Battles will be between 10-20 lines.
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Verses due Friday by 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
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Battles will be between 10-20 lines.
Check In`s due by Wednesday.
Verses due Friday by 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Everyone must have links to 4 battles they voted on.
A.i
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hi wanna go the full 20?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...11#post1567911
Last edited by Erupt; July 23rd, 2004 at 12:44 PM
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Sure..
com you write for hours, but count up ya bearable rhymes
and it'd take a legion of masseuses. . to scratch all ya terrible lines
kick com's ass with ease, leave the site smothered with you
& im more than meets his eye. . cuz i got another fist too
com's a faggot englishman, when he's spitting he struts
comedianishigh: my girls honry, doesnt realize the bitch is a slut
coms stepping on my territory, but im the hottest and ..
i got a sign that describes you:
trespassers will be shot.. survivors will be shot again
i won't say ya not a friend, but u aint a veteran dude
cuz u taught me how to battle but im better than you
I really love your lines man... can't stop smiling while I read
Coz feebles verses leave me standing... at the top of the league
You're fifteen going on thirty... your undefeated sig's a luxury
Feebles right at the top of his game.....
....................................... and the bitch still looks up to me...
Don't give a fuck if you're opposing me... coz bitch you lack the skill...
...and the strength to keep me down..... like a belemics last meal...
Fucked this fag so many times in real life I'm buying rubbers
And I'll be hitting this bitch for years... like elderly lovers
I see your happy to fight me... I'll fucking bury your hype
Coz you're like Sony,,, you know.... the average stereotype....
Last edited by Erupt; July 23rd, 2004 at 09:56 AM Reason: deleting 10 lines to keep it fair
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rofl .. wtf are you doing com. you need to edit out like 10 lines
^I didnt even realise he'd only dropped 10... i just saw his name as the last post came in and dropped my verse..... oh well.. at least no one has voted yet.... good luck feeble
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FEEB
com you write for hours, but count up ya bearable rhymes
and it'd take a legion of masseuses. . to scratch all ya terrible lines
reaching..... and didn't hit
kick com's ass with ease, leave the site smothered with you
& im more than meets his eye. . cuz i got another fist too
ok mr. transformer.... lol decent
com's a faggot englishman, when he's spitting he struts
comedianishigh: my girls honry, doesnt realize the bitch is a slut
can we say typo? wtf Feebs... wack line too
coms stepping on my territory, but im the hottest and ..
i got a sign that describes you:
trespassers will be shot.. survivors will be shot again
omg. wack, since you bit a friggin sign you post on your backyard gate
i won't say ya not a friend, but u aint a veteran dude
cuz u taught me how to battle but im better than you
fuckin wack. wtf?! who are you and what did you do with Feeble?
COM
I really love your lines man... can't stop smiling while I read
Coz feebles verses leave me standing... at the top of the league
ok...
You're fifteen going on thirty... your undefeated sig's a luxury
Feebles right at the top of his game.....
....................................... and the bitch still looks up to me...
nice.
Don't give a fuck if you're opposing me... coz bitch you lack the skill...
...and the strength to keep me down..... like a belemics last meal...
so he's throwing you up? eh....
Fucked this fag so many times in real life I'm buying rubbers
And I'll be hitting this bitch for years... like elderly lovers
decent, chuckled at this one
I see your happy to fight me... I'll fucking bury your hype
Coz you're like Sony,,, you know.... the average stereotype....
sweet
vote - Com
Feeble wtf happened? It's like you had someone type up your verse while you were chilin on the beach or somthin... huh
Yeah... I'm with $pit. Although COM had a lot of pretty bleh lines, that he got rid of... wish you would have got back the elderly lovers line cuz I thought it sucked. Still, the first two lines were enough to take this one... Feebs didn't seem like he was trying. Didn't really put much of an effort at RBL either =/
Last Word
I must last... word
i am dissapointed in feebs verse as well
i can tell he rushed that verse
and its safe to say that Com took advantage
the luxury line was decent and the closer / sterotype line was creative
everything else was just average...
easy vote/
Com
Word.
Com: B-
Feeble: D
Nothing special fellas.
V/Com
com you write for hours, but count up ya bearable rhymes
and it'd take a legion of masseuses. . to scratch all ya terrible lines
---nope
kick com's ass with ease, leave the site smothered with you
& im more than meets his eye. . cuz i got another fist too
---ok, not great or too hard though
com's a faggot englishman, when he's spitting he struts
comedianishigh: my girls honry, doesnt realize the bitch is a slut
---eh, no
coms stepping on my territory, but im the hottest and ..
i got a sign that describes you:
trespassers will be shot.. survivors will be shot again
---wack
i won't say ya not a friend, but u aint a veteran dude
cuz u taught me how to battle but im better than you
---weak
not a good verse, a bunch of boring concepts.
I really love your lines man... can't stop smiling while I read
Coz feebles verses leave me standing... at the top of the league
---ok, nothing great
You're fifteen going on thirty... your undefeated sig's a luxury
Feebles right at the top of his game.....
....................................... and the bitch still looks up to me...
---nope
Don't give a fuck if you're opposing me... coz bitch you lack the skill...
...and the strength to keep me down..... like a belemics last meal...
---no no no
Fucked this fag so many times in real life I'm buying rubbers
And I'll be hitting this bitch for years... like elderly lovers
---weak
I see your happy to fight me... I'll fucking bury your hype
Coz you're like Sony,,, you know.... the average stereotype....
---almost
very bad battle, both used horrible concepts....the verses
were boring on both ends...im going with com...seeing as
feeble had wack lines...the survivors shot was wack, the
closer was wack....com just wasnt good, but no as wack...
V.Com
"And I feel like an idiot working my day
around a call but when I pick up I don't know what to say"
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^you can give constructive criticisim without tryna be degrading.... unless you'd want me to do that in your battle too of course....
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Feeble seemed average to me in this one while Com had a few above average punches, so I gotta go with Com. I think both could have done better though....
Vote - Com
Vote - Com
Feeble slaced this week .. Badly .. And it was easy to see .. Com out-did him line for line I thought on this .. Was rather an easy vote .. What happened to Feeble?
Edit:And oh yea .. Com loses a vote for postin` again after he dropped his verse
A.i
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