16 lines, due today in 30 mins .. check in needed
checkin in ..
jockyourself
Cannabarz˛
16 lines, due today in 30 mins .. check in needed
checkin in ..
where u at fam? check in.........................................
chekin man,.................. lets do it, i only hav 15 lefts damn
ay im, posponin, till 10 30, then ill drpo i swer , u dont haf to drop now iehter ok
aiight .. let's say this .. due tomorrow nite .. im kinda wack rite now ..
aight nigga, lemmie show you how this works//
sit back, relax- and focus on these words..//
this aint cumin nicely, or proper- but rather sumthin in reverse//
dont be pruse,,and hate bad words, cus no one in hur givs a fuck if i cures//
uh oh..
prewritten shit, get it out- dont even try that with me//
ima typa nigga who'll merk "ill-type" rappers and any pimp-steeze//
dont fuck with my beatz, theyll muder verses on ther own..//
kill button on my keyboard's reset.. so watch yo voice tone//
undesrcibable lyrics and tha mouth of a lion//
ill take this battle hand in paw. not even tryin//
damn, in this battle my fingers fell asleep, to ambitiously waitin//
if you dont hav a god, betta call on tha spirits.. to late, start prayin//
drip drop.. im as blunt with my rhymes as possibly legible//
not one votes leaning your way, im greedy- so ill take em all.//
i dont cut corners, i spit exactly wuts needa be said.//
is your car in reverse?, cus im not hitten tha gas, but im pullin ahead//
like i sed, i dont try wen i spit my verses, ":esta muy facy:" //
didnt i brake you face last week, where your cast be??//
dude, quick recoveries are followed by quick reprocutions//
ima knuckle you, like in "miracle" wen we beat tha russians//
you leave me no choice, but to end this by death//
click ( kill button ), cause of death, " loss of breath"//
let this be a lesson, when you fuck with big tymers, thers no defeat//
anyone else in hurr, watchin this battle, i warn you " stay back 10 feet"//
any closer and your head be cut off//
jus like this boyz throat, your air supply'll get shut off//
tha first braket its pose to say( 4th line ) " dont be prude"..................
killen, wers your flow homie, dont spit tomoro, spit tonight
iight ima vote on this when cannan bars drop's his verse iight
u wenty wayyyy y over the line limit .
oh well .. i'll accept it. but i ain't gonna spit as much
21 Gun Salute
Obviously the worst-emcee..Your verse goes in Range when I beat-ya
Your punches couldn't connect the dots on a dangerous-cheetah!..
Ima beat ya easily with Dynamic punches reveresed in the worst-ways..
When Your punches suck more dick, than Hemaphrodite-Birthdays!..
Earrrrrrth-quake! You can't Handle Bars! like Parapalegic bike-riders!..
Voting for text, Trees eventually possess the bark..Your just a biter!..
Go ahead and mention cannabarz further, gettin the severence!..
And If I Tell-people to reach for the sky, It's to pull you from the Heavens!..
Your wordplay is horrible, your not nice, im passing-you-twice!..
If You think the heavens allways win, You haven't seen Passion Of Christ!..
Your raps-are-your-life, Both end at the line like a seven-in-hell!..
And I'm The Ambassador of Satan, I'll take out Cloud 9...10, 11 and 12!..
Then sever-your-skill, Rip your abdomen and leave-you-shot!..
Even your few crowd followers have to bless you, Whether you don't sneeze-alot!..
blah .. votes?
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raise .. don't fukkin freepost in our thread nuccah ^
cannabarz- had a good verse with good pucnhes and personals....he verse was strong from beginning to end...the flow was nice the metas were nice and the structure was also good. the opewner was good and so was the closer
good verse....strong showing...keep it up
jock- i didnt like your verse as much...it was ok but the punches didnt hit him hard enough....personals were blah and the flow was off....i hate that structure but i guess it was ok....work on personals and maing your verse more complex...work on sum stuff...ull be aight
for a strong verse and pun ches and personals...
v/cannabarz
hit up the battle in my sig
ill vote on this battle if u drop an honest vote on my battle cuz im tired of votein and no one retuning the favor so vote herr please and ill drop my vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...62#post1258462
raisin . .................................................. ...........................
Damnnnn cannabarz that was sick! that Earthquake line was badass, i could feel a beat..funny thing is when i read that i was thinkin of Ludacris singin that
Anywho..
jock ~ yours was just a buncha 'blah' shit. Nothin really stood out man, was not feelin this at all, especially after reading Cannz .. she just overshadowed ya man.
Cannabarz ~ You got talent, like mentality said structure was nice, and overall flow was excellent..i could feel the beat. Nice personals and punches, you basically merked this one.
No hate intended whatsoever. Not the greatest battle, kinda one-sided, but hey, such is life.
Vote: Cannabarz
reeses peaces...
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