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Consider this my check in.
Good luck, homie.
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Consider this my check in.
Good luck, homie.
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No poll? Any particular reason?
Check in..
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Ummm...
This is polled...
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Read this fags posts from top to bottom.. start wiv the sig
he's immediately G.O.N.. so much for makin it big...
Look at ur crew for a second.. the recruiters a Dazasta
a load of wack rejects lost in time.. an Banderas was just a starter...
A 1 in ur name makes u top of the class? I'd clown u wiv sheets
now im leavin ur mouth on the floor.. so ur really the Voice of the Streets...
Ur an oddity.. not a genius.. but still a freak of nature
your life is as good as over.. the minute my pen meets the paper...
With 10-14 lines i'll take the minimum required.. an still leave u tired
skills are fired.. u shoulda followed ur instinct an gracefully retired.../
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*his sig says “Comedic writer”
**Look at his costom title
Cant recognize illness, so u even come wack when your biting
And the only real comedy, is the fucking fact that your writing*
This ain’t a battle; it’s slaughter, cause this fuck lacks wisdom
I’ll bless him, and dump his corps in the water...like a baptism!
My raps split him, so I only have a prayer to offer his ken-folk
Before we battled,
I should have got on his level......by jumping out of my window!
Nigga, I use my spits as a gun and I’ll kill him with this weapon
I Upper-handed him some ill lines....But this bitch aint catching!...**
Not starting your car, or Taking a shit....Nigga, Nothing’s safe!
He though he’d win, but reality hit.....& broke his fucking face!
I’ve made a living bussing 8s, & I’m just learning to use this art
A win is nothing...
So I’ve decided to up the stakes...& drive’em through his heart !
-W1
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Last edited by Chris Black; February 1st, 2004 at 10:39 AM
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i will edit in a vote....
but untill then you forgot to poll on mine Wicked
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Read this fags posts from top to bottom.. start wiv the sig
he's immediately G.O.N.. so much for makin it big...
aight...solid punch...7/10
Look at ur crew for a second.. the recruiters a Dazasta
a load of wack rejects lost in time.. an Banderas was just a starter...
hmmm..didnt like this...worded bad...3/10
A 1 in ur name makes u top of the class? I'd clown u wiv sheets
now im leavin ur mouth on the floor.. so ur really the Voice of the Streets...
ok..not too much..6/10
Ur an oddity.. not a genius.. but still a freak of nature
your life is as good as over.. the minute my pen meets the paper...
not really a punch..pretty weak...3/10
With 10-14 lines i'll take the minimum required.. an still leave u tired
skills are fired.. u shoulda followed ur instinct an gracefully retired.../
shoulda come much harder for the closer...3/10
overall ...for illtalic....22/50....44%
Cant recognize illness, so u even come wack when your biting
And the only real comedy, is the fucking fact that your writing*
coo punch....liked this...8/10
This ain’t a battle; it’s slaughter, cause this fuck lacks wisdom
I’ll bless him, and dump his corps in the water...like a baptism!
weak...3/10
My raps split him, so I only have a prayer to offer his ken-folk
Before we battled,
I should have got on his level......by jumping out of my window!
played concept...average...5/10
Nigga, I use my spits as a gun and I’ll kill him with this weapon
I Upper-handed him some ill lines....But this bitch aint catching!...**
nice personal....8/10
Not starting your car, or Taking a shit....Nigga, Nothing’s safe!
He though he’d win, but reality hit.....& broke his fucking face!
lmao!!....8/10
I’ve made a living bussing 8s, & I’m just learning to use this art
A win is nothing...
So I’ve decided to up the stakes...& drive’em through his heart !
like the wordplay....8/10..strong final lines...
overall for wicked...40/60...wicked wins....
please vote here....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109739
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110950
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wtf?? i cant do it by breakind down bars??.......thats weak..
Last edited by GameTime; February 3rd, 2004 at 01:14 AM
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111506
help a nigg out and vote on this battle, ill return the favor peace
^ No..
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iight...
illtalic
Read this fags posts from top to bottom.. start wiv the sig
he's immediately G.O.N.. so much for makin it big...
Hmm... not bad really... 6/10
Look at ur crew for a second.. the recruiters a Dazasta
a load of wack rejects lost in time.. an Banderas was just a starter...
haha... nice one... hit hard... 8/10
A 1 in ur name makes u top of the class? I'd clown u wiv sheets
now im leavin ur mouth on the floor.. so ur really the Voice of the Streets...
Hmm... wasnt feelin this line... 5/10
Ur an oddity.. not a genius.. but still a freak of nature
your life is as good as over.. the minute my pen meets the paper...
dope... 9/10
With 10-14 lines i'll take the minimum required.. an still leave u tired
skills are fired.. u shoulda followed ur instinct an gracefully retired.../
not a bad closer... 7/10
overall... 35/50... decent verse flow was off at one point but you got it back... structure was decent... good... keep it up... pz
W1CKED
Cant recognize illness, so u even come wack when your biting
And the only real comedy, is the fucking fact that your writing*
very nice opener there... good... 8/10
This ain’t a battle; it’s slaughter, cause this fuck lacks wisdom
I’ll bless him, and dump his corps in the water...like a baptism!
hmm... concept wasnt that good... a didnt like it neway... didnt really hit... 5/10
My raps split him, so I only have a prayer to offer his ken-folk
Before we battled,
I should have got on his level......by jumping out of my window!
maybe its the way that a pronounce 'folk'... but it dont sound like window... but the last line of this bar was decent... played... but decent... 6/10
Nigga, I use my spits as a gun and I’ll kill him with this weapon
I Upper-handed him some ill lines....But this bitch aint catching!...**
Hmm... played out gun lines... but t was a decent bar... decent personal... 7/10
Not starting your car, or Taking a shit....Nigga, Nothing’s safe!
He though he’d win, but reality hit.....& broke his fucking face!
flow was terrible in this bar... a didnt like it neway... lol... 5/10
I’ve made a living bussing 8s, & I’m just learning to use this art
A win is nothing...
So I’ve decided to up the stakes...& drive’em through his heart !
decent closer... 6/10
overall... 37/60... not a bad verse... had some good personals in there... keep it up... pz
v/ illtalic...
honestly thought he took this... on the points^... and as his verse was more consistant... ive broke it down and the points were about even... even thought an extra bar was dropped by W1CKED... pz
OUT
Last edited by Freeman; February 2nd, 2004 at 07:05 AM
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Lets get some honest votes in here...
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V/ Wicked, .. due having harder punches and a more enjoyabler verse, italic came iite, .. but he had some fillers in my opinion , .. wicked had a straight verse, .. & took this due punches..
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v/ w1cked...
His punches were stronger and he hit harder with personals....illtalic had too many fillers and lacked the creativity which w1cked had.
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