Punchline Prince vs. E-MORTAL

[And Death]

You know the rules (no hate, no crew, etc.)

10 lines

30 mins after check-in

You spit first

[And Death]

Hurry up and drop.

[And Death]

Upping for your verse.

[Punchline Prince]

check

[Punchline Prince]

Took a continued amount of time but i returned 2 the show
and Stop lieing to viewers, cuz the only thing you shootin is free throws
So pick the moment and the section to rumble
Cuz 2 punches ah make ya teeth crumble, and 1 spare will scram u at a mumble
Now examine ya attitude before ya stride in my section
cuz Ill leave you one sided like the bush/gore election
Look at chu,now you need chiropractic correction
And you still cant see me like you suffer focal infection
So I leave you with no love or affection
Cuz ya lyricall spit blows like a bands clarinett section


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Yep! Just a quick spit, nothin serious

[Punchline Prince]

Can you spit now E - Mortal

[And Death]

Everything is bigger in Texas...now I know that's true
Cause I've never seen an herb...quite the size of you
It's sad when even on the net...you get took to school
Line from a taurus horoscope...is ya only quote-a-bull
Do anything you put your mind to...heard that before
Got the wrong idea...remove ya head from the monitor
This here isn't even a battle...it's more like a slugfest
My words are alot to chew...but even harder to digest
We were both born in '87...the similarities stop there
I'm thinkin you're an antichrist...ya don't have a prayer

If you don't get it then don't vote.

[sabotage]

I think it goes without saying that e mortal had a way better put together verse. Punchline prince you should make each line roughly the same length cause otherwise your gonna go off flow. and no1 will feel it. you were kinda played at times too... lil creative... but not much... work on your delivery.. check out the rb help section in text battling... e mortal another well put together verse by you.. i could kinda tell you didnt put much in2 this but i dont blame you at all.. punches and personals were dirty.. i enjoyed reading your verse. you had some pretty creative lines. your structure was good and you flowed well throughout. All i could really give you to work on is vocab.. and that isn't even a big factor at all.

Good battle
props 2 both
hit up my battle
Peace

Vote - E MORTAL

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[Skillz Position]

"the only thing you shootin is free throws"- Jr Writer

[Shawn Mac]

Punchline prince had a couple good lines, but not much more than that, and I think one of the lines you even used in OUR battle,(which by the way, you should up once in a bluemoon)the line was " You still can't see me like you suffer focal infection"
thats pretty much what you said in our battle.. you need to work on creativity and flow, you had some nice lines but the flow threw it way off.. nice battle though.

E-mortal I was really feeling your verse man, like the flow and structure were great, punches were either really funny or kinda on the edge of funny, but good none the less. you had some nice creativity espeacially with the opener Really funny there, you had a nice closer, but not one for the ol' memory banks. overall a good battle from both MC's but I'm pretty sure that E-mortal took this one. He's an MC to whatch out for in the very near future, Punchline prince needs a little work, but I think he's also someone to whatch out for. Props to both.

Peace

oh yeah, I forgot... V/E-mortal

[And Death]

Up #2.

[Exculptifactoriusness]

This was one sided

Punches: Easy decision here...E-mortal got this category because of the texas line and your clsoer. I liked thos elines the best. Punchline Prince, you have to get better with punches, there were hardly none in your verse that hit him well enouhg. Get better with those.

Personals: Again, pretty easy. Emortal had some creative ones in there and puncline did not lol. Personals are vital and they help the v3erse alot. Emortal had them and puncline didnt so emortal gets it becaus ehe had some good lines in there that were personal.

Flow: This was actaslly pretty good from both. Both verse flowed pretty well and were both good is this category. But one thing that seperates this category is that emortal had equal lines. Punchline, you didn thgave equal lines.

Structure: Again, Punchline didnt have equal lines and his structrue was all over the place. Emortal had a tight strujictrue and hgis lines were very equal. Good job with your verse, all around it was very good. Punchline, just elevate andf keep getting better..

V/Emortal

hit up the battle with hottie in my sig please

[Born To Kill]

Yeah, E took this kinda easily.

His format was far better, flowed nicer, and was easier to read.
Prince was all over the place with syllable count and length of lines.
There was really no format at all.
And that "one sided" Bush/Gore election line...
Are you serious? That was about as close as an election as our country's ever had.
They even had, like, what...2-3 recounts because it was so close?
That's bad facts, kid.

Aside from that Prince's punches didn't hit hard.
They were lightened by his need to multi up.
That's just too many and it really...really takes away from your punches.
Punches are suppossed to hurt the opponent more than flow well.
I mean, they're suppossed to do both, but this is battle, think war first, then flow.

E's personals, well executed punches with wit wnd wordplay win this easily.
The format was icing.

Peace

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