10-16 lines
blind spit
drop in a hour...
after ya checkin....
10-16 lines
blind spit
drop in a hour...
after ya checkin....
Pussy????????????????????????????????????????????? ????
checkin in................................................ ..........
aite...
Just a Old man Wheelin his Wheelchair.come on Dawg Retire..
Had to stop Chasin his Dreams...cuz his Arms were Tired ..
Learn my craft cause to me: This fucking nerd is basic..
Cause if losing builds character..Tox..you’re it’s 1st creation.
Seen Ya Pic Tox…Not a Pretty Site,just plenty of spots..
He look so much like E.T. CBS gave him their 7:30 slot..
Naw dude aint dope I’ll solve em by layin some big gunholes…
You might think he’s a problem the way Tox. stays unknown..
Wanna end ya life wit the biggest knifes, never leavin ya house
YA figure lifes a bitch,
So Text Will Play death an be who u been dreamin about..
Im stayin 100Proof .. so I get mad when Im sober..
Your verse had a such a happy ending.. nah, we’re just glad it was over..
Blind spits?? I know u gonna diss my-pics... i must be a psychic/
go ahead n try it... i'll freeze you solid then hit u wit an ice pick/
my punchlines are acid... one hit and ya brain is jus fried/
i could beat you if i was holding back... like straining my rhymes/
Nuthin but a pussy... you could run... or stay and just die/
Oh look... that's LT behind the window... waving goodbye/ **
what...you could smell ya moms pussy even before i checked in??/
Usually I would never forget to brush before i score my next win/
Wanna bet me, that you aint got the right to be an emcee??/
I'll shoot 'hoops wit ya eyeballs' just to prove you only 'net-see'/
1 hour?? shits a stresser... no way LT can spit wit the pressure/
i'll rip ya record... wanna way out?? go find the 'X' like hidden treasure!/
yo faggot... why you check out guys pics?? I bet you like it/
call me Blade... cuz you try'n bite me... like Wesley Snipes bitch/
I have a question... you made a callout... but only for skills/
so did you mean everyone else or were you not including yourself?/
YO LUMINARY TOOK THIS...AN IGHT BATTLE....BUT LUMINARY AND BETTER FLOW.....BOTH YALL PUNCHES HIT ALRIGHT...BUT NOT REAL HARD.......BUT IT WAS KOOL...........
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Intox had the right idea, but his punches and shit jus weren'y origina or hard enough to play a factor. Not bad for a newb. Lum came decent, one of ya better raps. Nice punches and a few good metas. Vote-Lum
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yo coo battle, both had sum good flows, not bad punches and personals...Luminary not a bad flow and scheme, punches were aight, person on his pic was aight too. intoxicated ya had a lil betta flow i though, ya had sum nice punches that hit the hoops line and joke bout his moms pussy i laughed...lmao...i gotta give it to tox his shit made me laugh more. vote-intoxicated
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Aight this is how I saw this shit...
Text came played as hell..
seriously.. ya first 4 lines have been played to shit
And ya closer was tha most played closer ever..
Tox had some very creative wordplay
He had personals that hit hard along with his punches
Text.. only had a couple personals from what I could tell
Tha CBS punch and tha sober...
But tox was just more consistant
so
v/Intoxicated
no hate....just my opinion...peace
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ok battle this seemed mre like a midle weight match
luminery you bost like you a heavyweight but i have far from seen what you doing. in this battle i think you came to basic, your flow wa on key but you had weak punches, only the et line i was feeling,
intox you had aloota good wordplay and punches like the net see line and shit but still you eed to work on structure don't stretch your lines to much.
vote.tux
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Text got this one in my book. Tox had an alright verse but his opener and closer were a little more played than Text's. Both had some nice decent punches but, Text's were harder, but at the same time Tox had the better personals.Texts flow was a litle better also.Keep it up Tox your gettin hella better dude.
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Damn man I had a whole breakdown by every line and shit... and I hit the back button goddamn it
well now I'm only going to do a quick breakdown cuz I already wasted like 10 minutes on this...
Text took this - the punches, although some were slightly played... were funny as hell and had me laughing my ass off.
Tox - pretty weak, Seen better, just focus on personals and punches man. ok drop though
so Text takes this one. Now since I spent all this time on this thread LOL please take the time to drop an honest vote here
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