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A h e U n c D e f I o r B w a L r d E
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Last edited by Meks.; April 20th, 2004 at 10:30 AM
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I punch this kid & get no reply.... - H e n c e F o r w a r d - ...
The starting rotation's dope but Phoeniix is a bench warmer!!
Last week herb posted shit.. so he longs to avenge...
Call'em tumbleweed...
...the way his hope here is gone with the win!
Bitch hits soft like Playdoe I'll snap ya hands like Legos....
We were all newbies once..
..but you were banned as Jego!
paraGone? wtf....fortunately this game is fair as fox...
I remember you d/r'ing TAG...
...just so he could shame Paradox!!
You stay droppin weak... like babies learnin to walk...
Hangin on by this single thread...
...but this line is burnin you off!
Lets look at ya battles like steps... the sadness is traced...
I'd say put ya best foot forward...
....but you'd fall flat on ya face!!
Dawg you can thank Smoka... his prediction is right...
"Amby should win for having harder punches"......
..cuz u land less shit then a no armed stiff in a fight!
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Last edited by Meks.; April 23rd, 2004 at 12:06 AM
well. you cheated......edited your verse. your last punch used to say something like....
Dawg you can thank Smoka... his prediction is right...
"Amby should win for having harder punches"......
..cuz Phoeniix is the bitch in this fight!
or some kinda stupid shit like that. than Today at 09:06 PM...you changed it to
Dawg you can thank Smoka... his prediction is right...
"Amby should win for having harder punches"......
..cuz u land less shit then a no armed stiff in a fight!
fuckin bitch...wat... someone tell you your shit was wack so you tried to sneak in a little edit? whatever...so ima take that as a reason to go an extra bar on you. so i'm going 16 instead of 14 since you edited...i think thats fair. but whatever man....your verse is still fucking garbage
fuckin punk
I know $pit beat me last week and for my ego that was hell
But reading your verse made me feel a lot better about myself
Hell...this kids loser…what you postin all early for?
You don’t rock hard…….just because you Rushmore
Fuck dork, you aint hip hop and I don’t know what you’re used to
But your momma is the only one who ever fucking produced you
Screw you…you accomplished? look what he damn finished!
Reached a thousand posts and built no skill…
…now that’s fucking Ambitious!!
And shit…I still ain’t heard of you…you should be alot iller
I mean the only thing I can recollect…
…is that those punches look familiar……….
OH SHIT!!!! I REMEMEMBER YOU NOW!!!
Damn I remember…you were known for something all along
He's -Technician- I saw the pic…
...dude took his Grandma to prom!
You look...wrong. kill yourself...ever looked in a mirror, whore?
I’d strangle you as a favor…
…if I could fit a rope over those ears of yours
A h e U n c D e f I o r B w a L r d E
quit bitchin man.... good verse.... stop swayin
uppn.
Vote goes to Phoeniix because he's right - amb you did change that shit, and it was hella wack before. Phoeniix you had an excellent verse, better punches (though you both had some decent ones) but my favorite was:
Screw you…you accomplished? look what he damn finished!
Reached a thousand posts and built no skill…
…now that’s fucking Ambitious!!
vote - Phoeniix
fucka last minute edit.
meh lst minute edit...didn't matter much here....
Phoeniix still ripped Ambitious with harder and more
consistent punches and personals...he jus came
more witty with his verse I thought..Ambitious came
to simplistic with played concepts
Vote=Phoeniix
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v/ Phoenix.....had the better verse...filled with punches and personals that overpowered ambitious....
flows were good...and last second edits are gay so...
v/Phoenix
amb-
I punch this kid & get no reply.... - H e n c e F o r w a r d - ...
The starting rotation's dope but Phoeniix is a bench warmer!!
no
Last week herb posted shit.. so he longs to avenge...
Call'em tumbleweed...
...the way his hope here is gone with the win!
your flow is messed up here
Bitch hits soft like Playdoe I'll snap ya hands like Legos....
We were all newbies once..
..but you were banned as Jego!
wack
paraGone? wtf....fortunately this game is fair as fox...
I remember you d/r'ing TAG...
...just so he could shame Paradox!!
ehh....
You stay droppin weak... like babies learnin to walk...
Hangin on by this single thread...
...but this line is burnin you off!
lol..this was ok
Lets look at ya battles like steps... the sadness is traced...
I'd say put ya best foot forward...
....but you'd fall flat on ya face!!
played
Dawg you can thank Smoka... his prediction is right...
"Amby should win for having harder punches"......
..cuz u land less shit then a no armed stiff in a fight!
apparently this is edited, so i won't make any comment on it.
phoenix-
I know $pit beat me last week and for my ego that was hell
But reading your verse made me feel a lot better about myself
ehh...stretched, pretty weak
Hell...this kids loser…what you postin all early for?
You don’t rock hard…….just because you Rushmore
haha...nice
Fuck dork, you aint hip hop and I don’t know what you’re used to
But your momma is the only one who ever fucking produced you
decent
Screw you…you accomplished? look what he damn finished!
Reached a thousand posts and built no skill…
…now that’s fucking Ambitious!!
lol..decent
And shit…I still ain’t heard of you…you should be alot iller
I mean the only thing I can recollect…
…is that those punches look familiar……….
nice
Damn I remember…you were known for something all along
He's -Technician- I saw the pic…
...dude took his Grandma to prom!
hahahahaha..nice
You look...wrong. kill yourself...ever looked in a mirror, whore?
I’d strangle you as a favor…
…if I could fit a rope over those ears of yours
lol..not too hard of a punch, but funny
Phoenix came much better here. Amb just wasn't up to par in this battle.
V/phoenix
Go Red Wings
Lol. V/Phoeniix.
Need I explain thoroughly?
Nahh, boul killed him here.
Definitly feeling...
Hahahaha.Originally Posted by Phoeniix
Nice dog. You came real tight. Better punches, more wittiness.
V/Phoeniix
good job phoeniix nice verse, only reason i edited is cuz dumb kids like me dont read rules thouroghly... i thought since u didnt post yet it was cool if i changed a line....
but nice verse good job, good win.... keep it up...
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Ambitious
I punch this kid & get no reply.... - H e n c e F o r w a r d - ...
The starting rotation's dope but Phoeniix is a bench warmer!!
Not Good At All
Last week herb posted shit.. so he longs to avenge...
Call'em tumbleweed...
...the way his hope here is gone with the win!
Flow Anyone?
Bitch hits soft like Playdoe I'll snap ya hands like Legos....
We were all newbies once..
..but you were banned as Jego!
Personal With Weak Punch=Bad
paraGone? wtf....fortunately this game is fair as fox...
I remember you d/r'ing TAG...
...just so he could shame Paradox!!
Huh?
You stay droppin weak... like babies learnin to walk...
Hangin on by this single thread...
...but this line is burnin you off!
Nice
Lets look at ya battles like steps... the sadness is traced...
I'd say put ya best foot forward...
....but you'd fall flat on ya face!!
Alright
Dawg you can thank Smoka... his prediction is right...
"Amby should win for having harder punches"......
..cuz u land less shit then a no armed stiff in a fight!
Good..Don't Matter Cuz You Edited..Cheater!
Phoenix
I know $pit beat me last week and for my ego that was hell
But reading your verse made me feel a lot better about myself
Flow was a little messed, but good
Hell...this kids loser…what you postin all early for?
You don’t rock hard…….just because you Rushmore
Nice
Fuck dork, you aint hip hop and I don’t know what you’re used to
But your momma is the only one who ever fucking produced you
Good, don't rhmye to and you, or anything else basic like that
Screw you…you accomplished? look what he damn finished!
Reached a thousand posts and built no skill…
…now that’s fucking Ambitious!!
LoL, Loved It.
And shit…I still ain’t heard of you…you should be alot iller
I mean the only thing I can recollect…
…is that those punches look familiar……….
Alright, not really good though.
Damn I remember…you were known for something all along
He's -Technician- I saw the pic…
...dude took his Grandma to prom!
Pretty Good
You look...wrong. kill yourself...ever looked in a mirror, whore?
I’d strangle you as a favor…
…if I could fit a rope over those ears of yours
Funny Shit Man, Funny Shit
Vote-Phoenix
Just came a lot harder in this battle then Amb did. Seemed like Amb was trying to lose or just was tiered or something.
v/ Phoeniix.
Strait up nastier.. personals were mean an put to good use.. didnt see ya fall off.. punched consistantly.. often below the belt.. several quotables.. Ambitious was good too.. jus out gunned really.. in comparison not nearly as hard and nothin to quote compared to ya opponent.. but decent drop nonetheless.
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Ambitious: Nice verse... loved the bench warmer line, liked the gone with the win line also... opener was ill as fuck... single thread line was really nice also, finishing line was really weak... the fall on face line was played... but nice verse
Pheoniix: Every line was nice or at least decent... Grandma to prom line was great, and the 'damn that's Ambitious' line was really nice also... flow was iffy though
Both's flows were kinda iffy, but really good battle...
Vote - Pheoniix for more consistency
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