Thorn VS Thing (my verse is down)

[Trogdor]

10-20 lines
spit sumtime today
here's my shit
I made this thread cuz u kept freepostin in the other one, read it before you get outa controll in this one



i'll send off transparent rays so u spit rite through me
that name gives me the picture of a 50s horror movie
set out 2 be a flourist, i'll split ur face n' give u tu lips
ryhmes that'L intoxicate u more than canadian road trips
about to rip this dip like a broken ranch package of sauce
ill knock u cold...u'll wear more bandage than ppl in mosks
watch me take ur breath away like no No Smoking Signs
ya spits are sloppier than if Osama n' Bush were to Dine
closest u'll be 2 dilliquente is grounded n' on house arrest
it's takin this kid longer to post than smart moves in chess
u lack the endurance to keep up, ya went to gym n' failed
only way these ppl r feelin ur words is if u post in Braille

[÷Thìñg÷]

lolz ^ herb. . . . . .

[÷Thìñg÷]

lolz i had to edit my long ass bars LMFAO. . . . . .

i'll send off transparent rays so u spit rite through me
that name gives me the picture of a 50s horror movie

^as we can see from ya opener,that u is a herb & cant find personals
wha does transparent rays have 2 do wita diss its jus not submitable!
ya iresistable like a comon nut scratch,i mean thorn really suits u
i jus mute you,cuz we all no prickaly things really cant pierce threw!
i told ya 2 check in but ya rather have set in like a random fondaling
i mean this kids from windsor,my punches make you exstonashing!
only time this cat catches air is when my punchlines totaly K.O. . . .
like u a clone,but thorn wasnt born 2 swarm storms jus gets exposed
ya verse erodes,i mold tha thorn & ya morbidly morn,tha story unfolds
even ya closer is cold & no value even if scolding wordplay was stole

u lack the endurance to keep up, ya went to gym n' failed
only way these ppl r feelin ur words is if u post in Braille

Thorns closer^

[Azure]

Ok.

Thorn.

i'll send off transparent rays so u spit rite through me
that name gives me the picture of a 50s horror movie
No.
set out 2 be a flourist, i'll split ur face n' give u tu lips
ryhmes that'L intoxicate u more than canadian road trips
What?
about to rip this dip like a broken ranch package of sauce
ill knock u cold...u'll wear more bandage than ppl in mosks
Racist.
watch me take ur breath away like no No Smoking Signs
ya spits are sloppier than if Osama n' Bush were to Dine
No.
closest u'll be 2 dilliquente is grounded n' on house arrest
it's takin this kid longer to post than smart moves in chess
Please stop.
u lack the endurance to keep up, ya went to gym n' failed
only way these ppl r feelin ur words is if u post in Braille
Wack and played.

Very weak verse.
Need to work on punches.
Use personals also.

Thing.

^as we can see from ya opener,that u is a herb & cant find personals
wha does transparent rays have 2 do wita diss its jus not submitable!
Feeding.
ya iresistable like a comon nut scratch,i mean thorn really suits u
i jus mute you,cuz we all no prickaly things really cant pierce threw!
Multi. Attempted personal.
i told ya 2 check in but ya rather have set in like a random fondaling
i mean this kids from windsor,my punches make you exstonashing!
What?
only time this cat catches air is when my punchlines totaly K.O. . . .
like u a clone,but thorn wasnt born 2 swarm storms jus gets exposed
Inner (you didnt mean to do that though). Weak.
ya verse erodes,i mold tha thorn & ya morbidly morn,tha story unfolds
even ya closer is cold & no value even if scolding wordplay was stole
Feeding again.

Even though you were feeding of his verse.
You attempted punches and one personal.

Therefore.

v/ Thing.

Repay the favour, please.

Hit this up.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=120103

Thank you.

Pz.

[÷Thìñg÷]

i was feeding cuz he never put that n the rules. . . . .
but thanks for that vote lolz. . . .
uppin this ishness lmao. . . .

[Trogdor]

lol wow ur an idiot

uppin............................................. ..

[÷Thìñg÷]

lol wow ur an idiot?
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>up
stfu lmfao!

[Ace of Aces]

close one i think.

thorn- had an ok personal. you had a couple of good punches. but sum of them seemed a little played. your flow was nice. not too short, not too long. you had an overall good verse. the tu lip line showed you had sum ok wordplay. the osama line was kinda weak tho. closer was the best one, kinda played tho.

thing- you came original but you fed. i guess its ok if its not on the rules but feeding sux. lol. wutever. you had a few okay personals. ur structure was ok. this battle was really close. you both came decent. but honestly becuz everything was pretty squared in this. ima have to give this to...

vote- thing...came with multies, so he took this with slightly better flow.

props to both.

peace

[Trogdor]

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[÷Thìñg÷]

3rd uppin...................

[Trogdor]

up................................................ .................................................. ...

[ILLunatic]

Thorn.. you had a few good punches, and a few good personals. But i wasn't feeling your verse that much.. it had its high points.. and its low points. But you had more low than high. You came close, you coulda had this though.. elevate man

Thing.. you didn't exactly come doop neither, you had a little harder hitting punches, you didn't really use personals.. but you had multies which made up for it, and gave you a little bit more.. Any who.. i felt you brought more to the table..

V/Thing

GodFather(2) v.s ILLunatic (topical)
ILLunatic v.s Cannabarz²

[÷Thìñg÷]

4th............................................... ............................

[phenomicaliverse]

uppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnggg oohhhhhhhhh shit!!!!!!

[÷Thìñg÷]

5th....