10 lines
U spit first
Take al the time u need
Peace
10 lines
U spit first
Take al the time u need
Peace
Checkin in...thoguth this was gonan be blind
so o well I'll spit today...
ScytsoPhrenia
CrazyDope
Put down the pebbles in my hand, climbed a ladder, put a brick right through your window.
"You're gonna hear me out." Yeah, hear me out on this!
your aka Is Thorn so I'll give you a Tip Prick,
ya callin' out chicks wit pics...
...when you can look down and find no dick,
your record that you flauntin' shows your half as bad as It gets,
got called out by a newb...
got scared of his nice sig n left,
Tryed to battle Noah's ark and realized it Floats yo sink,
I'll anmit you did good against A few kats...
but C'mon you had to go'n get merked by SomeThing
When you originally set this Up it said (obviously ILL),
Well It woulda been Ok...
......If you bit off a verse from Born to Kill,
I'll just finish this merk here take you outta the rap game,
Cauz Trog I shut the door on your skill...
and Dr. spock wants back His last name.
ScytsoPhrenia
CrazyDope
Put down the pebbles in my hand, climbed a ladder, put a brick right through your window.
"You're gonna hear me out." Yeah, hear me out on this!
I wasn't scared of his name, I said his Avatar matched my name
Anyways, you pissed me off
Check In
yur already forshadowin being burned, your visions are firey
the book in SyaNidals signatures is just his conscience diary
ya flow can still be fat.......simply boost your artery conditions
stop ur heart n' throw u the kiss of death like Hershey addictions
Im white plus im trashing u, its like Alabama hoastin wrestlemania
U've lost ya mind like too much lead, well u are frum Pensil Vania
U suck, should I perscribe u glasses? what is it u fail to see?
like every action figure in mint condition....S cant toy with me
when I set up our first battle, it was useless namin it Obviously ILL
cuz I knew ur name still wouldnt get around....like a broken wind mill
Vote-Trogdor
This battle was pretty close, but Trogdor was more consistent in his punches and directly hit his opponent. SyaNidal had some good line's but some of his line's lacked dramatically causing him to lose this battle. And I never seen that style before SyaNidal how your verse was sort of written like a Haiku with the A, B, A, B stanza. The line's "nice sig and left" and "looked down and found no dick" wasn't effective and looked like two filler's personally. But I was definetly feeling the Somthing line and the give back his name line. Pretty Good. Trogdor, on the other hand, used more effective punches besides the attempted wordplay that didnt fall to good with me from my perspective because it look like a stretch. His punches weren't spectacular, but enough to beat SyaNidal, keep writing you two.
Polled.
-Axe
Last edited by Axe; April 25th, 2004 at 03:22 PM
AI. Legendary.
19x HOF. Seven Titles. 50.
first off click the link n read it...Originally Posted by Trogdor
it says scared of his SIG!
and nice vote swaying good job sir...
Uppin!
ScytsoPhrenia
CrazyDope
Put down the pebbles in my hand, climbed a ladder, put a brick right through your window.
"You're gonna hear me out." Yeah, hear me out on this!
I dont see anything dude
I thought you were talkin about Jobus's avater, cuz I told him they matched in a thread. I'm not vote swayin, just confused.
Uppin
kk its all good click the link lol I said SIg...the guns in the kids sig...
and you didnt accept his battle you sshould get it if u click..
ScytsoPhrenia
CrazyDope
Put down the pebbles in my hand, climbed a ladder, put a brick right through your window.
"You're gonna hear me out." Yeah, hear me out on this!
vote-syanidal
reason:
syanidal- u had a good verse all the way through. Ur flow was good, along with structure and wordplay. U had good vocab, good punches, and great personals. All through the battle u didnt lead up once. So good verse, and great job on this one.
Trodjor- This verse just seemed like it didnt cut it for this battle. U did have a good verse as well but it didnt equal to the other kats. U had aigh flow, structure, and wordplay. Goog vocab, metas, and personal. and also punches. From past verses, i think u could have came alittle harder. But not a bad verse overall.
vote- syanidal
if u dont mmind hit ma battle up then ill poll vote, peace
heres da link, http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=124712
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Hmm.....
Syanidal - Your verse was a bit difficult to read with the structure it was writin in, but once I read it throu, I caught the flow. The verse was solid with good punches throughout. They hit harder than Trogdor's.....which brings me to......
Trogdor - That wrestlemania, pennsylvania line wasn't working, like alot of other lines. I didn't feel punches, as they felt more like filler. You opened up good, but everything fell from that point.
Vote - Syanidal
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uppin...
ScytsoPhrenia
CrazyDope
Put down the pebbles in my hand, climbed a ladder, put a brick right through your window.
"You're gonna hear me out." Yeah, hear me out on this!
cmon vote vote vote...
Uppinizzle ........
ScytsoPhrenia
CrazyDope
Put down the pebbles in my hand, climbed a ladder, put a brick right through your window.
"You're gonna hear me out." Yeah, hear me out on this!
Hit up my battle with Da Kid please^
Honestly while we wait
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