Oakley Vs. Lyric

[Oakley]

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[Oakley]

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This kid's a moron, and I'm being modest...
His avi's his idea of portraying an artist/1
seriously, he sit's an votes like he's hardcore..
but goes to the WEC for punches n metiphores?../2
Why not elevated? Oh wait, that's right you'd get beat..
You aint got enuff Arson'ill to be say your Elite/3(sig)
Even Hottie said it, IJL? ya'll aren't respected...
Don't you understand, your prone to clownish efforts/4
An what's up wit your title sayin "don't fuck with me"?
Please...
Your only talents hiding underrated's anal beads/5

[Laureate]

Oak spoke too soon,Now he's in Doub jeopardy and screwed
Q: This is a herbbish move...
...A: What is Oakley callin out the IJL crew
You said you'd 5-0 both me and UnderRated...bitch
Now this kats got ya tongue...
...Cause vets conclude...your drop aint shit
You come with weak punches played rhymes, you at ya peak
And do all of RB a favor...
...Please don't look before you leap
You aint got nothin ta back ya shit up, jus anutha newb who acts hard
Jus a wannabe MC from Maryland got as much respect as ya avatar (none)
PMin me like mad ... sayin I'm no vet and you'll KO me dude
Not even the Oaks in ya sig will protect from my 'sonning' you



1st bar...Jeopardy...answer in the form of a question...yeah...lets get some votes

[Quelude]

This kid's a moron, and I'm being modest...
His avi's his idea of portraying an artist/1
Cool punch..not a hard one but it hit. 7/10
seriously, he sit's an votes like he's hardcore..
but goes to the WEC for punches n metiphores?../2
Another good punch...a lil played...but it was cool. 6/10
Why not elevated? Oh wait, that's right you'd get beat..
You aint got enuff Arson'ill to be say your Elite/3(sig)
A lil Wordplay here...I don't see the relevancy ( his name isn't Arson or anything) but it works.7/10
Even Hottie said it, IJL? ya'll aren't respected...
Don't you understand, your prone to clownish efforts/4
A personal thrown in...I don't care much for the second line..6/10
An what's up wit your title sayin "don't fuck with me"?
Please...
Your only talents hiding underrated's anal beads/5
Personal..punch..tight closer 7/10

[Oakley]

Why not elevated? Oh wait, that's right you'd get beat..
You aint got enuff Arson'ill to be say your Elite/3(sig)
A lil Wordplay here...I don't see the relevancy ( his name isn't Arson or anything) but it works.7/10
gotta read his sig....it say's
Arson Ill
Da Elite

[Quelude]

Oak spoke too soon,Now he's in Doub jeopardy and screwed
Q: This is a herbbish move...
...A: What is Oakley callin out the IJL crew
Good opener..the creativity is what makes this great. 9/10
You said you'd 5-0 both me and UnderRated...bitch
Now this kats got ya tongue...
...Cause vets conclude...your drop aint shit
Cool punch..not much doing here... 6/10
You come with weak punches played rhymes, you at ya peak
And do all of RB a favor...
...Please don't look before you leap
Another so so line..i feel you..just a lil played ..7/10
You aint got nothin ta back ya shit up, jus anutha newb who acts hard
Jus a wannabe MC from Maryland got as much respect as ya avatar (none)
Not too creative here..threw in a personal...7/10
PMin me like mad ... sayin I'm no vet and you'll KO me dude
Not even the Oaks in ya sig will protect from my 'sonning' you
Not bad..not great...7/10

[Quelude]

Oakley..33/50...i'll give you ONE point for not getting the arson thing..34/50
Lyric 35/50...good battle.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113614

Can't vote with a point system. Gone.
-Axe

[Intoxicated]

Good battle... I think oakley got this...

he had good punches and some personals... flow was a lil short sometimes.... a solid 5 bars

what lyrics did with the Question and Answer shit was gay... besides that i didnt think the punches hit very hard... The avatar line was played, especially since Oakley took a crack at the avy first... I did like the closing line tho, nice personal/wordplay

"PMin me like mad ... sayin I'm no vet and you'll KO me dude
Not even the Oaks in ya sig will protect from my 'sonning' you"


Oakley:

"This kid's a moron, and I'm being modest...
His avi's his idea of portraying an artist/1"

"An what's up wit your title sayin "don't fuck with me"?
Please...
Your only talents hiding underrated's anal beads/5"



Good battle but Oakley took this...

CAN I PLEASE GET A VOTE ON THIS BATTLE PLEASE

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110068

[Savir]

This kid's a moron, and I'm being modest...
His avi's his idea of portraying an artist/1
cool..solid start..5/10

seriously, he sit's an votes like he's hardcore..
but goes to the WEC for punches n metiphores?../2
lol..if true..6/10

Why not elevated? Oh wait, that's right you'd get beat..
You aint got enuff Arson'ill to be say your Elite/3(sig)
eh...4/10

Even Hottie said it, IJL? ya'll aren't respected...
Don't you understand, your prone to clownish efforts/4
didnt like...2/10

An what's up wit your title sayin "don't fuck with me"?
Please...
Your only talents hiding underrated's anal beads/5
no no no ..damn..1/10/

overall for oak...18



Oak spoke too soon,Now he's in Doub jeopardy and screwed
Q: This is a herbbish move...
...A: What is Oakley callin out the IJL crew
lmao...never seen this..for that fact...7/10

You said you'd 5-0 both me and UnderRated...bitch
Now this kats got ya tongue...
...Cause vets conclude...your drop aint shit
hmm...worded badly..3/10

You come with weak punches played rhymes, you at ya peak
And do all of RB a favor...
...Please don't look before you leap
played concept..but coo..5/10

You aint got nothin ta back ya shit up, jus anutha newb who acts hard
Jus a wannabe MC from Maryland got as much respect as ya avatar (none)
good try..but forced personal..4/10

PMin me like mad ... sayin I'm no vet and you'll KO me dude
Not even the Oaks in ya sig will protect from my 'sonning' you
syllable count off..but coo..4/10

overall for lyric...23

winner is lyric...more consistent..
oakely coulda taken this but fell of badly at the end..
the anal beads line was wack.....took away any momentum
on my voting numbers...winner lyric..

[Oakley]

uppin

[Trahedy Siphon]

I think....
Break dun:

punches: Oak
Personals: not many...but oak
Flow:Edged by Oak
Structure:Oak

again


not a white wash but a close battle wit all
categories edged by oak.......

Hit this up in return plz

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112266

ta

Vote Gone.
-Axe

[Diverse]

punches:i think oakley just came more consistent in this battle, there were nice punches by both but he just stayed at his opponent more..

personalsakley yet again took the personals category, lyric didn't have much to work with seeing as oak is a new member and he didn't know much about him, but oak used a few personals against lyric so that's why he wins this category

openerf the two verses oak started his off better, got right into the battle

closerakley's closer was weak, lyrics closer was dope, he ended his verse very nicely

overallakley just came more consistent, if lyric would have drop the way he did in some spots he would have had himself another win, i just don't think he dropped to full potential maybe? all in all, nice battle, Oakley's doing well making a name for himself so far....pz.

[Oakley]

uppin

[rule]

This kid's a moron, and I'm being modest...
His avi's his idea of portraying an artist/1
Good opener....6/10

seriously, he sit's an votes like he's hardcore..
but goes to the WEC for punches n metiphores?../2
LOL...good shit...6.5

Why not elevated? Oh wait, that's right you'd get beat..
You aint got enuff Arson'ill to be say your Elite/3(sig)
Good personal 5/10

Even Hottie said it, IJL? ya'll aren't respected...
Don't you understand, your prone to clownish efforts/4
Should'a been worded differently...3/10

An what's up wit your title sayin "don't fuck with me"?
Please...
Your only talents hiding underrated's anal beads/5
Started off good but lost it...3/10

overall:23.5/50



Oak spoke too soon,Now he's in Doub jeopardy and screwed
Q: This is a herbbish move...
...A: What is Oakley callin out the IJL crew
^^Good line..I think the answer should of been worded different....7/10

You said you'd 5-0 both me and UnderRated...bitch
Now this kats got ya tongue...
...Cause vets conclude...your drop aint shit
Okie..i think 5-0 should'a maybe said merked or something...5/10

You come with weak punches played rhymes, you at ya peak
And do all of RB a favor...
...Please don't look before you leap
Okie line:5/10

You aint got nothin ta back ya shit up, jus anutha newb who acts hard
Jus a wannabe MC from Maryland got as much respect as ya avatar (none)
Stated off okie but ended shitty 2/10

PMin me like mad ... sayin I'm no vet and you'll KO me dude
Not even the Oaks in ya sig will protect from my 'sonning' you
Good closer I liked the name play...6/10

Over all:25/50

Over all Lyric came harder more consistant...close though....oakley i thought you had this but that was before I read lyrics verse...i see your elavating every drop though...keep it up

Can you both hit up the battle in my sig honestly please thanks

[Laureate]

up...drop a link and I'll return the favor with an honest vote