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No recycling, Dickriding, Feeding...no cheating of any kind
Due in 24 hours from now..
'luck
10 lines
No recycling, Dickriding, Feeding...no cheating of any kind
Due in 24 hours from now..
'luck
checkity check check
Kids got no chance,i'ma pawn but still i'm killing this rook,
Cos missing the fucking beat is the only time ya off the hook.
Need a second look, For this W you had best be hoping,
sure your verse will be jaw-dropping...
...But everyone yawns with their mouth open.
5th line ya barely coping, But i'm just having alot of fun,
and i would say go with the flow, but you dont even have one.
..Now Everyone on this board put your phreakin hands up...
...Holy fuck! that’s how many people know this man sucks.
fresh outta luck, I'm just about done beating this jerk,
It's like your punches are on strike, they just dont work.
I'm outtie.......
Geological surfaces help sum up that you nor a formidable foe
Just answer me this, after rock bottom where the fuck do you go?
Your wordplay sucks, flow is wack, wording rile and punches mild
A no-show would be the only space for improvement to your style
I caught you off guard, your still unaware of whats to come next
Your not even done your fist battle and already retired from text
Your a wack and shitty newb, your odds of winning aren't favorable
Your existence just shows why coat hangers should be readily available
Your a nobody, in other words you're in much need of a loyal fanbase
Fuck a verse to kill you, Ill destroy you with only five hits of back space
ok there i posted with my account
wow total sonned this duke...
had the flow and P&P yup...
JJ came semi-bland in some parts...
kinda came long with bars and such...
didnt really feel yur wittyness like i felt,
totals shit...he had a solid verse my man...
he delivered very well balanced as in JJ...
i felt u were off in some areas of yur drop...
like yur opener...man it wasnt that good...
vote/total...he had nice shit...hit my battles
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dont know man, my vote- Jammin
reason:
jammin- i just felt ur verse more. Wordplay, structure, and flow was all sick. When those shits are nice and precise, ur guaranteed to have a nice verse, and this shows exactly that. Vocab was real nice. Personals, were aight, nothin special, nothin i havent really seen. And punches were good.
Total- i dont think ur a newb, i bet uv been on here before. But u had a nice verse as well. Ur flow was pretty good, didnt run as good as jammin's though. Structure....not bad. Wordplay was real nice, that i give u props. Vocab, not bad. PUnches were good. And personals were straight, nothin special.
i would say look up on ya oppenent more, for more and better personals. Thats it really, this was an all around good battle to read. GL to both of ya.
Vote- Jammin
heres a link to a weak battle im in, but can u please hit it up since i took the time to hit urs up thanks. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=130465
this shits been goin on for a while.
Aye! yall vote for me and criminal minds ball!
Punchline Prince
I'ma have to go strke 9 cuz he just came a little stronger but Jombus you just gotta switchup yo flow and you'l be on the right track
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Halo nobody move until I say so, Knock niggaz out like kO's, wipe out any cat in my path case closed, I approach those who oppose, Hand me your watch and necklace, The game is all mine cause I perfect this, I the King the throne belongs to me, Put ya'll under my feet, The game is locked I already told ya, I'll just be a PIMP and brush off my shoulders.... GAME OVER
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-HALO_ -
I'ma have to go total cuz he just came a little stronger but Jombus you just gotta switchup yo flow and you'l be on the right track
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Halo nobody move until I say so, Knock niggaz out like kO's, wipe out any cat in my path case closed, I approach those who oppose, Hand me your watch and necklace, The game is all mine cause I perfect this, I the King the throne belongs to me, Put ya'll under my feet, The game is locked I already told ya, I'll just be a PIMP and brush off my shoulders.... GAME OVER
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-HALO_ -
Yeah...this is how I saw it.....
Toatal had a pretty good verse. His punches were hitting and his flow was on point. HIs wordplay was pretty good too but he didn't have that many personals.....which sould have hurt him. My favorite line was.....
Need a second look, For this W you had best be hoping,
sure your verse will be jaw-dropping...
...But everyone yawns with their mouth open.
^^^nice punch.....I liked the closer too.......
Jobus had a pretty good verse too. His punches were OK, but not great. They lacked a certain luster....just seemed boring. His flow seemed a little stretched and his wordplay wasn't that great. Never really came too personal either....
I caught you off guard, your still unaware of whats to come next
Your not even done your fist battle and already retired from text
^^^Lines like this are what hurt you in this battle. Meaningless fillers are just pointless. If you're not going to throw a punch, just come with one less bar......
Vote - Total
Return the favor...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=130806
Man i think it ws descent on both sides both need better structure but i think it was a good vote however my vote goes to
Vote Total
Uppin................
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Stubby left a shitty vote.............
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Uppin #2.....................
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Uppin #3
Come on i'll hit you up.........
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Jobus~ Stay the hell off the fillers.. its makes your battle look bad.. and its just a waiste of time to read somethin ya dont have to have in the battle to make sence of it. Good punches, ya missed a few.. structure was ok.. but could have improved it. Multies werent there too well.. work on them.
Total~ Your flow was there total.. you were dope in some of your punchlines, and you had a structure.. but u could have worked on them a bit better. I recommend u work on Word Play.
Vote: Total~ Cause he had a better flow, and better punches.. just lackin word play sorta..
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