin rap,but have u noticed that ur still alive?!
8/10
Tha Return
M unit yeah right bitch, i'm bout to hit you 9 times like you fifty
stick to ya guitars and drums cuz them rhymes won't hit me
5/10
gimmie tha mic cuz i'm bout to take this metal head to school
you just entered at lyrical mosh pit and this mic is my 'Tool'(the rock band)
5/10
why is this fagget repin manson and his win against lyrical violators
i just seen his verse I laugh now and he's bout to cry later
3/10
yeah faggets like you and the insane clown pussies do kill rap
why you gotta go an fuck wit the frontliner thats lyrical straped
4/10
you straight outta Arizona so you probably used to the heat
after this battle you should rep ur record and show RB ur used to defeat
6/10
v/afi clreary because TR's verse was below average and afi's was little above average, afi threw more funny punches,
v/afi_kills_rap
Im wastin this bitch, but hell bring his dickrider.... hes already got the lube
Cause he came back for Tha Return..... and he STILL get wins from noobs!
8/10
So fuck TR.... ill show rage, as i make this Westide Warrior stage this show
Cause Returns still reppin the crew.... even though it got closed ages ago!
7/10
Ill engage to flow.......TR's luck to drop a jewel.. but me?......i throw gems
Cause ill have TR's mind blank.... like the number of good replies to his OM!
8/10
This show ends... fuck goin further, hes fucked.. he should see im the star
But ur right, ur name is movin up.................a lot slower then the real TR!*
8/10
After my shit...ill pause like a VCR, fuck readin Returns..... id rather go hide
Cause as my name says, afis killin rap,but have u noticed that ur still alive?!
8/10
Tha Return
M unit yeah right bitch, i'm bout to hit you 9 times like you fifty
stick to ya guitars and drums cuz them rhymes won't hit me
3/10
gimmie tha mic cuz i'm bout to take this metal head to school
you just entered at lyrical mosh pit and this mic is my 'Tool'(the rock band)
5/10
why is this fagget repin manson and his win against lyrical violators
i just seen his verse I laugh now and he's bout to cry later
3/10
yeah faggets like you and the insane clown pussies do kill rap
why you gotta go an fuck wit the frontliner thats lyrical straped
4/10
you straight outta Arizona so you probably used to the heat
after this battle you should rep ur record and show RB ur used to defeat
4/10
AFI took this with hardher hitting punches and i felt that his verse was better all around except for the structure
Tha Return you have alota shit to work on like wording your punches so that they hit harder...your structure is fine but thats the only thing that you got working for you
v/afi
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