JONESY _UK VS Godfather(2)

[JONESY_UK]

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Checkin In

G/l Bro

[JONESY_UK]

you checkin in?????........................................... ......hurry up and spit

[JONESY_UK]

aight im gunna spit mine, and i know we decided on 40 mins after checkin but ima give you 2 more hours as i see your offline..... im new here so what happens if hes a no show?


checkit

You can call this a nightmare, or a dream if you rather.
Cos I see ur a dreamer thinkin ur a godfather.
Your far from tha real Don Vito Corleone
The closest you been to blood is ya mums home made steak you foney.
The truth is sicko you a peido lookin after kids, ya minds so fuckin bent.
They don’t call you Godfather they call you Godparent.
Now you stay in your city, the place you call norfolk.
Its right tho, you NORA FOLK, you a bitch a faggot a BIG JOKE.
Ive killed you in this battle, you’ve had no luck, so go crawl back in ya grot hole.
I pray for you and your family, lets hope your momma has more luck this Saturday on tha Lotto.


aight hurry godfather ....................

[Godfather(2)]

Ayo I got you Wrecked n ontact lease Spit out My Fist cuz when I Rip Out Ya Disks I aint talkin about Ejectin Compacts
My Texts Beyond That No Healin Pleasure when my punches are Stealin Treasure cuz ya Chest Is Gone Man
Im sick of this dude I cant stop laughin, let a Gay Geek Destroy Me
Im Praying He's Toying cuz I'll leave Poetik wit more breaks than Lazy Employees
Dawg Im here to mutilate you for some Rappin And Health
You got ya hand in ya lap looks like you the only one Clappin Yourself
But yo I got a Lesson To Teach I'll have you Restin In Sleep so keep Testin The Beef
Only reason you think you hood is cuz you grew up watchin Sesame Street
Addressin This Geek I Smack Nerds Rip It so hard I can Clap Herbs Gifted
Plus I heard you get hard from behind like a Backwards Fitted
I'll take you to your casket and fill ya Yard Wit Plots, whether you Hard Or Not, you'll get Scarred Wit Shots
And you know he a true bitch when he couldnt get head inside of Barber Shops

[JONESY_UK]

u took ya time man......................ok uppin x1

[Godfather(2)]

Yeah i am in school you Uppin 1x

[Born To Kill]

Ayo...I got you wrecked on contact...please spit out my fist cuz when I rip out ya disks I aint talkin about ejectin compacts
My texts beyond that...no healin pleasure when my punches are stealin treasure cuz ya chest is gone man
Im sick of this dude, I cant stop laughin, let a gay geek destroy me?
Im praying he's toying, cuz I'll leave Poetik wit more breaks than lazy employees
Dawg, Im here to mutilate you for some rappin and health
You got ya hand in ya lap...looks like you the only one clappin yourself
But yo I got a lesson to teach...I'll have you restin in sleep so keep testin the beef
Only reason you think you hood is cuz you grew up watchin Sesame Street
Addressin this geek...I smack nerds rip it so hard I can clap herbs gifted
Plus I heard you get hard from behind like a backwards fitted
I'll take you to your casket and fill ya yard with plots, whether you hard or not, you'll get scarred with shots
And you know he a true bitch when he couldnt get head inside of barbershops

Doesn't that look 1000X better, Godfather?

I'm no herb, haven't been for a while...

I can clearly catch ya flow, ya metas, ya wordplay...
All that shit.
So can everyone else.

Immediately!
Stop using that bullshit, ~ //, " " right now and never do it again.

The fact ya 0-2 and still trying tells me ya wanna get better...
Well, format, overall appearance, is kinda where ya start.
Cuz, ya not writing whack shit, it's good, way better than Jonesy's shit.
But all ya gonna get is negative feedback, and alot of ignored time...
If peeps don't even like how ya shit LOOKS!
Ya really think they're gonna take the time to read it?
And, it took a year to sort through all that shit, it must take even longer to add it.
Save yaself some fuckin time and chill!
And shorten ya lines some...even with all the bullshit cut out, they were still stretched some.

But ya got potential, just take advice...
Don't believe me? Just ask anyone in Elite...

Jonesy, I'm sorry, ya shit sucked...
From the forced rhyme in the first line...
The "steak" line was painfully whack to read...
The name flip on his city was so sad and weak...
And all "lotto" disses are played the fuck out.

I do like the fact that you tried alot of personals...
Those are good, real good at winning battles.
Just do em right and with more wit/wordplay.

Peace

[Godfather(2)]

uppin for more votes

[Godfather(2)]

Vote.............................................. .................................................. ................1

[Godfather(2)]

Please vote on my battle please don't sleep on this

[Godfather(2)]

Can i get some more votes on this battle please vote up

[Godfather(2)]

Damn can i get a vote goddammit i vote a lot of ppl and you can come vote for me

[Morbid Manner]

god had some really clever stuff like the first 5 or so lines his flow was sick and alot similar to my style with alot of good similies and his verse was very easy to read

jones i hate to dothis coz ur from the uk like me but ur flow was basic
not every line rymed and the ones that did it was only the last word ur metas were poor and it just wasnt clever
vote -god

i take the time to look at urs return the favour and vote honestly on these,
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116940

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117127

vs impendance
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116219

[Godfather(2)]

vote

[Godfather(2)]

I am still uppin for votes i will hit ur battle up wit honest votes also