10 lines
House Rules
Good Luck
10 lines
House Rules
Good Luck
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
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check, drop soon, I'll try to drop soon after that
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
Am gonna leave Brethen more exposed than Janet
Kid tried to elevate..
But his wackness had more gravity than this planet
Kid posts in the battle " house Rules" errr no thanks
Unlike in your house i aint into whips handcuffs and spanks
honestly man your a kid from you sig writing to you avatar
squashed Brethen painted him in gold than hanged him.......
only way he could even come close to being a star
Even if Brethen got dopness injected into every cell
Wackness cells like bad sins.. would send em all to hell
Because he cant cope .. with anything dope.. and hes desolving
Turned brethen into bacteria ..gave him a million years....
and he still could start evolving....
Ekis so far ahead of brethen ... speed of light wouldnt help
Brethens spits are nothing..
you could hold em..and they still wouln't be felt
Ill use a invisable Meta.... And compare hes skill
so much nothing... like in your verse the contence off -ill
comeon man post............................................
I'm trying to drop, but I keyed my verse, and my computer shut down so I gotta re-do it all. This time I'm writing it down. Damn, if you didn't drop 18 lines
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
oright oright...... becaoue that happened when i was doing a long ass feedback today ill forgive ya
Turned brethen into bacteria ..gave him a million years....
and he still couldn't start evolving....
one typo...
Eki's throwing a punch at nobody, when was this bitch accepted?
Your verse was ass backwards ... kinda like your shit is dyslexic,
Stabbing his chest in, with your inside out verse like manic depression,
You a walking diagnostic test, you teach me?! My standards are lessoned, (lessened)
Preist I have a confession, I never wrote a dope line, just 18 line suicide letters,
Who am I better than?!, I'm fake see, even my truest lines are headers,
Here's a peroid (.), I'll watch and see if you can flip a noise tight,
Eki failed at being wack, he couldn't even diss-a-point right,
You got an advantage on me?! Like having AIDS on Erkle's,
I'll have you sweating red more than gatorade commercials,
Why you alway got fags on ya mind, if anybodies gay your worse,
I slayed your verse, you sit and make a diss thread, just to obey-your-thirst,
You got the crowd like "wack, wack" the way your verse is so fowl, (foul, duck, wack)
Brethren's versatyle, need help, ^^^ haven't been to church in a while,
On stage with that garbage, like a crack head, quick to be givin the cane,
You livin a game, Fag's on your brain stem, why you got Spinal Bifida pain,
Eki, from Mike & Ike flipped his name to go solo, switched companies so what,
After I beat his ass with a 3 foot long bat, watch this 'fruit roll up'.
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
Am gonna leave Brethen more exposed than Janet
Kid tried to elevate..
But his wackness had more gravity than this planet
Played out first line..second was Ok
Kid posts in the battle " house Rules" errr no thanks
Unlike in your house i aint into whips handcuffs and spanks
kinda played..but ok
honestly man your a kid from you sig writing to you avatar
squashed Brethen painted him in gold than hanged him.......
only way he could even come close to being a star
stretched bar...kinda weak
Even if Brethen got dopness injected into every cell
Wackness cells like bad sins.. would send em all to hell
blah
Because he cant cope .. with anything dope.. and hes desolving
Turned brethen into bacteria ..gave him a million years....
and he still could start evolving....
nice
Ekis so far ahead of brethen ... speed of light wouldnt help
Brethens spits are nothing..
you could hold em..and they still wouln't be felt
played
Ill use a invisable Meta.... And compare hes skill
so much nothing... like in your verse the contence off -ill
ok
Eki's throwing a punch at nobody, when was this bitch accepted?
Your verse was ass backwards ... kinda like your shit is dyslexic,
decent
Stabbing his chest in, with your inside out verse like manic depression,
You a walking diagnostic test, you teach me?! My standards are lessoned, (lessened)
good
Preist I have a confession, I never wrote a dope line, just 18 line suicide letters,
Who am I better than?!, I'm fake see, even my truest lines are headers,
weak and stretched
Here's a peroid (.), I'll watch and see if you can flip a noise tight,
Eki failed at being wack, he couldn't even diss-a-point right,
just ok
You got an advantage on me?! Like having AIDS on Erkle's,
I'll have you sweating red more than gatorade commercials,
ok...kinda weak tho
Why you alway got fags on ya mind, if anybodies gay your worse,
I slayed your verse, you sit and make a diss thread, just to obey-your-thirst,
played
You got the crowd like "wack, wack" the way your verse is so fowl, (foul, duck, wack)
Brethren's versatyle, need help, ^^^ haven't been to church in a while,
ok...kinda weak/played
On stage with that garbage, like a crack head, quick to be givin the cane,
You livin a game, Fag's on your brain stem, why you got Spinal Bifida pain,
wasn't feelin it
Eki, from Mike & Ike flipped his name to go solo, switched companies so what,
After I beat his ass with a 3 foot long bat, watch this 'fruit roll up'.
ok closer
This was a close battle...but I gotta give this to Breth...Eki came with too many played lines..Like the whole Janet Jackson nipple thing is so played out already
PLease drop an honest vote here...I took the time for yall http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114158
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Eki - didnt like the opener.. incredibly old already.. flowed well tho thru out.. pretty personal an some nice metas made for effective punches.. fell off a couple of times wiv some played lines tho..
Brethren - u also had alot of general disses.. not enuff personals thru out really.. but u had more than Eki an urs were more effective.. cos they were pretty creative an witty.. strangely the "wack wack" line caused a chuckle.. but in retrospect it was weak.. u did enuff to edge this battle tho..
VoTe = Brethren
Drop a vote on this plz:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112698
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ok uppin #1 .
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
Follow the link i left plz..
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I will calm down buddy, I'm at school. I'll do it later
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
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