LyRiCaLLyInSaNe1 --vs-- illtalic

[Its Illytizzle!™]

rules: 10-20 lines.. due 30 min afta check in.. no d/r.. hate.. feeding.. ETC.. blind spit drop at same time..

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[LyRiCaLLyInSaNe1]

che che checkin!.......................................... .................................................

[LyRiCaLLyInSaNe1]

aight........
thinkin u tough but u jus a fuckin act get off here n go to broadway/
or u can try n fuck wit me but trust me ull go the hard way/
haha look at his quote...damn right that illness aint catchin cuz u aint that sick!/
all u do is go in battles n vote for the crappy person...its called suckin dick/
see 4 lines in this battle n i already got aggrivated assualt/
i'da kill this cat if i hadnt got caught/
tryin to fight?! let it go n go to heaven/
if not ill deal wit ya...wish u died in 9-11/
thinkin u fuckin great...bitch yo bloods still blue/
think im playin bitch i will fuck around n kill u/
i go all out to finish this cat off and make sure he dont live/
have a fuckin bomb and go up to him BOOM my life wus the price i had to give/
spit u on the ground ya brains on the pavement/
so watch wut u say next time u makin a statement

[Its Illytizzle!™]

You hail from my girls mouth? Sorry mayn but that makes u my kids,
im exposin ur 'short comings' on the mic.. wiv lines to rip this flidd...
im winnin.. i can bet the whole site.. wateva.. skys da limit,
one punch is takin ya head off.. and ya chain fly wit it...
dawg u got sorry punches.. and ya fuckin diss wreaks,
fuck wit me, ill have u disfigured on wheels like chris reeves...
the only way i see u winnin is.. if i jus got disqualified,
last swing deckin you bitch, got ya aim singin a lullaby...
u still couldnt paint a 'perfect picture' against the sites fool,
strugglin against a herb makes u look like paraplegics in a swimmin pool...

[Wise Ways]

Hmm.. both had played lines(reeves,hard way)
Insane had a very simple verse and very elementry
(9-11)....flow was off..too
Itallic came aight though.. punches and personals were there(girls mouth,kid)
wordplay was there...flow was aight too
Umm..disqualified was weak thought but besides that

v/ Itallic

hit this up with an honest vote please....thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=112004&page=1

[LyRiCaLLyInSaNe1]

uppin #1................................................ ............................................

[Cels]

lyricaly - ya verse was pretty basic..it was filled it played lines and none direct punches..ya flow was choppy and wasnt consistent...wordplay - none was there and metas - none again... personals - blah... and punches overall - nope...ya punches werent hard hitting...try to include those things that u didtn have into them

illtalic - ya verse wasnt bad...ya stayed smooth through ya whole verse wit ya flow..structure was right on target and was perfect...ya had some decent and good punches in there...varied through out....ya personals were decent and they did hit him, they werent bad....overall you had a decent verse

V/ Ill...he came harder wit punches and personals and an overall harder hitting verse

[Its Illytizzle!™]

G'looks at the explanations..

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[Its Illytizzle!™]

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[Its Illytizzle!™]

the other bitch is hopin this'll disappear..

nope..

-uppn-

[Daffer22]

yo this battle was played, they both have hardly any lines that aeren't played
But I fell a nice flow with illtalic and I thought Insane hadn't got sum gud rhymes
Punches, they both had sum gud punches but illtalic was bettr cuz they just came harder and he also had more personals than Insane, both had a weak structure so they must work on this

overall vote: illtalic

[Its Illytizzle!™]

-uppn-

No. 4...

[Reeco]

LyRiCaLLyInSaNe1=

thinkin u tough but u jus a fuckin act get off here n go to broadway/
or u can try n fuck wit me but trust me ull go the hard way/
not a good opener
haha look at his quote...damn right that illness aint catchin cuz u aint that sick!/
all u do is go in battles n vote for the crappy person...its called suckin dick/
nice
see 4 lines in this battle n i already got aggrivated assualt/
i'da kill this cat if i hadnt got caught/
blah
tryin to fight?! let it go n go to heaven/
if not ill deal wit ya...wish u died in 9-11/
sorry but rubbish
thinkin u fuckin great...bitch yo bloods still blue/
think im playin bitch i will fuck around n kill u/
r u serious
i go all out to finish this cat off and make sure he dont live/
have a fuckin bomb and go up to him BOOM my life wus the price i had to give/
na. rubbish
spit u on the ground ya brains on the pavement/
so watch wut u say next time u makin a statement
shit finish

illtalic =

You hail from my girls mouth? Sorry mayn but that makes u my kids,
im exposin ur 'short comings' on the mic.. wiv lines to rip this flidd...
ok bar
im winnin.. i can bet the whole site.. wateva.. skys da limit,
one punch is takin ya head off.. and ya chain fly wit it...
ummm ok
dawg u got sorry punches.. and ya fuckin diss wreaks,
fuck wit me, ill have u disfigured on wheels like chris reeves...
ok i guess
the only way i see u winnin is.. if i jus got disqualified,
last swing deckin you bitch, got ya aim singin a lullaby...
its ok punch
u still couldnt paint a 'perfect picture' against the sites fool,
strugglin against a herb makes u look like paraplegics in a swimmin pool...
ok finish

thjis is how it went, flow and structure go to ill and also dose punches. lyric ya came weak and ya need to elevate, ill your verse was ok but i've seen better from you aswell.

Vote = illtalic

[Its Illytizzle!™]

I think i should be 4-0 up.. i seem to remember makin it 200+ posts to vote tho.. that'd explain it.

[Reeco]

sorry dogg i forgot to poll vote, i've done it now tho. pz sorry to freepost!!