*W1CKED is first...and then T-West is second.*
Song: Invincible
Artists: W1CKED and T-West
Produced by: Inkredible Productions
Hi-Fi
Lo-Fi
and if none of those work...go here, it should b at the top.
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*W1CKED is first...and then T-West is second.*
Song: Invincible
Artists: W1CKED and T-West
Produced by: Inkredible Productions
Hi-Fi
Lo-Fi
and if none of those work...go here, it should b at the top.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/twestmusic.htm
OK Lissin....
ok Wicked has nice flow nothing to complain about therehis voice could be eq'd a lil better... but nice over all
T West
the flow was not as good as Wicked's and mic Presence aint there but it sounds like because you might have a shitty mic or eq settings or somthing. Like it almost sound like your to far away from the mic. not sure
there was nothing speacal about this track thou... No Hook or anything. if you added a catchy hook it would improve this track night and day. but without it its just some rap Not a song.
5 /10
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Hence Forward
axis powers
it was okay
but ya used nigga too much, it got kinda lame
the beat and production was pretty good
delivery was good
flow was aight
from both of ya, but t-west was kind off off beat, but just a lil
average track
ORIGINAL BADASS
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Wicked - nice flow - nothing to really complain about - T-west - your voice didn't really seem like a "rap voice" - try changing your tone a little - deeper, higher, whatever just a little something - nice beat - didn't really like the extra 45 secs or so of nothing at the end - give some advice in my Black & White drop in here if you would - peace
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*sigh*
damn man, you really should have let me mix this piece
good shit though fellas
wicked you was ait more emotion needed you sounded
like you were reading, decent lyrics....not bad
t west damn your microphone to death...nice emotion
flow was ait, lyrics a bit harder
good shiiiiiiiiiiiiet
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New Writejist Song - Tito Ortiz
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ay this was a cool track, the beat was dope.
W1cked - lol, you sound like Nas, i`m sorry
but you do ahah you`ve got nice flow and
your lyrics are decent to.
T West - you were iight, its prolly the mic you
using, your flow was iight, and your lyrics were
cool.
i think yall prolly coulda used a hook for the
song to make it better but it was an overall
decent track.
oh and T West get at me on aim - The Koncept
so we can finsh up that song "just the way it is"
KDotI
I'm godly
The Rebirth
click....
I like the beat....the voice is nice....turn it maybe a bit on the "chorus".....
ok w1cked nice flow....gutter i can tell by the use of the N word heeh....
ok lyrics...i like it overall...good good....not bad production
T-west ....
work on your production.....delivery wasn't neccesarily hype enough to follow w1cked so delivery was a lil calm for what this track wanted to convey ...good lyrics...ok flow ...not a bad collab at all dog....burn it to a CD and show your friends.....6/10
pz.
INSANE JOKA LYRICIST
Thanx for the feedback.
Hence Forward
axis powers
ok beat is aiight,
first guy: flow is ok, delivery is ok too, lyrics are good but you say "nigga" too much i think you voice would sound better on a different beat.
second guy: delivery could be better, flow is aiight, lyrics decent.
overall this is an alright drop, keep doin it.
Listenin'..
Well i've already told W1cked what i thought of his verse..I think..?
Used the word nigga too much, I don't go around using nigga as a rhymin' word in every sentence even though I aint white..You know..?
Lyrics are pretty plain, the flow is decent.
T-West..quality is fucked up..flow isn't that good, your not on beat, some of your OB's were off aswell, I tell everyone on this site, if you're going to do a track and your verse is just decent atleast focus on one point of the verse and make that tight.. e.g flow/lyrics some shit like that..
overall this track was aiight, fuck a chorus..this didnt really need a hook, although the pause between verses was pretty fuckin' annoying..
This track was pretty cool, if you spent a little more time on the verses I think it wouldve been a lot more better..But yeah..
Keep doing your thing.
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damn this shit is tite serious................w1cked you were dope man............t-west man nice to but abit more basic but shit
i loved this beat........woot
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