GameTime vs. B.I.Detained

[Savir]

yup yup

10-12 lines i guess
due tomorrow or whenever we can..i wont no show so dont worry..
uhh..no hate, d/r, crew votes

no feeding...

yeah..basically...fat rematch will take place...lets do the damn thing...

[Mr.W.Rong]

In 4 the Win---
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[Savir]

yup...

I'll spit tomorrow.......................

[Savir]

Transfrom from Brix to BI..still havent turned to much
a fresh new start...
.......its still hard to get the old Brix off Emerge's nuts
yet you stay clinging..and englishman with no pride
you were an ill tag partner...
............................till u were dropped for Aisle 5
Elite status fine?..nope..the branch weighs heavily
so regress a few steps and fall back into peasantry
skeptics in ya alias..cant define ya sense of words
so try a new one and convey my verse into yours
trouble lurkes..you've walked into an inaudible section
good to provide an explanation..

In..
Expects Rejection<<

[Mr.W.Rong]

..Ok..

Brix completed this Game before..I no-showed to win the Fight
yea its True I won last time..but I got ma Sis' to Ghost Write
thats Right..feminine Traits were Used to Rewind Game's Time..
b/coz if Regret came in Years..he'd be Sentenced Line for Line
my oh My!!..Rocks Nas as his Avater..thinkin he'd Rise like Yeast
but ya cunt be Down any Further..so ya mite as well Rock Kelis
Fleece dis Obese Piece..but wen I say Fat..I mean he cant Move
..Games rhymes remain Static..so I guess he'll Stay put & Lose
Pre-writing Fool..probably been Digging up Personals Since 2003
Games whole Purpose in Life..is to say he came Close to Beating Me

[cutastraphe]

game got this shit, i felt his flow and punches allot more. Bi your shit was aight u had sumwut of a flow, i just didn't see any good personals or hard punches. anyways both verses need work but my vote-game

[cutastraphe]

oh wellllllllllllllllllllll i can't vote but i voted anyway...LOL

[Savir]

blah..uppin #1................................................ .

[GaZeeBo]

Aight heres the breakdown

GAMETIME

Transfrom from Brix to BI..still havent turned to much
a fresh new start...
.......its still hard to get the old Brix off Emerge's nuts
nice opener good punch
8/10

yet you stay clinging..and englishman with no pride
you were an ill tag partner...
............................till u were dropped for Aisle 5
i like this alot
good punch 8/10

Elite status fine?..nope..the branch weighs heavily
so regress a few steps and fall back into peasantry
didnt like as much
6/10

skeptics in ya alias..cant define ya sense of words
so try a new one and convey my verse into yours
didnt like also
6/10

trouble lurkes..you've walked into an inaudible section
good to provide an explanation..
Quote:
Originally Posted by B.I.Detained
In..
Expects Rejection<<
like it like it good closer
7/10

BI DETAINED

Brix completed this Game before..I no-showed to win the Fight
yea its True I won last time..but I got ma Sis' to Ghost Write
gave me a chuckle good opener
8/10

thats Right..feminine Traits were Used to Rewind Game's Time..
b/coz if Regret came in Years..he'd be Sentenced Line for Line
didnt like as much ok i guess
6/10

my oh My!!..Rocks Nas as his Avater..thinkin he'd Rise like Yeast
but ya cunt be Down any Further..so ya mite as well Rock Kelis
liked it alot
good punch 8/10

Fleece dis Obese Piece..but wen I say Fat..I mean he cant Move
..Games rhymes remain Static..so I guess he'll Stay put & Lose
ehhhh not sure about this kinda liked it and kinda didnt
7/10

Pre-writing Fool..probably been Digging up Personals Since 2003
Games whole Purpose in Life..is to say he came Close to Beating Me
lol best line of the battle greta punch great closer
10/10

Gametime-35/50
Bi Detained-39/50

good battle but Bi DeTained gets it in my opinion

hit up the battle in my sig both of you cuz this is not a hate vote
return the favor

[Mr.W.Rong]

1st uppin
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[Young Philly]

Well GameTime did Im me to vote.
So Idk if this should count.

But truthfully (and I wouldnt lie), I reallly did think Game won.

B. I.-You came sort of weak for what I usually see from you. I liked a few of the punches, but to be honest, your setups were horrible.

This-Games whole Purpose in Life..is to say he came Close to Beating Me, could have been part of a real great bar if the set up wasnt so wack. I mean, come on Brix, thats pretty elementary saying probably been Digging up Personals Since 2003. I was feeling some of your personals as well, but your verse just came off dissappointing due to the lack of good set ups.

Game-I didn't think your verse was "great' either, but I thought bars like yet you stay clinging..and englishman with no pride
you were an ill tag partner...
............................till u were dropped for Aisle 5

and your last bar with the quoted In... Expects rejection were good personals as well as hard punches, and these were what got it for you. I can't say you were consistent though, cause bars like Elite status fine?..nope..the branch weighs heavily
so regress a few steps and fall back into peasantry aren't what I call "hard-hitting".

So overall, I dont know if this will even be counted since I admit Game asked me to vote, but like I said, truthfully, I felt that GameTime took this one.

[Savir]

well uppin #2..........if u dont count i dont care..but i asked dude to vote honestly..peace....

[Mr.W.Rong]

IM'ing peeps to vote mayne??
fuck me!! pretty low..I know ya dint point out ya wanted personal votes
but targeting certain peeps for votes is total bullshit, if thats how ya
wanna win that go str8 ahead..but faithfully I trust young I think
so I'll accept his vote..jus dont be pullin no shit like askin for 'Honest'
votes
pz

[Axe]

Blah... this battle was horrible. Both of you had punches that seemed like you wrote them just because of the fact that they rhymed. But someone has to win, and GameTime JUST edged out this battle... if you can call it that.

yet you stay clinging..and englishman with no pride
you were an ill tag partner...
............................till u were dropped for Aisle 5
^That personal took it. It was funny when it happened, it's still funny to this day. B.I. Detained was talking garbage about his sister ghostwriting for him... blah, so?

Vote = GameTime for a less shittier verse.

Vote.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108919

[Savir]

ok..take young's vote off...i barely started
talkin to him after he accepted my callout
like 3 days ago...so i said..yeah..i battled brix..u might as well vote
dont accept ..i dont care....but its honest vote i guess...
whatever..peace