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    . . . Can You Feel Me ?. . .

    Seeing Is Believing. . But Through Words You Must Treat These Rhymes Like Brail. . For You Cannot See But You Can Visualize. . You Can Hear. . The Message. . The Most Profound Of It's Time. .

    Revolutionary Wordsmith, Words Gift To The Preliminary
    Now I Stand Atop Hip Hop As A Visionary. . .
    . . . . With No Blurred Rifts From The Sounds Carried {It's Now Scary}
    My Speech Is Vivid. . Mosts Reach Is Timid
    Grab The Mic. . Rip It. . Respect. . Give It
    I've Obtained A Tongue Is Similar To Picasso. . . .
    . . . Open Mouth Paintings Of Mona Lisas With My Lyrical Bravado. .
    I Try To Make Shit As Clear As Possible With No Photography
    Blink Twice And Ya Eyes Just Might Not Be Able To Adjust N See
    What I Have Created, You Can Debate It, But That's Expected
    I Treated The Rap Game Like Car Collisions N Fucking Wrecked It
    Bar Incisions Tear Skin N Bones From Ligaments
    You're In A Predicament Where You're Forced To Submit Ya Pen
    See, You're Wack, Fact Is, I'm All The Positive Adjectives
    I'll Take Ya Words, Play Um, N Throw Um Back With No Spin
    DJ, Feel Me ?. . . . Turn My Shit Up Loud And Let It Bump
    My Sound Is Now. . . . While Most Junk Is Foul N Fucked
    Follow The Flow, Down The River N Quiver From Instrumentals
    That I've Laced. . . With My Superior Mental. . .
    You Try To Repeat N I'll Fuck Ya Dental -
    N Let The Lyrics Smash Ya Fuckin' Temple *It's Real*

    [Chorus]
    So Please. . If You Feelin' This Sound Bombing Through. .
    Ya Speakers Then Lemme Know So I'll Continue To Bless You. .
    Shouts To The Supporters, One Finger To The Haters Kid. .
    If You Feel Me. . Can You Feel Me. . Turn Up This Shit. .

    It Was Awhile Ago, I'd Style N Pose, Now Just My Prose
    Is Proposed As The Sickest Flow, I'm Dope Now I'm Suppose
    Spittin' Lyrics Immuned To Mimics, Retuned My Spirit
    Now I'm Nearin Clearance To #1 N Kids Don't Wanna Hear It
    I'm Sorry For Being Sick With Pens, I'll Stick With Friends
    I Don't Wanna Put Up With This Shit Again, Here's My Ends
    Fuck That, You Mother Fuckers, I'll Spit Lines Like Knives
    N Slice Ya Lives In Half, Expectancy Set To Four Days Past -
    Today, N The Day Is Four Days To What I Told You Last
    So Hurry Fast N Kiss Your Family Cause They'll Miss Ya Ass
    That's Not Even At The Height Of My Capabilities, Not Feelin' Me ?
    Fucka Ginsu After What I Been Through, I Wanna Kill An MC
    I'll Shatter All Patterns Of Attackin', This Is Iraq Again. . .
    You Came For My Weapons Of MC Destruction . .
    Left Empty Handed With Ya Pride Stripped N Mind Concussin'
    I'm The Next Great Lyricist With Piercin Hits, The Eardrums Bleed
    Notice My Significance N Take A Glimpse Cause After Fear Comes Me
    Nuclear Warhead Sited, After One Track I Was Sworn Dead
    Is It My Fault I Was Born Ahead ?. . . Advanced Intelligence. . .
    Enhanced Developments, Formula's To. . . .
    . . . Through Words, Take You Around My Mind With A Magellan-Sense. . .
    I'm Hip Hop's Essence *It's Real!*

    [Chorus]

    It's A New Day. . Writtens Scripted On Looseleaf. . Make Ya Favorite MC's Lose Sleep. . You Know I Aim To Bruise Deep. . N If You Don't Feel Me. . Fuck You. . Ain't Like I Was Askin For Ya Support Anyway. .

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    Drugs Are Bad Mmkay.

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    Seems like i'm not gettin' any feedback in return. .

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    goo dshit..I can see that you are improving(you already nice)..this had some sick flows..good scheme..I don't know why this is getting slept on...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Penskills
    (you already nice)..
    . . Dope. . Iunno Why It's Gettin slept On Either. . I've Checked Numerous Pieces. . Oh well.

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    One last time. . people who's pieces i've checked, return the favor.

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    Good peice...Good flow, wordplay etc...
    why is this being slept on?

    favorite lines...

    "I've Obtained A Tongue Is Similar To Picasso. . . .
    . . . Open Mouth Paintings Of Mona Lisas With My Lyrical Bravado. ."

    Dope As Fuck...

    Keep Spittin...

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    I'm feeling the flow, I love this piece dawg, shits how, I like how it sounds out-loud.. It has a nice flow to it. Good text cuz..
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    i feel u on this dawg, sum real nice stuff here, keep spittin

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