Verses by Friday, 11:59 PM eastern.
check in by wednesday ..
10-20 lines, agree on in check in
oh & .. Try to KO your opponent.
Verses by Friday, 11:59 PM eastern.
check in by wednesday ..
10-20 lines, agree on in check in
oh & .. Try to KO your opponent.
Last edited by God.; July 4th, 2004 at 10:03 PM
Last edited by Token; July 5th, 2004 at 02:01 AM
mic check 1-2...
fuck posers like you - your in for a deep sonnin G
didn't I tell you newbies there's only room for one of me?
just another fake head thinkin he's dope but aint made no statements
you only know the streets, since I slammed your head in the pavement
i'ma come in swingin harder than you'll ever witness
cuz my punches make enough connections to put DSL outta business
ain't lost a battle yet - and i'm damn sure i'm taking this
I mean, I read some of your battles, and became a fuckin atheist
ur terrible - just quit text for the love of Heavens
I mean, your ass makes me wanna take God's Message out of legends
you aint never made no accomplishments - as u beckoned and fell
but tonight you make the first man to ever travel from Heaven to hell
what are u gonna do when i drive you straight into the grave route
Sure you can save others.... but who the FUCKS gonna save you?
Onto a more serious note - i should prolly begin to repent, G
cuz if you're The Next Level , suicides gettin quite friendly
bite me some more Toke... better edit that shit quick LOL check my battle in Jr, I posted first sucka
actually, it a different concept, but we both used pavement
great minds think like mine....
Aight, check it...
Once, that word Token meant somethin' to all the people. Didn't it?
Then the invention of MetroCards came out and he ain't worth shit
Token started his career out bitched, and now he's givin' free licks
All RB was used to the same old wackness, well, here's The Remix
He's too poor to afford the tapes, so he's creatin' his own self-help
Every time he logs on he reads his User Text, for his mental health
The Remix is gayer then ever, he's a prostitute and a cyber whore
Slipped out of their AIM session when $pit said "bite me some more"
Had a brief spell in RB's limelight, cause Token was supermod before
But u faded, changed your name, and who cares about u anymore?
Sweatin' bullets and shells, cause for the first time he needs wordplay
Where's ur net rhymes? Oh yeah, ur Hotbars is on E-Bay's lay-a-way
Tries to help out in I.R. but u can see he constantly forgets the rules
But ask about gay porn, and in his garage you'll see infinite sex tools
Sendin' his head in cycles, he'll get appreciation when his heads spin
Cause u know there's tons of fakestas lovin' revoultion, like car rims
Later
Whatchu smokin Spit?
The only similarity in the lines is the word pavement which was in the middle of one of your lines.
lol dork.
fuck posers like you - your in for a deep sonnin G
didn't I tell you newbies there's only room for one of me?
---coo
just another fake head thinkin he's dope but aint made no statements
you only know the streets, since I slammed your head in the pavement
---meh
i'ma come in swingin harder than you'll ever witness
cuz my punches make enough connections to put DSL outta business
---eh..ok
ain't lost a battle yet - and i'm damn sure i'm taking this
I mean, I read some of your battles, and became a fuckin atheist
---bleh.
ur terrible - just quit text for the love of Heavens
I mean, your ass makes me wanna take God's Message out of legends
---haha..
you aint never made no accomplishments - as u beckoned and fell
but tonight you make the first man to ever travel from Heaven to hell
---meh
what are u gonna do when i drive you straight into the grave route
Sure you can save others.... but who the FUCKS gonna save you?
---no
Onto a more serious note - i should prolly begin to repent, G
cuz if you're The Next Level , suicides gettin quite friendly
---eh.
Once, that word Token meant somethin' to all the people. Didn't it?
Then the invention of MetroCards came out and he ain't worth shit
---horrible worded punch...had potential..but this sucked..
Token started his career out bitched, and now he's givin' free licks
All RB was used to the same old wackness, well, here's The Remix
---ok
He's too poor to afford the tapes, so he's creatin' his own self-help
Every time he logs on he reads his User Text, for his mental health
---eh
The Remix is gayer then ever, he's a prostitute and a cyber whore
Slipped out of their AIM session when $pit said "bite me some more"
---ok
Had a brief spell in RB's limelight, cause Token was supermod before
But u faded, changed your name, and who cares about u anymore?
---boring
Sweatin' bullets and shells, cause for the first time he needs wordplay
Where's ur net rhymes? Oh yeah, ur Hotbars is on E-Bay's lay-a-way
---die
Tries to help out in I.R. but u can see he constantly forgets the rules
But ask about gay porn, and in his garage you'll see infinite sex tools
---wow..die again.
Sendin' his head in cycles, he'll get appreciation when his heads spin
Cause u know there's tons of fakestas lovin' revoultion, like car rims
---=/
Token wins...blah.....God coulda not come wack but he fell of hard..
and that centering shit sucks...
V.Tokestress.
"And I feel like an idiot working my day
around a call but when I pick up I don't know what to say"
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V/ Token
Token had the take my shitta outta legends line & the closer, pretty sick shit from him, actually a pretty consistent verse, up to par with Young P's as being verse of the week,
God, ehhh, the center structuring is fuckin gay, totally fucks up the read son, but you still had some interesting lines in there, the section of The Remix lines & bite me some more were pretty good but anything besides that were bland & gay,
Up over the closed
A.i
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Vote - Token
He took this easily .. Quite a few of his lines had me laughin` .. I ain`t think none of his shit was wack .. God had a few nice lines .. But most of them I wasn`t feelin` .. Again a matter of consistency .. And Toke just outdid him badly
A.i
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yep
gonna have to vote token here too
even Good actuall had a couple of lines that werent so bad
but wording hurt you...
toke was more consistent and muore witty..
seen both do better and i hope both do better next week.
anyway...
vote token
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appreciate it.
watch u get screwed out of 5 points...
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