Born To Kill(1-1) vs. Auspicuous(1-1)

[Richard Parker]

check in's by: wednesday.
verses due: friday, 12 am Eastern Time.
Read LLL rules. Read LLL announcement.
Agree on line limit in check in.

[Auspicious]

in.. im going 12-16
..........................

[Born To Kill]

That's fine with me...

Good luck, Aus.

Voted On:

Com vs. BI Detained
Aisle 5 vs. Fuexion
Trapt Wit vs. M~M
Sand vs. Jacent

[Born To Kill]

I'm wasting ya time rappin with Aus in mind...
Cuz considering the topic, this'll be a worthless rhyme.
He's been here forever, though he's not a worthy foe...
Cuz Aus tried ta get his freak on, by opening a sideshow.
And that was just this morning, as Thug he was whacker...
Whyte was missin the wise, so we just called him cracker.
Reality shows he's short on wits, ta attract ideas he wears perfume...
But he hooked up with a bad one, and became the Littlest Groom.
Yet he's still dickrode, kids on ya like a damn leech...
But they're only there for advice cuz those who can't do, teach.
So I oughta call ya professor the way ya raps stink...
Everytime he spits close to ill, Aus starts takin zinc.
So for real, why in fuck didn't ya vote on me and Sand?
Think I'm not worth tha read? Least I've never been banned.
Like you, fuckin biter...maybe forgiven but not forgotten...
Battlin Aus? Shiiiiiiit! I'd better copyright what I'm droppin.

[Auspicious]

umm btk.. last line woulda been good but i never bit.
Calda Merda had the same IP address as me.. dont get it twisted

but here we go..

I've been killin men, but BTK? He's barely a guy
why?
dude, Walter Wall had to scare to me to try (predictions)
Theres no hope when u write, no hope for when u speak
But to be honest, the older heads are gettin ill-
I've seen Evolve gettin doper by the week..
You win some, you lose some.. n' you've done a ton
he claims to battle vets
but fact is, you've lost to every single one of em'
Son, you've been battlin for 8 months, not even in contension
Not to mention
Born's on the road to success..... in the wrong direction
n' no moatter how much practice, hes a beligerant faggot
also, probably the only member on RB
To spend his retirement money on Internet Access
Bitch please, you beat me? believe i rip steeze
Merkings will occur Monday thru Friday
Thats strange, its Wedesnday... go on sick leave?
To be real tho, ya writtens garbage, n' freestyles wack
oh and man..
1982 called.. they asked for their style back

[Born To Kill]

I'm not getting anything twisted...

It's a battle.
(not everything is gonna be true, dude)

Unbunch ya panties...

And Peace

(Good drop)

[Auspicious]

just settin ya shit straight
I dont make jokes about you bein 12 when your 30 suttin

[Evolve]

Vote Aus

Made me laugh with the retirement money, 80's line & sick leave

B2K .. you need to work on you punches & metaphors man.. ther were a little dull & boring

[Jacent.]

V/ Auspicuous

This battle wasn't very good, both dropped bland verses & BTK was just bad, nothing connected at all, very overrated in my eyes, Aus, you came alright, sick leave was coo, but that was about it, last line was VERY played, don't do that again please...please come more decent next week...

[Chrit.]

Vote- Aus..

Better out of two very average verses

[Auspicious]

cool

[Aisle Phive]

Vote - Aus

Just came better, I wasn't really feeling BTK much at all.

[Born To Kill]

Damn...

I thought that Littlest Groom line woulda at least earned a laugh...

Last time I jot while watching American Idol on Fox!

Damn me and them!

Thanks for at least not ripping me left and right.

I will come better next round.

Sorry for slacking.

Peace

Congrats, Aus.

[Walter Wall]

V - Aus

Both were wack, but

Least he had a decent punch or 2 and enabled wordplay

B2k desperately needs elevation

[SmokaJoka]

wow...BTK's first week here he was decent......and Aus did pretty good....here's quotables....

Quotables:

Originally Posted by Born To Kill
So I oughta call ya professor the way ya raps stink...
Everytime he spits close to ill, Aus starts takin zinc.
So for real, why in fuck didn't ya vote on me and Sand?
Think I'm not worth tha read? Least I've never been banned.

^only part that caught my eye.....first line was blah....second was nice....third was blah...again...lol....and fourth was nice....

Originally Posted by Auspicious
You win some, you lose some.. n' you've done a ton
he claims to battle vets
but fact is, you've lost to every single one of em'

^nice personal....i've seen some familiar to this against BTK....but this is probably one of the best worded

Originally Posted by Auspicious
Son, you've been battlin for 8 months, not even in contension
Not to mention
Born's on the road to success..... in the wrong direction

^nice....also retirement money and the closer was nice...

Punches - Aus
Personals - Aus
Opener - Aus
Closer - Aus
Overall - ...Born u had one good hit in ur verse....the rest was blah....and the closer wouldve been nice if it were true....Aus had a harder hitting verse....and nice funny personals allthroughout....

Vote - Auspicious