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no crew..hate.....d/r votes
300+post to vote
10-12 lines
no crew..hate.....d/r votes
300+post to vote
word damnit checkin in......................................
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lol.......my fault
anyway.........in
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u claim youre ill but....they still dont know??i guess u lost all hope
garbage fag...fumbling a sack of weed is the only way u could ever drop dope
damn the crackhouse burned down and ya crib went up in smoke
no one respects u cuz youre insane lyrics are a big ass joke
like expired bread ya punches are stale let me hit u wit a fresh concept
doin text cuz ya audios are garbage....u get booed after the mic check
u are whacker then whack u would rate u even lower if we could
get real your not theunderrated....youre just no fuckin good
youre a waste of my time so now i will finish u bitch
u wouldnt even know if ya verse was shit....
...cuz ya dumbass is too damn illiterate
This kids more slept on that Rb.com's elevated Frontlines...
Thinks he has sharp mind but rolling Constant L's shows only blunt lines..
Fitting that he named himself after a bacteria cause he's constantly eating fists...
Put some bleach to this Bitch and leave his prokaryotic cells split..
I took the advice of his avy cause i knew kid was just playing a game..
like battle ship you'll get bombed on like the B-52 band or bomber plane..
This kids nothing like a vaccum breathless loss of air chokin is his fate..
feeding this kid his insides like that fat dude on se7en, lasanga on the plate..
Your fuckin bacteria eat me bitch you'll never be ill keep workin on the lining..
Your like the Biggest Herb and the Worst emcee instantaenously intertwining...
I'm killin this kid with a dose of PENacilin now hes addicted but i'll get Dickryden..
made it 300 posts to poll a vote so he can count on easy winning ....
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good battle.....but UR clearly takez it.....he had a nice flow.....n hard punches.....
good battle
props 2 both
breakdown:
punches: UR...hiz came out harder.....e.coli..ur shyt waz tite 2 tho
flow: Ur...eazier 2 follow...
strucutre:......both werk on it
vote: underrated....but not by much....
nice battle....repay favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109699
damn if youre gonna vote please vote right that isnt a proper vote explain better please
u claim youre ill but....they still dont know??i guess u lost all hope
garbage fag...fumbling a sack of weed is the only way u could ever drop dope
^^4/5 good opener
damn the crackhouse burned down and ya crib went up in smoke
no one respects u cuz youre insane lyrics are a big ass joke
^^3/5...a personal
like expired bread ya punches are stale let me hit u wit a fresh concept
doin text cuz ya audios are garbage....u get booed after the mic check
^^2/5 kinda whack
u are whacker then whack u would rate u even lower if we could
get real your not theunderrated....youre just no fuckin good
^^4/5 LMAO..a personal
youre a waste of my time so now i will finish u bitch
u wouldnt even know if ya verse was shit....
...cuz ya dumbass is too damn illiterate
^^1/5 flat out whack
E.COli 14/25
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This kids more slept on that Rb.com's elevated Frontlines...
Thinks he has sharp mind but rolling Constant L's shows only blunt lines..
[b]^^ 2/5... ok
Fitting that he named himself after a bacteria cause he's constantly eating fists...
Put some bleach to this Bitch and leave his prokaryotic cells split..
^^2/5..a personal...no flow
I took the advice of his avy cause i knew kid was just playing a game..
like battle ship you'll get bombed on like the B-52 band or bomber plane..
0/5 seems bitin he has no avy..no flow
This kids nothing like a vaccum breathless loss of air chokin is his fate..
feeding this kid his insides like that fat dude on se7en, lasanga on the plate..
1/5 too streched
Your fuckin bacteria eat me bitch you'll never be ill keep workin on the lining..
Your like the Biggest Herb and the Worst emcee instantaenously intertwining...
3/5 decent
I'm killin this kid with a dose of PENacilin now hes addicted but i'll get Dickryden..
made it 300 posts to poll a vote so he can count on easy winning ....
[b] 1/5 seems bitin why did u bold pen??..had no flow[b]
T.U 9/25
Vote: e.coli. .... he had harder punches and had way better flow
ahahahahah ^^^^^^his avy is his picture which is absent and the yellow writing underneath his name.....so shove bitten up your ass son.....you clearly don't understand.......upppin x1111111111111111111111111111
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Aight battle...Ecoli slacked..
Came played tha first 4 lines
That hurt you...anything with jokes/dropping dope is played
Good wordplay....Subpar punches though
Under..best verse I've seen form yet except for tha last 4 lines
Nice ass creativity.. Nice wordplay...lil streched but your punches hit
Had a lot of personals too... Like I said nice verse
so
v/Under
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E. ya verse wasn't that great. you had a few punches hear and there that were hard but your flow slacked at points. And many of your lines were way past played up ya vocab a bit yo. UR this was some nice shit from you dog. you had the better punches the better flow the personals were a nice touch. E had the better structure cause Ur's dropped off with teh last few lines. So my vote goes to UR.
VOTE_THEUNDERATED
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109422
This Was A 1sided Battle Underatted Took It Easily With The Punches Personals/Disses,Wordplay,Vocab Etc..
Vote=Underated
Return Da Favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109032
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109612
Underrated takes this in my eyes, he came mad creative for the majority of his verse and that extra bit pushes him over precise but played lines like the fumbling dope deal E.Coli dropped. Nice battle, but while some of Underrated's later punches were lacking, there's no denying that the majority of his verse outweighs the played material. Best verse i've seen from you man, keep elevating, nice job.
Vote-Underrated
alright then thanx for the feedback guys i'm goona up this for the 2nd time..........lets get some votes......thanx drop links i'll do what i can
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AIght heres the breakdown...
Flow:under....ecoli...ur shit was stretched in some parts
stucture:under....small and easy...both were almost even but ecolis had stretched shit
punches:under....good shit joker doesnt know who he voting for
personals:^same....
overall:under thats about it no hate ....pz out
Illl poll my vote on tmy other account...
hit thisese two battles plz!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109699
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