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Thread: A Push To Hold Me Back.. I Guess

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    A Push To Hold Me Back.. I Guess

    life doesn't move me.. i have no effect or cause
    im like a movie.. played with a defective pause
    & it loosley calls for all of my collective flaws
    to be produced, then viewed with subjective thought
    except, i brought.. an excuse of sorts
    through my youth i fought as the abuse was taught
    i didn't choose the sport.. i was forced to play
    couldnt refuse.. i would lose all his support that way
    so to prove, i stayed .. being distraught with pain
    & each day was the same.. tossed to the game
    But.. not in the way of a coach or team
    or the one where i lived HIS hopes & dreams
    its the one where i'd cope & hope to be seen
    you see.. i was suppose to be mean
    & he wanted a winner.. dressed in the proper gear
    adressed the same question at dinner..
    "You think we got a shot this year?"
    he'd stop & stare.. watch me as he topped his beer
    I'd answer clear.. "Yeah, we got a good shot".. the fear,
    almost choked the air.. right from my lungs as i spoke
    it felt like my throat was being tightly hung from a rope
    it was no joke..
    & i dont know.. why, i was so petrified to speak
    so many times i would cry myself to sleep
    weeped.. like a willow as tears seaped through my pillow, wet..
    & my dreams seemed to reflect each feature in his sillotte..
    then i'd get to see that he was filled with misery & regret
    cause he didn't let me be who i wanted to be.. the best
    now the only thing i can do is ask God to bless..
    his memory & remember he.. loved me in my dreams...... i guess

    R.I.P Dad...
    Rappers sound the same man, found 1 game plan & ran through it
    They all got that Geico flow.. Cause even a cave man can do it

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    I could turn this into a nice little spoken word = )

    Good work 'Volve

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    Hey you are more than welcome to do that if you want.. As long as you give me some type of credit for writing it..
    Rappers sound the same man, found 1 game plan & ran through it
    They all got that Geico flow.. Cause even a cave man can do it

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    I may just do it tomorrow and link here to it....

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    Nice drop, my man...

    Meaningful. Emotional. Real good.
    The flow was on target, crazy multi's.

    Deep message and shout out.

    Peace

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    here is my link Credz
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=120389&page=4

    lets get some feedback on this
    Rappers sound the same man, found 1 game plan & ran through it
    They all got that Geico flow.. Cause even a cave man can do it

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    Damn.. its bed time already?
    Rappers sound the same man, found 1 game plan & ran through it
    They all got that Geico flow.. Cause even a cave man can do it

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    Dope Ish, Definatley Hot

    You Got An Intellegent Flow Going

    Dope

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    fuckin wack pc...just wiped my reply
    for the second time..
    dope
    your flow was ill as usual and the starting 6 lines really reeled me into this story
    flow was flawless and you told a good story of the kids fears and emotions that came from a pressuring dad
    you always impress me with your writings..whether its the flow aspect or others
    and this would be ill in audio if chrits going to do it..i'll listen to that for sure
    props man

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    it's a bold statement - the new youtube

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    Thanks fgee... Your feedback is appreciated & respected.
    Rappers sound the same man, found 1 game plan & ran through it
    They all got that Geico flow.. Cause even a cave man can do it

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    Uppin
    Rappers sound the same man, found 1 game plan & ran through it
    They all got that Geico flow.. Cause even a cave man can do it

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    i agree with you... peeps who say syllable count means flow is dumb.... you carried this nicely...it all depends on the flow and this had it.... pauses in the right places.. and the writers voice was tight.... what i would sat is there seemed to be the odd word there, put down, jus to make it rhyme.. maybe jus me, but it seemed like some wasnt full sentences... but on the whole i liked it and the concept.... tight....... ~one~
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    jus like everyone else said....You had a tight flow n the multies were crazy, the vocab was hot n evrythin fell in place..this piece had no flaws, all i can say is keep flowin n droppin new shit...hope to see sum more from u homie..

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    Uppin.....
    Rappers sound the same man, found 1 game plan & ran through it
    They all got that Geico flow.. Cause even a cave man can do it

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    ok. this was probably legendary. lol @ the self nomination.
    i'll follow my recent trend of dickriding you and nominate it though .

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