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    Exclamation Shining light in ur darkness...

    heres sumtin that took me sum thought cuz im tryin to elevate n its hard to write bout sumtin u tryin 2 do.........





    In this polluted world of my head im jus a mere thought
    Tryin to pull away from people tellin me im sumtin when im not
    Tryed so many things n failed throughout my lifes years
    Ive neva had inspiration jus my heart,head,n trifelin tears
    Its been a cruel world but im still standin..can i get a cheer
    Oh..neva mind i got no1 for that so ill jus resist bein sincere
    Ive been beaten at nething i try...thats a true fact.. not false
    I must elevate n practice to my full extent jus like tryin to waltz
    Im suprised ive made an effort n kept it when i said i was gonna rap
    But it looks like i havent elevated im stuck in this big ass gap
    Out of evrything ive put my mind on n tried,rap has survived
    So im hopin 1 day itll find me n let me on its secrets so ill revive
    Ill bust out of my own SHELL like a 9 milli blastin at its target
    Ill be like a rehabilitated prison man or get out the retardness
    Im the victim of my own actions which left me in fractions
    3/4s of me sumwhere, anotha 3/4s bein frictioned traction
    Although, there has been beams o lights in my darkness
    So i give props to those helpin me n not leaven me sparkless
    I thank u for helpin n i hope i can do the same one day fo yall
    I wanna be an elevation..a blessin..a hero when yall trip n fall
    I dont even know if this rap is about elevation or i wanna b a star
    The way my mind is in the dirt,i think it isnt worth it, its bizarre
    But I gotta stop thinkin negative n see the postive side of this
    i gotta stop n try my hardest,neva give up,n avoid the abyss
    Im tired of alwayz bein the newbie of sumtin that i can overcome
    Put my mind head strong,n have good luck from clovercrumbs
    So i end my own sorrow of pain n failure, pull myself back togetha
    N go do my best to go through the fase of elevation n grimmy weatha


    hope yall liked it n feedback appreciated

    Peace

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    c'mon dont sleep on this...........uppin ^^

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