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Thread: Short Freestyle

  1. #1

    Short Freestyle

    I got this beat off of tax....or rather his boy that talked shit about him..i thought it was nice so i threw it on and i did a lil freestyle nothing special just sitting chillin......tell me what y'all think....

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/demuirgicmusic.htm

    ^called freestyle fun on the page...i'll return ALL feedback i get negative or positive ....pz

  2. #2
    That Shit Cray Chris Black's Avatar
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    Hard this beat before. Nice choice.
    Quality is decent. Flow is ok, could be better in spots.
    Lyrics could be a little better, but aight.
    This was a cool listen.
    Keep doin' what you do, homie.

    Please return the favor:
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=123004
    Hence Forward
    axis powers

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    I'm Only Here 4 ME Fuck U TheUnderRated's Avatar
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    yep yep plz don't sleep on this thanx alot i'll return ALLL feedback i get GOOD or BAD....and thanks again pece
    INSANE JOKA LYRICIST

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    This gettin slept on one looking for feedback?....I will retrun all feedback
    INSANE JOKA LYRICIST

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    Dikk Dastadly
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    beat is pretty good, your flowin nice, delivery is pretty good, lyrics aren't great but since it's a freestyle they not bad at all. overall this is ok, has some good parts, keep at it man.

  6. #6
    Ill-Fresh
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    flow - pretty nice for an off the top...i like your style
    delivery/voice - could've added more emotion...
    lyrics - for a freestyle pretty tight...

    pretty nice...for a free...ehh...6.5/10

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    kept flowin on beat, didnt feel lyrics at all tho, were elementary to me.. keep elevatin tho,

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    i didnt know that you were battlemode

    lol

    your in my crew

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