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rec-d
code-187
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yo, i hope u ready with them pre-written lyrics,
aiight, lets go---
first of all i hold this bitch, in the palm of my fist
wrip off his mic hand, and stitch up his wrist
you're a brittle bitch, your rhymes are as gay as skittles gitch
Ma one line sentence will get u shock and back down
Like a braveheart quick to back down
I will blow ur lights out
Like am blowing out a candle
Try and handle this like a hammer
With more calmer and an armour
check the hit list and chill
may be u might come back with better lyrics.
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its game over when a step on da mic/
am ridin' in tracks in ridin' in bics/
holla
watch me as i "rec-d", so ele-gant-ly,
HE aint man enough to test just call him MEL-AN-NIE
if he put his dick in his mouth he couldt cum with nothin hard
say IM pre-writen when u post 4 minutes afta the battle start
i graze on hearts, like urs, and gorge eyes out
while u stay at home get horny and through old apple pies out(after hes fucked thEM)
this guy's been deprived of oxygen to the brain
u tried hard its a shame but it was all in vein
add 1 loss to rec-d's record, u see
were both amateur but i just pissed on this geek
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leave ur battle links
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Rec-d
Erm.....elavate. Throw punches, structure it better. Improve your flow and be more creative. Overall very bad verse...
Code-187
Also a bad verse. No hard punches but harder than rec's. More creative and better flow.
v/ Code-187
Hit up my battle against Godfather in my sig
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...The Rhymes
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There not much to say for this battle it was WEAK and i wasn't feeling it on there real but anyways i feel code took it cuz rec sucks and code u need to elevate dude
V/Code
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MY AIM IS ETEJOHNSON
Both were weak but im giving this one to Code 187. Red C Had Very Basic Lines And So Did Code 187 But He Had Slightly Better Punchlines Than Red-C. I Just Liked This Line:
"if he put his dick in his mouth he couldt cum with nothin hard
say IM pre-writen when u post 4 minutes afta the battle start" and i think that was enough to win it so my vote goes to code 187. Pe@ce
rec-d: wow man, you really need to elevate alot. There is no hate whatsoever here, you just need to improve your structure, rhyme scheme, basically almost everything. However, you had some good ideas, just need to work on the other parts. Your flow was quite choppy, and the rhyming was off on a few bars. Just keep battling man, try to battle tough opponents and learn, read other battles and shit..if ur serious about improving.
code-187: I liked your shit man, however, as I've been told when I first got here, Id advise ya not to separate each bar, keep it all as one whole verse, ya know what I'm sayin? Looks cleaner I guess..I'm just goin by what other people have told me, I've gotten hits for it and its costed me votes before, so yea. You had some nice personals, most of the punches hit, creative opener..had a good play on his name. The only thing I'd suggest other than what I've said already, is work on your closer. It's the last thing they read, and the last impression they get of your whole verse. Just a tip.
Overall, code gets my vote, for a more well-developed verse in most if not all categories.
Vote: code-187
I'll poll vote once you peep my battle vs Cannabarz..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=118894 (in case you forgot)
code-187 takes this 1 for sure
flow: code had a gud flow with nice rhymes and a gud wordplay, vocabulairy was decent; rec also had a gud flow but his voc. and wordplay was limited.....
punchlines: code had punches which came thru hard and which were nicely formulated; rec punches were kinda played I had the impression
personals: code personals were hot and came thru harder, much harder than rec
multis: code had more multis and they were great so....
overall vote/ code187 return the favour ma, check my battles in my signature
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I NEED 1 MORE VOTE
vot honestly ,explain votes and ill get back at-cha
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wow this was one weak battle.....
Code 187 - you had better structure but it was still whack, your punches where there but they wernt landing that hard, all around you need to to elevate, take a look at some other battles.... learn...
rec-d - ummmm evry categorie needs work.... go check out rb help centre and learn how to write a decent verse.... i suggest start with your structure cause it was completely off
conlusion - both of you need alot of practice an help with your verses, code 187 takes this
vote - code 187
return the favour take a look drop an honest vote:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=120024
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