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Last edited by Token; February 13th, 2004 at 11:18 PM
You never been dope, and yet kid, you're a has-been
Token..
The admins are addin an arcade hack...to get rid off your ass in
& you thinkin you'd beat me, is just provin this slut's dumb
is just provin this slut's dumb..
^ Was that Deja Vu?...nope, that's the crew you got cut from
With quotes like that, I dont know if you stupid, or what's the issueOriginally posted by Token
This shall be my fuel to beat Booga.
This fag needs fuel to beat me....most people just use a tissue
So fuck wut this herb says, I dont even quote the gayness
Cuz Im the token black guy
Razah's the token Mexican....so that makes you the Token Nasif
See, I dont hafta try to beat you, when all the votin is sober
I could prolly win, just typin "Im Rick James Bitch!"..over and over
Plus we know u a drug addict & wut you postin..it still is wack
First kid to get knocked offa his High horse..for tryin to steal it's crack
12
...I only wish I was a has-been.. Because I'm still elevating homie...
You're being sonned.. And your of no worth
Last time I said "That a Boy"....Was at your birth!
I'll eat this kid alive.. leave him hollow of bone
Told him I'd ring his neck....So he swallowed the phone
Your secrets out.. we all know you're wack at best
Kid your bold....When you put [b] around your text!
You have no hope.. your provoking a champ
I'll fuckin kill you....Just to give you a Ghost of a Chance!
I'll hammer his throat.. until his face is dull
And yeah I hit rock bottom....When punching the base of your skull
Bitch.
Last edited by Token; February 15th, 2004 at 12:03 AM Reason: Structure switch.. I didn't change any lines or nothin.. just the structure. I saved the original in case you bitch.
hmm.. close one here
booga came strong in his first few bars but after that
just fell off, with bland punches. Didn't really hit
with much effect, at least not to me.
Tokens first few lines were okay, not much effect
but gradually got better n' better. I liked the punches
n' he was original with his shit
v/ Token
Artificial Intelligence.
I saw this one sided..Booga was fire..
token was cool but booga was on another level.
the tissue line the last line..if u didnt get them theres
something wrong..and the nasif line..if u dont know the story u wont get it.
v/Booga
Bribeone
Artificial Intelligence
Word.. Nasif line was dope.. but the tissue line.. I mean.. gay punch? I don't know man.. think about that one.
Booga...that Deja Vu line was dope...and the Nasif and tissue onez were too...but I think that Token just edged this one out due to consistency...his whole verse was good for the most part...so...
vote-Token
Gotta go with Token, peeps...
Man, for the shortness of that verse...
He had me cracking up.
Booga played his own name and really did well...
But the 'arcade'...eh...
The 'crew/cut from'...eh.
I'll give him humor for the 'Rick James'...
But isn't that kinda already played.
We all saw it.
So, for having literally every line quotable...
And for more wit with less typing.
(at least to me it was that way)
Token
Closer than I expected it to be. However, Token came with WAY too many played punches. Booga's punches had a lot more creativity to them and were much harder hitting. Easy away from any punches having to do with referring to bold, ghost of a chance, and ring your neck lines. All played. Also...rock bottom/base of skull line was okay..but it wasn't very hard hitting. You're getting much better with your wording Token...just work on Creativity. As for this battle...
Vote ~ Booga
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Erm... not to be a bitch but sure the concepts may be a little played. I flipped them into being original. I'm not trying to sway.. just saying.
I'm winning.
3-2.
Well I had to read this three times now
I had it completely even.
So I looked for the bar of the battle
That belonged to Booga
The arcade and the nasif lines killled this battle
Vote- Booga
AI
lol...swayers never prosper homie lol...
3-3
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Last edited by Booga; February 14th, 2004 at 04:56 PM
like chrit said..this battle was to close to kall.....
so i picked out the best bars of both verses....
and that belonged to token...
that was his Ghost line against booga's arcade line...
IMO....vote - Token
Hmm..close battle...
Both had good concepts...
Liked tokens flow a bit better though
Both had good wordplay
..Booga had more personals
so it came down to tha punches
Booga had 2 solid punches..his first two
Token had 3 solid punches...his middle 3
Close battle though...but
v/ Token
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