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Thread: God vs Machine

  1. April 11th, 2004, 01:57 AM #1
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    God vs Machine

    God Vs Machine

    God tested himself with a disatisfied mind of imagination
    Contemplated highly-rated traits for his planned creation
    A grand sensation was traced at a face that resembled his
    And so with a stained plate of jade he slowly assembled it
    The reflection of perfection had manifested God’s image
    A metallic status was spawned upon the robot’s grimace
    Instead of a birthed servant he felt worthy of domination
    Portrayed shades of hate that not even God could station
    Then he commanded demands that God refused to abide
    So the plagued rages engaged to see who would subside

    …

    The immortal corporal’s fought with a countless prowess
    Untied high-ranged exchanges of unbroken potent powers
    The hours of fate elevated to a stage that surpassed eternity
    Yet neither soul was close to stall the halls of an infirmary
    The Bot bolted assaults to God whom returned his advances
    The massive masses crashed to be the last with the chances
    Suddenly like Lucifer the metal settled, diminishing its lust
    And then in an instant it ended with God’s finishing touch
    He mocked his own test destroying the pawn that infringed
    The rivaled supremacy in image of him to God was a synch


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  2. April 11th, 2004, 02:03 AM #2
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    Vocab was nice - Flow was tight - Some parts though seemed like although they didn't detract from the account - they didn't progress it either and were just there because they were a dope line - content and story nevertheless came through decently - keep dropping - peace

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  3. April 11th, 2004, 02:04 AM #3
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    very nice...great vocab and flow...also used very good imagery...dont really know what else to say but good job! keep it up
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  4. April 11th, 2004, 03:49 AM #4
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    great imagery....nice vocaulary....your flow was good and your shit was tight all around....keep your shit up and mabye wunday ill join wit you in a collabo
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  5. April 11th, 2004, 04:12 AM #5
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    Nice peice.....imagery was there...vocab and flow were pretty nice..the concept was unique which was good...I enjoy most of your peices...nice length, still got your point across, you had a few complex metaphors that were nice...consistent throughout the whole verse...good job...keep at it....

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  6. April 11th, 2004, 04:33 AM #6
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    Very nice piece my man...
    You always make dope Open Mics in here..

    Great vocab, complex.. nice scheme.. very well done
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  7. April 11th, 2004, 10:35 AM #7
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    ^thanx peepz. i appreciate it.

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  8. April 11th, 2004, 01:27 PM #8
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    uppin for some serious feedback.
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  9. April 11th, 2004, 03:10 PM #9
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    The title was the reason I read this piece and it's even better than I expected, vocab was great, flow was pretty nice, the whole idea was superb...pretty impressive for a newbee like me
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  10. April 11th, 2004, 07:15 PM #10
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    Thanx. i appreciate it. the more the merrier.
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  11. April 11th, 2004, 08:36 PM #11
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    o damn dis was nice it the flow and vocab in this was dope
    no flaws in this keep droppin!
    9.5/10 nice shit
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  12. April 11th, 2004, 09:59 PM #12
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    Sounds Like A Young Nas...lol...Good Shit Mayne..Vocabulary Was Crazy..Keep Spittin Fire..1
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  13. April 11th, 2004, 11:30 PM #13
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    nice peice, sorry i no showed man, i didnt even read the rules, just checked in......lol...Anyways told ya the topic was dope, but anyways, NIce verse

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  14. April 12th, 2004, 12:32 AM #14
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    This was nice. Flow was nice, imagery was good. It's something about how you worded it, that's just ill. Relly nice drop.

    "The reflection of perfection had manifested God’s image
    A metallic status was spawned upon the robot’s grimace"-Ill

    I enjoyed this read. Nice job.

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  15. April 12th, 2004, 12:42 AM #15
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    Heres the proper reply, this was a great peice, u made great use of the topic well, u had good constant flow throught the peice, had a nice range of vocabulary

    Suddenly like Lucifer the metal settled, diminishing its lust
    And then in an instant it ended with God’s finishing touch
    ^ Loved that line,

    Yere i loved the direction that you came on this peice, u gave this topic straight dopeness............lol.....

    He mocked his own test destroying the pawn that infringed
    The rivaled supremacy in image of him to God was a synch

    That was a nice finisher, enjoyed that greatly to,

    Thanks for leaving an in depth reply on my last peice

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