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A.i
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check check. 14 good?
Last edited by Nahlidge; July 24th, 2004 at 01:50 PM
A.i
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I ain’t buying this shit…no way in hell this could fucking be
That scholars spend lifetimes looking for Nahlidge…
…and find an overweight textcee
That’s depressing to me, how even wackness outclass ‘lidge
Ever since his Train of Thought…
…derailed on the Write of Passage
I bash ribs and slash kids…this battle’s like your crew, slut
‘cuz forget A I…now it’s the lid of your coffin that’s shut
Nah sucks… ‘cuz this shit poor faggot’s often misleading
Like when Nah brings up finance, he’s talking inbreeding
Leave him bleeding…because Nahlidge rides dick, hence...
Why he was modded…
…and Feeble’s voice has dropped three octaves since
Fucking kid battle me? He’s too scared…bitch never could
‘cuz Nah can’t deal with his panic attacks…like L.A hoods
Nah’s never good…just a fool who can’t even rap tough
LLL mod…?
…shit, Feeble won’t even let you do the match-ups
Imma take 2 lines for this fuck .. & sum up his whole package
Simple ass rhyme scheme, 14 lines .. & only 1 was above average
Which leaves 13 lines of wackness, & shit that left me guessing
& enough slack 2 waste 4 lines .. Just to say ur a wack textcee
Nah`s the next best thing, While Metres` chance is growin` thinner
Rat in ur avvy? Proves he can`t pop woods
.................................................. .. He only fuckin` w/ Splinters
I`m the center of attention, & about to leave you denied slut
Cuz Meters ain`t meant shit, Since Nah hit the Mile High Club
U dried up, & it don`t help that you got a face full of crap
Cuz it seems Mets just can`t win
.................................................. ... In baseball or rap
Nah`s got Met on the ride of his life, leavin` him devoured
But if I decided to park in
................... Meters only cost a couple quarters an hour
Metres ain`t good at gettin` shit started, he needin` a pre-fix
So Nah ain`t just gonna son this cat
................................ Imma moon him to and form an eclipse
A.i
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Meh, decent shit.
Meters came okay.
Some decent lines, some wack lines.
Nahlidge came with some better punches though.
Meters just wasn't as witty.
V/Nah
I`m the center of attention, & about to leave you denied slut
Cuz Meters ain`t meant shit, Since Nah hit the Mile High Club
*dead*
V/ Nahlidge
I ain’t buying this shit…no way in hell this could fucking be
That scholars spend lifetimes looking for Nahlidge…
…and find an overweight textcee
---eh, almost
That’s depressing to me, how even wackness outclass ‘lidge
Ever since his Train of Thought…
…derailed on the Write of Passage
---derailed=no...as for the personal...not bad
I bash ribs and slash kids…this battle’s like your crew, slut
‘cuz forget A I…now it’s the lid of your coffin that’s shut
---nah
Nah sucks… ‘cuz this shit poor faggot’s often misleading
Like when Nah brings up finance, he’s talking inbreeding
---haha
Leave him bleeding…because Nahlidge rides dick, hence...
Why he was modded…
…and Feeble’s voice has dropped three octaves since
---pretty ok
Fucking kid battle me? He’s too scared…bitch never could
‘cuz Nah can’t deal with his panic attacks…like L.A hoods
---eh...not feelin
Nah’s never good…just a fool who can’t even rap tough
LLL mod…?
…shit, Feeble won’t even let you do the match-ups
---weak
Imma take 2 lines for this fuck .. & sum up his whole package
Simple ass rhyme scheme, 14 lines .. & only 1 was above average
---nope
Which leaves 13 lines of wackness, & shit that left me guessing
& enough slack 2 waste 4 lines .. Just to say ur a wack textcee
---eh, this was pretty bad...wack i'd say
Nah`s the next best thing, While Metres` chance is growin` thinner
Rat in ur avvy? Proves he can`t pop woods
.................................................. .. He only fuckin` w/ Splinters
---nah
I`m the center of attention, & about to leave you denied slut
Cuz Meters ain`t meant shit, Since Nah hit the Mile High Club
---ok
U dried up, & it don`t help that you got a face full of crap
Cuz it seems Mets just can`t win
.................................................. ... In baseball or rap
---ok, simple name plays though.
Nah`s got Met on the ride of his life, leavin` him devoured
But if I decided to park in
................... Meters only cost a couple quarters an hour
---eh, not to my liking
Metres ain`t good at gettin` shit started, he needin` a pre-fix
So Nah ain`t just gonna son this cat
................................ Imma moon him to and form an eclipse
---almost
overall...decent at best....but what i've noticed from nah is that
he mostly throws only name plays, which gets boring after
a while...and the first four lines were not good at all...meters
came with more variation in his punches...harder personals
so he wins...
V.Meters
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around a call but when I pick up I don't know what to say"
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I ain’t buying this shit…no way in hell this could fucking be
That scholars spend lifetimes looking for Nahlidge…
…and find an overweight textcee
lol... this was a jaw dropper 9/10
That’s depressing to me, how even wackness outclass ‘lidge
Ever since his Train of Thought…
…derailed on the Write of Passage
even though he's in the crew Train - derail shit is too played, 2/10
I bash ribs and slash kids…this battle’s like your crew, slut
‘cuz forget A I…now it’s the lid of your coffin that’s shut
very creative, coffin -lid thing eh... 7/1-
Nah sucks… ‘cuz this shit poor faggot’s often misleading
Like when Nah brings up finance, he’s talking inbreeding
...nahhhhhh not bad, just couldnt get that hump to dope 6/10
Leave him bleeding…because Nahlidge rides dick, hence...
Why he was modded…
…and Feeble’s voice has dropped three octaves since
this was aight 6/10
Fucking kid battle me? He’s too scared…bitch never could
‘cuz Nah can’t deal with his panic attacks…like L.A hoods
Wasn't feelin this 4/10
Nah’s never good…just a fool who can’t even rap tough
LLL mod…?
…shit, Feeble won’t even let you do the match-ups
weak... specially cuz he is doin the match ups 3/10
Nahlidge
Imma take 2 lines for this fuck .. & sum up his whole package
Simple ass rhyme scheme, 14 lines .. & only 1 was above average
Which leaves 13 lines of wackness, & shit that left me guessing
& enough slack 2 waste 4 lines .. Just to say ur a wack textcee
that whole shit was ill... 9.5/10, for the whole shit
Nah`s the next best thing, While Metres` chance is growin` thinner
Rat in ur avvy? Proves he can`t pop woods
.................................................. .. He only fuckin` w/ Splinters
lol... creative, ninja turtle ish is ehhh but nice flip... 6/10
I`m the center of attention, & about to leave you denied slut
Cuz Meters ain`t meant shit, Since Nah hit the Mile High Club
damn... 9/10
U dried up, & it don`t help that you got a face full of crap
Cuz it seems Mets just can`t win
.................................................. ... In baseball or rap
that shit kinda sealed it for me... 10/10
Nah`s got Met on the ride of his life, leavin` him devoured
But if I decided to park in
................... Meters only cost a couple quarters an hour
this was icing here... too creative and aimed 9/10
Metres ain`t good at gettin` shit started, he needin` a pre-fix
So Nah ain`t just gonna son this cat
................................ Imma moon him to and form an eclipse
the closer was bleh 6/10
overall Nah fuckin murked this week
while Metres came aight. Metres this
obviously wasn't your best work. I think
ur best shit was with Quill but still nice.
Nah just came too nice.
v/ Nah
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I gotta agree with Savir on this one......I thought that Metres came a bit harder in this one. I think Nah just started getting repetative and made me lose intrest....
Vote - Metres
I thought the finance line took it for me... nah kind of fed-ish the first two bars and didn't do much with them, then had some ok nameplays, some eh ones... not much really. and his avy ain't really a rat =/
v/ meters
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Heh, nice battle. Metres came with some dope concepts, but others I wasn't really feeling. Nahlidge came pretty dope all the way through. Mile High Club line edged this in Nahlidge's favor.
Vote: Nahlidge
Hit up my battle
Sorry but, I can't believe Metres even got any votes.
Damn Nah, first time peepin a text battle from you and well you impressed me. You didn't come DAMN dope, but decent nonetheless. I thought you played on his name a bit too much but then the punch made me say nevermind. Metres, first bar could have been dope, but wording was horrid. Actually, both of your wording wasn't great.
Best lines....
"Leave him bleeding…because Nahlidge rides dick, hence...
Why he was modded…
…and Feeble’s voice has dropped three octaves since"
Nahlidge....
Metres ain`t good at gettin` shit started, he needin` a pre-fix
So Nah ain`t just gonna son this cat
................................ Imma moon him to and form an eclipse
Cuz Meters ain`t meant shit, Since Nah hit the Mile High Club
U dried up, & it don`t help that you got a face full of crap
Cuz it seems Mets just can`t win
.................................................. ... In baseball or rap
shit was fiyah.....
Vote: Nahlidge
sry mets, i just didn't feel any of your lines really.
Blah@too many nameplays. What if the man knows nothing about Meters? He doesn't have to dig up information on the dude...
Anyway..
Nahlidge came harder, better wording, wit, personals, blah blah blah.
Was feeling the Mile High Club & so on...
Your verse was above par.
Meters didn't come as bad as everyone thought. He used a variety of punches and personals but none hit as hard as Nah's...its the only reason Nahlidge gets my vote.
Vote-Nah
Metres
I ain’t buying this shit…no way in hell this could fucking be
That scholars spend lifetimes looking for Nahlidge…
…and find an overweight textcee
[haha this was cool, doesnt seem like an opener tho]
That’s depressing to me, how even wackness outclass ‘lidge
Ever since his Train of Thought…
…derailed on the Write of Passage
[forced rhyme .. played concept]
I bash ribs and slash kids…this battle’s like your crew, slut
‘cuz forget A I…now it’s the lid of your coffin that’s shut
[ehh ... this is decent]
Nah sucks… ‘cuz this shit poor faggot’s often misleading
Like when Nah brings up finance, he’s talking inbreeding
[if thats fine-aunts, its dope wordplay but shitty shitty wording]
Leave him bleeding…because Nahlidge rides dick, hence...
Why he was modded…
…and Feeble’s voice has dropped three octaves since
[lol ... dont know if its true personally but i can guess & say this was pretty cool]
Fucking kid battle me? He’s too scared…bitch never could
‘cuz Nah can’t deal with his panic attacks…like L.A hoods
[blah blah.]
Nah’s never good…just a fool who can’t even rap tough
LLL mod…?
…shit, Feeble won’t even let you do the match-ups
[okay, alright way to end it]
Imma take 2 lines for this fuck .. & sum up his whole package
Simple ass rhyme scheme, 14 lines .. & only 1 was above average
Which leaves 13 lines of wackness, & shit that left me guessing
& enough slack 2 waste 4 lines .. Just to say ur a wack textcee
[everyone else thought this was dope but first off 'imma take 2 lines' you took four. second off it was cheesey as hell third it wasn't done right. i guess the concept of doing it was ill but it itself just wasnt at all, honestly]
Nah`s the next best thing, While Metres` chance is growin` thinner
Rat in ur avvy? Proves he can`t pop woods
.................................................. .. He only fuckin` w/ Splinters
[If Splinters is a member or something i dont get this is dope, if not boo]
I`m the center of attention, & about to leave you denied slut
Cuz Meters ain`t meant shit, Since Nah hit the Mile High Club
[dope]
U dried up, & it don`t help that you got a face full of crap
Cuz it seems Mets just can`t win
.................................................. ... In baseball or rap
[i guess thats not played on metres, but this sucked balls & coulda been so much better]
Nah`s got Met on the ride of his life, leavin` him devoured
But if I decided to park in
................... Meters only cost a couple quarters an hour
[decided to park in doesnt make sense at all but the concept was kewl]
Metres ain`t good at gettin` shit started, he needin` a pre-fix
So Nah ain`t just gonna son this cat
................................ Imma moon him to and form an eclipse
[badly worded, decent closer]
Umm obviously my votes are always against the grain because i'm from a different site .. but first off i hate that 3 line style you guys use because it basically shows you can fucking flow into two lines, & personally i think its superannoying. anyways i thought both of you had overall below average wording .. the shit everyone thought was dope from 'nah i've seen done before and a lot better but the same went with metres. overall im going with metres just because his was worded better, wittier and more original to me
v. Met
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