10 lines
You spit first
i'll follow
10 lines
You spit first
i'll follow
Checkin in and awaitin your verse. Good luck man.
Oh and noe crew/dr/and all that stuff
Check...I'll drop in like 30 mins...
...have your verse ready by then..
...so you can drop right after me
Jeeeeezus kid it's been like 2 hours. I'm droppin mine cause you slow as fuck.............................................. ..........
I'm a pot head.. noticed this herb.. and he fullfilled my craving
You got no cred.. his punchlines are more played than his Avy
Beating him daily.. till he's embeded in tha ground like a prospect
No respect..
Wise is flowing with waterfalls..When he won't even get toes wet
Wishing me luck.. Shit.. when he should be wishing himself that
..Whats that rodent odor? Everytime I'm near you.. I smell a rat
Like dead bulbs..you burnt out kid..my heat makes Volatile Evaporate
Left a bloody pulp..lyrical gulletine..see ya body rolling as i decapatate
Seem uncomfortable.. unnatural when it comes to battling.. I'ma ask
Possibly could it be maybe.. Cuz this faggot has a thong up his ass?
Wise words to start this.....you really aint that tight
You Withholding Wisdom, cause you know it aint right
First loss right here cause like ho's ya flow sucks
I'm the hunter now bitch, watch out better "duck"
Like poisen...your rhyme seems to be bad for your health
Cause ya know droppin ya flow only ends up hurting yourself
Answered my callout in bitchslapped expectin an easy win
But I meked ya...wanna rematch? It'll happen time and again
Your rhyme seems to be impotent, cause you didn't come hard
Took you over an hour for 10 lines, You flow like a fuckin retard
Spit your verse
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Breakdown:
punches - wise
personals - wise
flow - tie
creativity - wise
opener - wise
closer - wise
OVERALL - wise
LM The Life
& Times
...The Rhymes
if i could vote it'd be like this.
Breakdown:
punches - wise
personals - wise
flow - tie
creativity - wise
opener - vol
closer - vol keep elevatin vol.
OVERALL - wise
Ja'e Roc Entertainment 2004
over all i was really feelin' wise more in this one
Your rhyme seems to be impotent, cause you didn't come hard
Took you over an hour for 10 lines, You flow like a fuckin retard(no good at all)
Wishing me luck.. Shit.. when he should be wishing himself that
..Whats that rodent odor? Everytime I'm near you.. I smell a rat(wasnt the best but better than whatshisface
my vote =wise
lmfao!!! i dunno about the rest of the votes but heres my break down!
[i]-Flow & rhyme scheme: volatile took this hands down...short bars and nice flow,
wise your bars are stretched and thats what causes a choppy flow....
-Word play: Volatile---->I'm the hunter now bitch, watch out better "duck"
-Personals: volatile....he hit you with real facts
-Punches: wise...
Vote: imma definitly go with volatile....he won three catagories to one....
please hit this battle up: VOTE HERE
Wise pulled a merk job...
Only thing the other cat had was flow and format.
He takes those, Wise takes the punches, personals, wordplay, and complexity.
Kinda a blowout.
Volatile was all straight forward, not an ounce of thought put towards wordplay, or even metas, really.
What was there was played to death, so, like I said, no thought towards it.
Wise
Peace
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Damn.....lets finish this......#4
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