hey lets move our battle from bitch slapped cuz we didnt know what the fuck we were doing
its 10 lines
blind spit ill post mine first and just put yours up tommorow
Need2Flow
FlowDro
hey lets move our battle from bitch slapped cuz we didnt know what the fuck we were doing
its 10 lines
blind spit ill post mine first and just put yours up tommorow
"I'm posessed by Hip Hop's delivering spirit, and i fear it cuz my head is constantly scribbling lyrics"
-Benefit
I dont know what to do with you, you litte bitch,
My Emcee career starts here, and goes off without a hitch,
Im gonna fuck you up cuz I Need To Flow too,
Ill choke you out by submission, leave you sufficated and blue
My shit hits your chest so hard you wont know how to act,
like 9 shots of everclear, or 2 L's of smack
Your just pathetic and synthetic, in my world of rhyme
I'll leave you dazed and confused, so you wont know the time
Were both new, but i'm off to a better begining,
looks like I just merked your ass, before even winning
"I'm posessed by Hip Hop's delivering spirit, and i fear it cuz my head is constantly scribbling lyrics"
-Benefit
hey im crashing at your pad, so ill just throw it up right now rather than do it tommorow from my house, its just our exact battle from BITCH SLAPPED so it doesn't really matter
yo, listen up
You say you wanna battle, i'll demolish you and leave you like a baby without a rattle
i'll send you out to sea in roe boat without a paddle
but doing this wont effect the outcome, because your about to hear the intended pun
it doesnt matter if you flow or not cause ive already won
and if that doesnt work them im gonna destoy your rhymes
taking each line and breaking it down one word at a time
until you fix it and make it look exactly like mine
because my flow is gonna bring me up to the top
while your modifying yours like a gay ride in a boddy shop
shit has it already been 20 minutes i guess its time for me to stop
yo im out, peaccccccce
this probably looks sketchy cuz it was all posted up on one computer within like a half hour but if you look at http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109132 its just this exact battle, im just new so i didn't know where to battle him, sorry for the confusion peace
"I'm posessed by Hip Hop's delivering spirit, and i fear it cuz my head is constantly scribbling lyrics"
-Benefit
hey just uppin for votes, please vote guys we have beef to settle thanks
"I'm posessed by Hip Hop's delivering spirit, and i fear it cuz my head is constantly scribbling lyrics"
-Benefit
flowdro takes this one....you guys are new but both have potential. both you focus more on punches....setup then punch. they have to connect and the punchline needs to be hard, whitty, and surprising. need2flow your lines were a little stretched so that kind of threw the flow of your verse off. just focusing on connecting your punches based on the concept of the punch, rather than on the rhyme word. do you know what i mean? anyways it just seemed the punches that flowdro threw hit harder and some connected pretty decend. need2flow your verse was good...just focus on making it all disses cuz thats what wins battles here.
vote: flowdro
A h e U n c D e f I o r B w a L r d E
Im going to have to agree with Pheoniix. For sure it was a sick battle, but Flowdro wins with the hits. I liked that last line. If u ever want to battle, im down dawg. Contact me. Peace.
Uppin for votes for the first time, come on guys please come vote
Yo wattup...good start to both newbs.......im not much of a battler ima songwriter but i believe Slow took this.....By the way nice shit on that Cypher Slow.....Anyway.....Decent finisher....Keep Reppin Cali to the fullest!! peace.....
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Flow = Flowdro, Was feeling flow alot more had some nice flow
Punches = Flowdro, punches hit alot harder. need2flow you punches wernt rilly landing
Vocab = Both
Multis = Both pretty weak not many multis at all
Creativity = Need2Flow, Had some intersting lines but the puches wherent landing and flow was too weak
overall Flowdro takes this one
return the favour
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110239
yeah i think that flodro took this one as well.
but you guys both have potential.
work on punches.
im givin need 2 flow props, i think he took this one.
flow dro punches were weak, metas sucked, wordplay was straight, flow was ood and more enjoyable structured than need2flow.
Need2flow needs to learn to flow thus da name, structure was horrible, wordply was alright, kinda enjoyable, and metas garbage.
Need2flow and flow dro ya'll need to really elevate and go to whackness forum answers and questions for help, but real weak battle.
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i know my first battle is wack but im getting better
"ak" i dont want your advice, i would tell you to go on question and answer too but there is no answer to weak rhymes
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