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Thread: Soft Focus:The Voices In My Head. Feat Rule

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    Soft Focus:The Voices In My Head. Feat Rule

    Emotion:
    Wispered Conversations between Me and my alter ego
    Pondering on the true meaning of life and watching it grow
    Beliveing and conceiving what my conscience tells me is right
    Wondering how I started this fight,My Brain turns off like a light
    I have to wonder whether the voices are evil or im insane
    Watching this pain,laughing at the alter ego that lives in my brain,
    He give's me options that i submit to a conversation, Understand
    That everyone has these voices, It's just a mass array of choices
    Who are u voice and why the hell are u so mysterious
    It's like u turned me from someone normal to a phycho conspiratous,
    I am fearing this, that the voices inside me head are hearing this
    Plotting my trip to a pycho ward, PLotting lies becausetheyare a fraud
    I wonder what caused them and why they are hear, My fear-
    Is they will only go away when my family has to shed a tear
    The voices driveme crazed, like they are constantly amazed
    at my stupidity they blame me for there own idiocy
    Im in a coffin now the voice shut down my private war
    They found me hanging 3 feet above the fucken floor

    Rule:
    Rescue my inner confusion an ease my tension of lust
    Debat my securities from within on what ego's to trust
    Question myself regularily because i'm lost critically
    I sit patentialy as my inner self fades away constantly
    But if I just sit and listen to the souls in my bones
    I may recieve answers for my destiny in unique tones
    As I close one eye vision a cloud that'll rescue Mike
    Put my hands together and pray for a brighter life
    Shiny star an so far ahead of the entire universe
    The consisious in my head will elimate the false herst
    Rule hides from religion but I believe in god and jezus
    Deny talent because faliur creates my life thesis
    But the voices in my head know what's be strong
    Guide the right path away from the dead an gone
    Think so the voices can comunicate the reabilatated
    Council denied emotions as the problem is exscalated
    I'm lost don't understand pasion who see's the tears?
    Graduated talent that's been suffering for three years
    Nobody knows my pain or listens..but the voices
    They guide me now..help me with all my choices
    Last edited by Forlorn; January 17th, 2004 at 10:23 PM Reason: Grammer.
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    common ! uppin
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    what the fuck 20 000 members and no replies wtf??
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    WHAT THE FUCK 17 VIEWS AND NO FUCKEN REPLY

    WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH RB THE 20 000 MEMBERS FOR GODS SAKE,

    come one i will return the favour
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    yo this wus a really good piece... stuck to topic all the way through...
    threw in some multis here and there in emotions verse...
    pretty nice man...
    rule had the better of the verses tho because he wus more on topic

    thats just what i think... check out my open mic... Corrupted Visionz:reppin'
    good work both of ya...
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    "You're gonna hear me out." Yeah, hear me out on this!

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    thnaks ups
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    lets get some fucking replie one rpely in fucken two days

    Wake up Rb
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    mad tight.....yeah dawg...u should hit up my shit...its open mike called you see my life...Damn it took me 5 mins to read yall shit..but some good shit....Keep up the good work man....Mine has audio wit it also...it has al link...but mad tight i wonder if yall do audio

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    Good verse Emotion....uppen for some more feed.
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    mmm it's ridiculous we've had hardly any replys
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    ye fucked up....uppen
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    wtf weve had like two replys this shit aint fare its ridculous
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    commmmmon uppin
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    alright this is gettin gay..now that the 3 link thing is gone...lots of pieces are getting slept on...damn

    uppen
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    i know its hucken ridculous its fucken stupid i am gettin fucken pissed off replie motherfuckers
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