Tourn vs God

[tourn]

10 lines..
no hate,crew,d/r,unexplained votes
due by 10 tonight
g'luck homie

[God.]

Checkin' in... Good luck, tourn

[tourn]

Our Father, who art in heaven hallowed be thy Name
thy kingdom come...and thy will be done......once i RIP this lame
your games the same as usual..even ya families seein how
i'll kill your vet status..and dog ya pedigree to puppy chow
ya been crossed out....maybe forgotten or whats worse is
everyone knows gods been tortured enough...we've read his verses
off the name though....ima forget he shows and sleep on my text
cause even a modest cat wants dream on what's the best....
a closure to ya rest...and you wont question why we met
cause i faced ya worst enemy and he was hell with regrets

[God.]

I need an extension till tommorow. Sorry for the delay.

[God.]

Aight, check it
I'm droppin' this fool, takin' your wack teen ass to lyrical school
Wanna take my divine ability to rule, u lack the intellectual tools
I'm the true playa, you're just a hater thinkin' he can really rhyme
Nigga, u couldn't mimic my skills even if u were trained as a mime!
U proud of ur verse, even though it's fulled of played jokes on God
But it's okay, ur embarrased enough, u won't get banned by a mod
Ur names fits ur career, cause u'll never be in the last 2 of a tourney
Keepin' those losses under ur belt is the only way you're earnin', B!
You'll never get fame or appreciation here, spittin' those rhymes^^
Cause son, even if I printed ur verse out, I still wouldn't feel ur lines
Later

*Fuckin' writers block*

[_Ralkavelli_]

Tourn:

Our Father, who art in heaven hallowed be thy Name
thy kingdom come...and thy will be done......once i RIP this lame
weak opener...
your games the same as usual..even ya families seein how
i'll kill your vet status..and dog ya pedigree to puppy chow
ok...
ya been crossed out....maybe forgotten or whats worse is
everyone knows gods been tortured enough...we've read his verses
Pretty good...but why would God have been tortured enough because of US reading his verses? Wait nm...kinda hard to figure out but I got it
off the name though....ima forget he shows and sleep on my text
cause even a modest cat wants dream on what's the best....
Alright, no punch tho...
a closure to ya rest...and you wont question why we met
cause i faced ya worst enemy and he was hell with regrets
weak closer...

God:

I'm droppin' this fool, takin' your wack teen ass to lyrical school
Wanna take my divine ability to rule, u lack the intellectual tools
Strong opener...tech...
I'm the true playa, you're just a hater thinkin' he can really rhyme
Nigga, u couldn't mimic my skills even if u were trained as a mime!
Excellent punch!! lol...funny shit...
U proud of ur verse, even though it's fulled of played jokes on God
But it's okay, ur embarrased enough, u won't get banned by a mod
Another hard punch...
Ur names fits ur career, cause u'll never be in the last 2 of a tourney
Keepin' those losses under ur belt is the only way you're earnin', B!
weak...
You'll never get fame or appreciation here, spittin' those rhymes^^
Cause son, even if I printed ur verse out, I still wouldn't feel ur lines
good closer...

I donno what to really say, Go said he was havin some writers block and still won, lol. God basically won with his good punches, also structure was great.Tourn...You gotta use better punches and stay away from personals as they were weak and kinda played/boring to read. Gods verse actually made me laugh...You just gotta elevate and make your punches more clever and witty.
Props to both...kinda weak, but O.K. battle...

V/GOD........

[tourn]

1-0....ha and he fed off my verse...not taken anything from it though..good shit

[God.]

Uppin #1

[kris]

Tourn- overall u didnt have much in your verse man..you had like 4 alright lines..your opener and closer were really really weak..your flow was good, and your structure was good, but you lacked majorly in punches and personals 5.9

God- you did alright in this man..your flow was still intact, and your structure was good also man.your punches and personals were not that strong but they were ok, overall not the best from you but ok. 7.2

V/GOd

PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR AND PUT IN A HONEST VOTE IN THE BATTLE IN MY SIG

[Exculptifactoriusness]

Hit this up now

Anyways, God Posted a bit late, and tourn posted a bit wack. Well actually a lot wack. He didnt have any good punches that hit god or did anything to hurt him in any way. Personals, well, you did have the whole fucking prayers line thats played to death. Flow was off and structure was fine.

God had a semi decent verse. he said he had writers block but i never beleive when people say it. Anyways, punches were decent. personals the same. Flow was off a bit and structure was regular and good. Just work on punches if you do have blockage.

V/God

Hit that link up now.

[God.]

LOL.. U never believe it? ROFL... You know firsthand I can come much better than that, Clipsy. and LOL at u gettin' nominated for legends... ROFL

Uppin #2

[kris]

hey god can u please return the favor and put in a honest vote in the battle in my sig

[J.K.O]

easy vote right here

god-aint your best but still good made me laugh had some reall good punches in there structure was good flow was excellenthad some problems though but it was still very good

tourn- your verse was good but not good enough against god but it flowed good some decent punches just wasnt good enough

punches: god,his punches were hittin harder
flow: god,i was feelin his better
personals: didnt see anything with personals so neither tie
structure: tie to but if i would choose it would be god
opener: god tourn your opener sucked
closer: im givin it to god made me laugh more
which verse: i liked god's verse better he had stronger punches that flowed good and were funny

vote: God

hit this up please with honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=138032

thanks

[God.]

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[God.]

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