My dedication is...

[Evolve]

My dedication is......

either non-existent or has gone fishin..
cause the only thing im dedicated to is wishin..
for a better reality.. with a heavy cheddered salary..
instead of fallacies.. and broken promises to challenge me..
im hoping honesty will balance me thru this hourly wage..
cause my courage is too cowardly to battle for a raise..
it doesn't have the power to get me out of this cage..
im trapped..
engaged in all this petty non-sense and crap..
this bullshit act.. that's what you can call it, i guess..
plus, on top of that.. im also an alcoholic mess..
my liver gets almost all of my check.. & yes,
i try to drown my regrets.. in liquor, but they just..
simply float to the top.. it doesn't stop..
i got 50 & Pac beat.. the way i keep taking shots..
i've gotta get away from this vodka & bacardi O..
cause i'm grown.. yet, i can't let go of the party though..
it started slow..
a couple of years ago.. with a couple of beers or so..
now im here, a pro.. a full blown champ of fifths..
who can't get a hold of his own damn relationship..
im just now facing it.. things haven't changed a bit..
it's been three long years.. of the same ol' basic shit..
but i ain't saying i want to go & replace this quick..
i just want to rearrange the way we relate to it..
i hate to admit.. but this monotony is making me sick..
its gotten me to the point, where if it wants.. fate can quit..
or take a vacation & split..
at least i'll know what my dedication is..

My dedication is.................. to my life & wasting it.

This is how a feel every fucking day....

[Baron Mynd]

read this at RnR already i think .. wasnt bad, flow gets a little hard to follow .. didnt enjoy it as much as your last i read - but it wasnt bad, emotion was portraid fairly well.

props.

[Nahlidge]

Damn 'Volve .. Still droppin' dope ish .. I felt this man .. Good emotions portrayed in it .. Deep meaning in it for you as the writer .. AIn't much I can say bout that .. It's ur personal feelings .. And shit was real .. The flow of it was very easy to follow .. Good multies and rhyme scheme .. Overall good piece .. Keep droppin' fam

[ILLunatic]

Please read the Updated rules, or this may get closed. Thanks Evolve.

[Spoken Word]

"plus, on top of that.. im also an alcoholic mess..
my liver gets almost all of my check.. & yes,
i try to drown my regrets"

I feel that shit...
but damn son...you only live once, right?
well, unless you're a Hindu...ya.

"at least i'll know what my dedication is..
My dedication is.................. to my life & wasting it."

now I just think you need a hug, dog
good shit man...

[Evolve]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...74#post1413474

[Born To Kill]

Great verse, great flow...

Mad multi's.

Deep, emotional, and technically pretty flawless.

Content? A bit self pitying.

But I've been there.

What are ya? Mid - late 20's?

Yeah, stuck in confusion...

"Yeah, I'm grown, I'm going places...but are any of em really where I wanna go?"

So you drink.

It gets better when ya turn 30...

An epiphany will hit and will tell you what to do.

It told me to cut my hair and buy nice clothes...

And I literally met my wife the same night.

She'd have never looked twice at me before I cleaned up my act.

Quit drinking so much, it'll help that light come through.
Just smoke herb, it's great for calming down, way better than booze.

Peace

[Evolve]

Yeah, i feel you. I am starting over again. Gonna switch shit up & be a little selfish. Its gonna be all about me for a good long while.

[ILLunatic]

Good drop Evolve.. but you need two links now, or this may get closed
*CredZ new rule*

[Evolve]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...25#post1413925