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read LLL rules, agree on line limit... have fun
verses due friday, 12 am eastern time.
check in by wednesday...
read LLL rules, agree on line limit... have fun
Last edited by Jacent.; February 5th, 2004 at 08:52 AM Reason: Votes
WeRd....Dat's Kool...When U Droppin...
Let's Get Dis Shit Done Early....
Gh05t!
How you gonna brush god?, when I can't be touched
Cuz ape man didn't die, he was the allegory to this punch
I'm stockin up Al's losses, I know he aint the best though
Got'em for half-price, when I showed up with the Early-Bird special
This is music class bitch, I thought I told you to bring it
Told him to stand up, & this fucker started to sing it
Ur fuckin wack, just try and love mine kid
Allegory in LLL? you might as well invite the whole front lines in
I have no reason to diss, but I'll say you love gay men's balls
Cuz if I did find Allegory personals, it'd be encripted in cavemen walls
Take ya raps outta here, you just got ur flow robbed
& dude can't smell kiddie raps, when he's got a Michael Jackson nose job
I feel sorry duke, i know i left him in my wake
Al's like Carolina wideouts, he can't catch a break!
I've heard them all, Adjacent flips are old son
It takes balls to diss me, but first you gotta grow some!
Not a real champ, eh?...Jacent wasn't aware of his speech,
verses full of more kiddie shit..than Captain America breifs..
never sparing the weak...spittin about ur the best please!
son, ya verses got less pull..than Nairobi tug-of-war teams!
leave Jacent attached to morphine..Allegory's back in effect,
Jacent's on a roll? nahh..jus has rolls on the back of his neck..
im best.....defined.....Challenge?.....I blaze him for fun,
you winning? accidents happen...Jacent was created as one!
misplacing this chump..really think you're standing as victor?
leave Jacent crippled..on Big Wheels wit a Handicapped sticker..
rambling lyrics..truth hurts, knowin he's not as great as my roads
Gory put Techs to his Cheeks..like penalizing the Blazers Coach!
aim with scopes? nope! just sharp verbals splicing this herb,
talk about long lines..is this RapBattles........or Microsoft Word?
A Day of writing that verse...still up to your ol' shenanigans,
face it, ya spits have No Business here..like Homeless Manican's!
G' Luck Homie..
Gh05t!
hum... pretty good battle... both had good verses...
vote: Jacent... on harder... more direct punches... closer clinched it...
Al... not bad... pretty damn good actually... lil harder you'd've had it... no extremely played lines next time...
Tag'D
Legend: Merk Squad
vote - Jacent.
the invite the whole front lines in was my favorite punch of the battle. there was played stuff on both sides, ya'll really need to cut that out, lol. The captain america briefs ... was ok, didn't hit that hard. a few other above average lines on both sides. but this one went to jacent, close battle.
Jacent held it down.
Not really a bad battle, lmao @ the frontlines shit .. cavemens walls was coo' .. micheal jackson was G A YYYYY .. never do that again .. catch a break and the finish were okay ..
captain america was ehhh .. less pull i didnt like .. rolls on the neck, the wording was off but it was ok .. accidents happen ive seen before .. handicapped was ehh .. blazer coach i didnt like .. rofl @ microsoft word when your lines were longer than some of his .. kinda backfired .. haha .. manicans was okay
Overall id say my nigger got it. Fuck dickriding, i vote against him all the time. This is the first time in his last six ive voted for him and kids here know i dont d/r anyone but ehh .. he got you here man.
Vote - Jacent
Ehh I'm Going Against The Crowd Here.
I'm Cool With Both So They Know I'm
Voting Honestly.
Jacent - Your Verse Was Good But Overall
It Had A Few Punches That Made Me Go Lol No.
I.E. The Michael Jackson One. Other Than
That I Was Pretty Good.
Allegory - I Think Had The More Consistent Verse
But He Did Have One Ghey Punch Which Was The
Captain America One But I Still Thought His Verse
Was More Direct...
Vote - Al
KDotI
I'm godly
The Rebirth
Nice battle here but I expected a lot more
wittiness from both..Iunno why but I did
Iight
Jacent--> your punches were nice short and snappy but there was a lot
of yawning filler. they easily affected your verse in the end
but overall your verse was iight and your opening bar was funny
that was witty and jus made me chuckle
Allegory--> again your verse was funny, not amazingly hard
but i dint see the usual conformity to witty punching here
your punches in places were original, the Captains Briefs line
made me laff ma head off..dunny why but i jus kept on laffin
in the end, not a bad battle..jus needed more hard punches
V/Allegory
pz
I think Allegory took this one. I liked his punches more, and he was more consistent. I have to say jacents line about "Mine as well let the whole frontlines in" was pretty dope, but he wasnt consistent enough.
Neither's personals were that great, so I gotta give it to Al for punches. V/Allegory
Jacent had some really good lines, and some really long drawn out shit lines. Very inconsistent verse, that had a couple really good punches in it. Flow was way off.
Allegory's verse had some really nice punches, and likewise, also some really shit punches. His flow was more on point. However, gory did feed off Jacent's verse. Which is not allowed in the LLL. Although, not even taking that fact into consideration...
I still think Jacent took this.
Vote ~ Jacent
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Seven votes in this battle, none in mine, hmmmm.
Anyways, vote Jacent, he was just better.
i don't want Aisle Phive to vote in my battles....
for the simple fact he agreed with cam that i was some dude....
named youngblood....so ur vote dont count....
cause u hate on everyone and think ur god just like Lirael...
and Lethargic i did not feed what so ever....
i have no clue what ur talking about....
so...3-3...we are tied..i don't want Aisle voting...
You lost, deal with it.
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