5 bars/10 lines..
Same house rules..
After you..
Goodluck..
kaotic~theory
Talksick
5 bars/10 lines..
Same house rules..
After you..
Goodluck..
checkin in
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Checkin.. Drop ya verse, I'll have mine up within 5 seconds if I'm online still.. It's done..
i hav'nt text battled in over a month but here it goes
it's the wack lines and vocab that TS tosses..
the rec in his sig stands for 7 wins & 49 losses..
and in this battle talksick got me that board..
im'a slap this newb all the way back to rap-board..
this cat had no real ryming scheme see-its-gone..
my punches giving this kid diseases like those from vietnom..
leave this site be gone,u weird kid who's not dope..
my ill-ness has this weak kid stuttering like the pope..
your rymes are sinking and mine will continue to float ..
you couldn't climb you way back in this battle if i threw u a rope..
done..
•Think your 'sick', you can't 'Talk' n you know it G..
•Please, your punches 'land soft' like your 'poetry'!!*
•I'm swingin fists of fury, got this bitch to fear me..
•His whole dream of makin it big, it's just a 'theory'!!*
•Fuckin 'kaotic' as I 'tare names', this ain't fair game..
•I'm 'throwin him around' like 'Paper Airplanes'!!*
•This 'trash' I'll 'murder' like a 'hick in black turf'..
•And your whole ego is about as 'big' as that 'smurf'!!*
•'Bars aren't safe', you'd have better luck in 'prison'..
•I 'catch your eyes' leavin ya wit 'Corrupted Visions'!!*
i will probably loose this one do to me not text battlin that much anymore
so yeah
uppin number 1
Uppin^^ Don't sleep on this whatever you do, I hate sleepers..
Here's the Break Down
Punches and Personals-Tie, Both came nice and avergae...........witty lines by both MCs...............
Flow and Structure-Go to Talksick...........better read and structure.........
Vocab and wordplay-Talksick...................juss more witt and better choice of vocabulary............
SO the break down is punches and personals didn't win this.............witt, flow, and structure won it.......................Talksick took these categories.................
Vote=Talksick
Thx for tha vote........ Can we get some more????^^^^
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Uppin numba 4.. (God damnit you people sleep!!!!!)
nmber 2
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Talksick:
•Think your 'sick', you can't 'Talk' n you know it G..
•Please, your punches 'land soft' like your 'poetry'!!*
^hmmm...decent...just because it's a personal...
•I'm swingin fists of fury, got this bitch to fear me..
•His whole dream of makin it big, it's just a 'theory'!!*
^a personal...didn't really like it tho...
•Fuckin 'kaotic' as I 'tare names', this ain't fair game..
•I'm 'throwin him around' like 'Paper Airplanes'!!*
^It started off good...but then the airplanes concept...nah...too predictable...
•This 'trash' I'll 'murder' like a 'hick in black turf'..
•And your whole ego is about as 'big' as that 'smurf'!!*
^nah...
•'Bars aren't safe', you'd have better luck in 'prison'..
•I 'catch your eyes' leavin ya wit 'Corrupted Visions'!!*
^hmmm...a personal...but overall...nah...
Kaotic~Theory:
t's the wack lines and vocab that TS tosses..
the rec in his sig stands for 7 wins & 49 losses..
^nah...not feelin' it...I can understand that you tried to play off his signature record...but this wans't very effective
and in this battle talksick got me that board..
im'a slap this newb all the way back to rap-board..
^hmmm...nah...
this cat had no real ryming scheme see-its-gone..
my punches giving this kid diseases like those from vietnom..
^nah man...sick~vietnam concepts have been used way too many times...come creative
leave this site be gone,u weird kid who's not dope..
my ill-ness has this weak kid stuttering like the pope..
^meh...nah
your rymes are sinking and mine will continue to float ..
you couldn't climb you way back in this battle if i threw u a rope..
^atleast this had some wordplay...but not great...keep workin' at it...
Overall: - Vote Talksick. All around better battle verse. Kaotic...ders potential...just keep workin' at it and you'll get better. Talksick...try and stay away from obvious concepts. Do some real creative stuff...a predictable punch lines for a minute...an original one lives a lot longer.
pz. god bless.
- T-West.
keatic had a much better flow and some aight punches but he aint let off no good personals.talksick had good personals and much harder punches and he also had a good flow and exceptional wordplay.
v-talkslick
Last uppin^^
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