Verses by Friday, 11:59 PM eastern.
check in by wednesday ..
10-20 lines, agree on in check in
oh & .. Try to KO your opponent.
Verses by Friday, 11:59 PM eastern.
check in by wednesday ..
10-20 lines, agree on in check in
oh & .. Try to KO your opponent.
Last edited by Erupt; June 30th, 2004 at 04:45 AM
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Let's do 12
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
I'll make it easy for this fag... show him what ripping the script is
So take the weight off your feet coz I'm good at picking up bitches
Checked your score 10 points?.... I'll take them now... I'm not bluffing
So I'll give this bitch everything and leave the fuck with nuthin...
Fucka shits himself in bed... coz this verse he's soon to read
Breth can't keep a clean sheet... in the fuckin junior league...
So believe what you read... he concedes that dates are costly
So a woman took him out the last time he battled Hottie....
Been helping out the juniors... give up rap and help the faded..
So do your fucking job... and keep the lame shit moderated...
I'm far too underestimated... born to kill what these herbs say
You couldn't shoot my gift If I gave you a gun for your birthday..
So fuck what your words say... I'm here to smother your rights
Bitch disses me in his verse... but uses my lines on other sites...
Read my first four lines in this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=132111
Now read Brethrens 9th and 10th lines in this one....
http://www.rapsearch.com/board/t24086.html
and its all saved and people on both RS(the site you dropped on)
and RB have seen it... and will confirm so if you delete it...... lmfao..
i mean c'mon... using MY LINES to win YOUR battles?
...owned
Last edited by Erupt; July 1st, 2004 at 02:18 PM Reason: correcting link
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btw NO FEEDING
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Good Job Com... with that verse you just choosin second...
I did use your punches there... and I still have a losing record
You a veteran kid... it's funny when I'm better than him
Once Gen accepted you I thought they'd let anyone in
You said that I'll win... so please quit tryin to beef
Com's a gift from heaven? I'mma be sure to find the reciept
You blinded and weak... but really god knows me
Give me a show... I give you drugs and watch Com OD
Calm down kid... I need to slap this bitch in his place
Com's pacafist?
Right after I pacafist to his face...
This kid is hurryin me... the way this bitch is worryin deep
Thought he had this shit on lock... it was only insecurities
EDIT: \/\/\/\/... the OD line's been used before, I don't give a fuck... I don't go through checking all of your battles to see which punches are played and which have been used already guy
Last edited by Brethren; July 1st, 2004 at 03:05 PM
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
OMG he just bit AGAIN can anyone remember that COM OD line from when I battled Evolve... coz I sure as hell can,,,,,,,,,, fuck it.. it can slide.. let the votes start
Edit: OMG now he has edited it out
^^to brethrens edit... how the FUCK can it be played when I am the ONLY COM??? the setup and whole line are practically identical....
Last edited by Erupt; July 1st, 2004 at 03:08 PM
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lol @ no feeding. should have made that more clear maybe.
com: i read your verse really quickly at first, and i was like "wow this sucks." but then i read it again, and it doesn't.
"
So believe what you read... he concedes that dates are costly
So a woman took him out the last time he battled Hottie...."
This was my favorite line from your verse, had wordplay and was a hard hitting personal. nice. rest of your verse was pretty consistent as well, nothing amazing but nothing bad. straight through, nice personals and hit him.
breth: basically fed the whole verse. opener was ok, but its not like you bit the whole verse, so thats mostly you that sucked it up. receipt line was pretty nice, closer was pretty nice. boo @ pacafist, who hasn't done that in actual rap? you also had some shaky set ups that had nothing to do with the punches.
hmm.. somewhat close, but v/com for consistency, because breth fed and still didn't come that hot.
Last Word
I must last... word
Com's a gift from heaven? I'mma be sure to find the reciept
RECYCLED, BAN HIM
used the same line on me last week in Jr, got top ten punch #1 with it! LMFAO!!!!!!!!!
*edit* here's the link for you lazy fucks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=135273
Vote - COM
since Breth is a recycler/biter/bitch
JESUS can't you guys write your own shit? Goddamn.....
Last edited by $pitacular; July 1st, 2004 at 03:12 PM
^OMG
AND he bit my lines on another site.. AND he bit Evolves in this battle THEN deleted it.... jesus breth... your first line in this battle was pretty dope... why'd you have to bite and recycle ... you can obviously write..... tut tut.... I'm ashamed of you.....
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Breth should die... we can bury him next to Av & Hottie
Breth HAS to feed...
That's just a big bitch move to accuse him of biting...
And then say..."no feeding".
Meaning, if he defends himself (which anyone would want to do)...
He's "feeding".
Bullshit, that's a set up, kids, don't fall for it.
Aside from that, whatever.
I'm really getting sick of peeps (and I'm not being specific towards anyone) telling me my shit is half-assed, played, weak, blah, blah, blah...
When the ONE thing NO ONE has ever been able to accuse me of is biting.
Yet, all the "dope" heads, all the "talent" around here seems to be getting busted left and right.
I'll tell you what...
My shit, in your eyes, may not be heavy, hard, or hip hop...
But at least it isn't "borrowed", motherfuckers.
Peace
Vote: Com, he versed better.
My original vote would go to Brethren easily .. But knowin` that he re-used a line from last week .. And stole a line frome Evolve Com ends up with the vote .. Re-Usin` that line alone would have left Com with my vote anyway .. But then stealin` an Evolve line? Come on man .. You lose
Vote - Com
A.i
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*Click one of ^those to check out my music and shit
1. no feeding is an official rule of LLLOriginally Posted by Born To Kill
2.this guy ADMITTED TO ME on aim he bit my lines as he had nothing else to write....
3. did you actually click the links?
4.do you think anyone should be allowed to turn "biting" to their advantage in a battle and if so why? c.mon born if this had happened to you the way you go on about biting then you would have done the same... i could have simply went running to a mod and had him banned but i even told him on aim I would let him off.. as his biting practically gifts me the battle anyway
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I hear ya, dude...
I was just pissed cuz, yet again, another head is caught doing some bullshit.
Didn't mean to take it out on you.
Peace, Compton
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