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    Thou shall not kill Ft Formula

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...21#post1447121
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=130391
    [Intro]
    ... Thou shall not kill ...

    ... i take that back ...

    ... this once ...

    [Hook]
    (Thou) will hold his weapon close at night , He
    (shall) protect his sons.. his kids and wife,
    (not) to harm but as steps.. his only option to fight
    (kill) the bitch that wants to step up to me alright?

    [Diverged]
    its back to the guns, the killas.. murderas that'll spin to the
    chills.. even tho the heat will make you breathe continuous
    and its the penmanship.. that lets me know to not give a shit
    ive been with hits.. that'll leave your vocal chords withdraw
    the force of the semi auto will scar.. .. the choice will mark
    the end of the same shit that makes you wanna steal my bars
    look the Pistol is cocked.. and im on the verge of splittin ya
    like my name.. Diverged ill make both side start missin ya
    extension was.. to leave the bitch so uplifted with the gifted
    that my rounds u'll make ya shifted... you see me kiddin? nah
    i set it off. blat blat.. send bitches to hell in back with one cap
    bullet cold but the stats say its warmer then the macks track
    "like damn i never knew he had it in him its deep within him"
    look.. im still diverged most underated at RB.. and extendin
    so just don't worry how im writing.. or even whats its about
    because all that shit you talk.. the trigger will carry ya out
    firearms leave ya speechless but still will leave you screamin
    still dreamin? go head pinch ya self...
    ........................................... Im still here whilst you sleepin

    [Hook]
    (Thou) will hold his weapon close at night , He
    (shall) protect his sons.. his kids and wife,
    (not) to harm but as steps.. his only option to fight
    (kill) the bitch that wants to step up to me alright?

    [Formula]
    I`m carrying two burners that Hawk
    Manufactured in Atlanta
    Hammers`ll jam ya
    Let my boys deal w/ the chalk
    Dropping more clips than clumsy hair dressers
    You can keep up the talk
    While the .45 puts you a-head of the lesson
    Literally..
    This is just the way I like it
    I got twins
    That tower tall
    And block arteries like two George Mikan`s
    Shouldn`t have got me hyped up
    `Cause before you touched my wife
    All you was gone get was a knife cut
    But - You`ve crossed the line in the sand
    Brought this person out of me that I ain`t plan
    To release..
    I`m holding nine reasons why you won`t never a man
    Ya spine`s leaking, stain`s on ya sheet`s crease..
    .. All by my hands
    Ya heart quits pumping when the dumping of the beat cease
    Police`s eyes is on a increase
    There`s new a 'formula' of killers on the streets
    But it`s just one
    And dudes - you made me do it
    Taught me how to load the machine gun
    Put 80 through it
    I Hate these bullets
    But i`ve turned to it, never thought I would
    The click of the gun makes me feel good
    You can burn down my home, i`m still in the hood
    The answer to nobodies prayers
    Stuck in my palm
    Now I`ll really kill every track
    They put me on
    Let`s Go.

    [Hook]
    (Thou) will hold his weapon close at night , He
    (shall) protect his sons.. his kids and wife,
    (not) to harm but as steps.. his only option to fight
    (kill) the bitch that wants to step up to me alright?
    Last edited by Masahiko.; June 3rd, 2004 at 07:22 PM
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    Nice piece you whores...
    Yo D I read your drop in AOL as you re-call like I said nice piece..
    Formula str8 drop..nice collab..rhyme scheme was good..nice tone..
    abstract lines unqiue...Form's straucture was ok...little messy..
    that's my only critique..

    peace

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    yo UP... WTF?
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    interesting structure but i hate it. who cares what i think though. umm, finsih your lines each bar. dont continue it on the next line. Nice flow. you did well on this just set it up better and be harder on it. your chorus could have been better though. Make a better piece and see what happens.

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    ^clearly didnt read it.. sheesh
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    im serious.. fucking feedback is awsome
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    well kinda cliche but this was nice...

    Formula took a bit to adapt to your structure...
    Diverged and Form great work here multis vocab imagery
    wa sall great keep this up

    Hit up my Piece in OM
    called...
    A New Father
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    Put down the pebbles in my hand, climbed a ladder, put a brick right through your window.
    "You're gonna hear me out." Yeah, hear me out on this!

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    yo dis was a decent drop wasnt omfg wow good but it was average...
    structure was abstract but still easy to read which made it enjoyable...
    but who wouldnt like a drop about guns...
    good drop niggaz hit dis up when u get a chance

    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=131518

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    ^thanks yall i will hit those links up when i get a chance!
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    this was dope..
    not the greatest ive seen, but I still liked it.
    I was kinda hoping for more when I saw it was from you two..
    thats only cause ive seen other stuff from u two,
    this was good though. Nice multi use, had a unique flow to it,
    I was feeling that... decent vocab, liked the contents of it.
    Both verses were pretty hot, the chorus was nice too
    liked how u had the (thou/shall/not/kill) in the () in each line.
    Overall, nice drop guys.....
    hit this up?
    thanks.

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=131190
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    ^thanks for the best feed back yet ill be sure to hit it up my friend
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    uppin this yet againg fuckers
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