$carface vs. Shortay140

[Masahiko.]

damn.. im seriously not impressd by either. shortay your verse was tight but i think you did better in other battles.. i like this structure much better then previous battles you came with a lot of punches that hit hard and also personals. your opener and closer need tweeking and they would have been almost perfect..

scareface man it seems like your new here well anyways your verse was not good aswell your structure made the whole verse not flow as well and thats not good. your punches were there but they didnt hit hard. and ya personals.. ehhh i dont wanna embarass u

[..:: SpOrTzDiScIpLe™::..]

iight thankz for the vote uppin for more vote on this please........................1x

[Slayer]

Scarface - I fink ya verse was good, you had good punches, personals = ehhhh a dunno they were ok, multis were ok, structure was off in places, flow was ok but dropped in parts.

Shortay - I thought ya verse was dope, the way you used the multis was just so tight, i really liked reading ya verse. Flow was never off, structure was good, personals were also really tight, and punches were dope aswell.

Vote - shortay

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peace

[Kuruption967]

Aight Honestly mayne Scarface did it with tha sugar cake cracc.....he made laugh with that............but depth...........

Both had decent structure but its unprofessional of shorty to have to add on I mean I thought once you spit you cant chnage it but whatever...................shorty had some good punches.............aight I lied I really dont like his verse.......I mean he had metas but they were weak though.....I'm just feelin tha other guys verbal assault I mean it makes me want to get at him.........shorty should try to focus man..........he got tha creativity but he's abusin it seriously.............

[$carface]

thx uppin #1........

[..:: SpOrTzDiScIpLe™::..]

iight sill uppin for more vote on this .............................2x

[Cannabarz]

punches - shortay
wordplay - shortay
creativity - shortay
structure - scar
opener - shortay
closer - shortay
Personals - scar
vote - Shortay

stayed hot from beginnin' to end' .. most his verse seemed like filler, but he still took this wit them punches and wordplay' no personals tho'. Scar, you need' to work on ya wordplay an punch fam.

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[..:: SpOrTzDiScIpLe™::..]

okay thank for the vote and ill already voted in that battle
cannanbarz
okay so we just need 1 more vote please

[..:: SpOrTzDiScIpLe™::..]

uppin.........................3x

[Tactixx]

well my vote would have to go to scarface....Shortay, your verse was nice but i thought it had too many multi's and took away from the impact of potential punches
your closer was nice but alot of the lines in the verse were just fillers to serve the purpose of acting as multi's.....so the flow was nice with all the multi's and the structure was ok, it lacked any real hard punches
scarface, your verse was alright, alot of ok punches and nice metaphors the structure was ok ...your closer was nice too the flow could use a bit of work....alright verse

overall it was an average battle but my vote goes to Scarface
return the favor...

[..:: SpOrTzDiScIpLe™::..]

okay still need one more vote on this i need this battle closed out so i can get more battles

[Mentality]

ok shortay got this for better punches and flow

the verse was better and it made more sense
also the structure was good but dont put it into small font again

the other guys verse was too simple and elementary ....punches didnt hit hard and they werent nice at all

work on it ..........use personals in ur battles also..it helps...

for better punches and personals..........v/shortay

[..:: SpOrTzDiScIpLe™::..]

can u drop a poll vote on this please...i need to to be closed before i can battle

[..:: SpOrTzDiScIpLe™::..]

My Last An Fanally Uppin ........3x

[southsideloco]

aiight....nice battle..pretty close to me..

Scarface-aiight...had a nice flow, punchlines were good n had a good easy readable structure...sum funny lines n sum of the multies had me laughin...no flaws in this except the presonal coulda been more hard hittin..didnt feel like it did..but goog battle

shortay-nice battle too...good flow, nice punchlines too, n had a lot of multies which kinda made it harder to read but it still flowed...only flaw or tip im givin u is to lose the"//" at the end of ur lines cuz it makes ur drop look sloppy...but still battled good n dropped well

overall-close battle...both were tied fo me but there has to be 1 winner...n my vote goes to scarface...i say scarface cuz his punches were a lil harder n the personal sorta made me laugh..

v/scarface

if yall got time...drop sum feedback n votes on my otha battle in my sig..wanna close em but i stil need sum more votes...be very appreciated;thanx

Peace