rules:
10 lines
no bitin
no feedin
no d/r votes
no crew votes
no hate votes
each mc's verse are due 2 hours after there checkin
rules:
10 lines
no bitin
no feedin
no d/r votes
no crew votes
no hate votes
each mc's verse are due 2 hours after there checkin
ok, I'm checking in now I suppose, I'll have my crizap up in a little.
Well, this site has been fun to mock for a while/
Using swears every two lines isn't true style/
The land of the Dragon is not where I hail/
So don't try to send me any hate mail/
I come from the land known as something awful dot com/
So you had maybe go tell your mom/
That you all just got tricked/
I found out you all are just stupid pricks/
Very few of you have actual skills.
Thank you *bows*.
I will probably only check back to see your responses.
I hope you are stupid enough to vote for me to lose since you all know that this was more like poetry than rap, since I didn't swear or talk about 'smacking hoes' like all those crappy rappers who consider themselves 'musicians' (pah) do.
Or maybe you don't, since you didn't even know that a Naginata is a Japanese weapon, comprised of a long pole (similar to a spear) with a blade on top.
Woops, only nine lines, the stupid virus on my computer messed me up (it jams alt, ctrl, and caps lock, I had to wait a little bit to post, forgot about last line..) but, here it is:
You were all fun for some cheap thrills.
my checkin.........................................ma n, this ia battle aight kid
Shut THE FUCK UP, u stupid mother fucker
for a while there i thought u were a ducker
but i forgot....u a sucker & ya still showed up
it proly wouldve been better....cause kid u fucked
steppin in a ring full of monster who love to cuss
words that beat u till u bleed & infect u with puss
i thought i mentioned this battle was only 10 lines
wut made u think u could add more wack ryhmes
ill let it slide & watch as ya dickrides still vote for me
cause theres no doubt my worst still beats u lyrically
oh yeah, wut point were u try to prove, not really sure
oh...i thought that damn paragragh was a long run on or some shit, but oh well, lets get some votes
I'm trying to prove that you're a complete idiot.
It was successful.
Those last 5 lines were just mocking this site.
ok bitch, most of ya verse was not even about me, it was pretty much bout bullshit.
Anyway, ducker was a false personal, since I clearly stated that I wouldn't be able to get on until today at 2:00 Eastern Standard Time
ok battle...
Structure wasn't all that great from either side. Flow would have gone to hypers favor. Creativity and concepts were pretty good 4 both. If i had 2 pick id say azn had better concepts. Punches and personals weren't all that apparent from either side. Delivery was pretty good from both sides. This was a close battle but I am going to have to give the win to Azn_Gansta just because he was less played out...
Props 2 Both
Peace
Vote - Azn_Gangsta
holy shit...one of the whackest battles ive seen in a minute...
AG had shit...HA had shit...basicly equals a shitty ass battle...
AG was all filler...HA was all filler...and anything that was punch,
wise was weak and attempted very poorly...this was disgusting...
but HA pulled a win straight out of his ass...dripping with fluid...
cuz his verse was more runny than p diddy on his marathone...
AG man before u go to sleep tonight...throw away yur computer...
then make sure to kill yurself right after...because yur verse made...
jerry springer look like jefferey o'doamer after fucking a midget...
i mean wow HA takes this due to the fact that he was less whack...
and actually came harder with shitty ass disses...this was a calamity...
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Ok, it's true.
My poem was correct.
You are all still idiots.
You don't get it.
I'm not here to rap, I was here to observe how stupid you all were.
Results: Incredibly stupid.
shut the hell up, uppin(3)..........................
i think that the battle was a tie. Az had good concepts to talk about, but i guess he forgot was website he entered. This is RAPBATTLES not DEF POETRY so dont get mad if no one respects your poetry! Hype had good concepts also, he focused more on AZ than talkin about philosophy. They both didnt have hard punches so yeah...TIE.
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