10 lines...
30 mins from check in..
*Checking In...*
10 lines...
30 mins from check in..
*Checking In...*
Man... hurry up 'n check in...
checkin' in
Waiting for a prompt to check in... check the audacity of this herb..
Still.. judging by that sig.. ya bars doin' damage is plain absurd..
Ya punches are cheap shots.. you lack common 'cents'... ya wack..
Ain't NFL... ya poor kid.... thats why ya tryna get the quarter back..
I'mma expose you for what you are.. basic.. some kid listenin' to Big..
In laymans terms, you'll understand... you hold the same status as ya sig..
Callin' yaself a hustler? Man.. ya standard.. wack.. its final..
When, like I've said.. ya raw crime record consists of Biggie's shit on vinyl..
Frontin' a D on ya headgear.. Detroit? Nah... a self-confessed dunce..
If you think I'm tired of being right all the time kid..
.......You'd be right for once..
Hope "Harlem's finest" is just ur screen name and not a claim to a title,
cause you obvioulsy couldnt win a battle if you were on American Idol
Hey you, wrong forum, unless you wanna get dissed,
ppl. will think u like Columbus on the new world, Did he stumble on this?
no shit, i spit but dont dare look funny at me,
cause you only get cheer when u are washing laundry, or listenin' to obie, so blow me, Only got bout 10 posts but already thinking bout retiring,
cause you hitting my white balls harder than T. Woods with his nine iron
Comin' at you with kicks cause my knucks are tired of punches
cause like jello, juice, and fruit snacks you just got packed like school lunches
balls
why u gotta be an asshole in every thread man,
maybe u pissed cause no on likes u and ur status is banned
uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. .....
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v/ - Harlem's Finest
Why? His verse was better. More consistent good punches. Rantis...u had a lot of whack punches in der...such as ur opener, closer, and 3rd bar. Harlem had more complexity to his verse, and harder hitting punches that were better and more humerous. Flow goes to Rantis...if u don't kno y, then you shouldn't be judging this batle. Unfortunately for Rantis, Punches do overthrow Flow...so my vote goes to Harlem's Finest.
Return the favour both of u plz, by dropping honest votes on the battles in my signature. Thank You.
Uppin.....
Also can a mod sort out the poll... it looks like that idiot Casualty dropped a vote....
Originality - HF.. all fresh concepts
Punches - HF.. witty, original an harder hittin
Personals - Neither
Flow - HF.. although ur punches were pretty individual, they followed the same structure
Structure - Both.. easy to follow
Opener - HF.. jus read it! Dope kid.. 'American Idol' was clever but weak
Finisher - Both
VoTe = Harlem's Finest
Nice battle..
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Basically Harlem takes it..
Way better & more enjoyable wordplay..displayed in form of witty wordplay..
Ya punches are cheap shots.. you lack common 'cents'... ya wack..
Ain't NFL... ya poor kid.... thats why ya tryna get the quarter back..
^Dope..
Ok punches..some nice once, but a little to un-consistant..
Though he easily takes this match simply because he had a better executed battle verse.
Much more advanced.. or elevated.
One sided.
vote Harlem's Finest
Witty Unpredicatable Talent And Natural Game
My pokemon brings all the nerds to the yard, and there like "Do you wanna trade cards?" Damn Right lets trade some cards, I'll trade you, but not my charizard.
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1st up - HARLEM'S FINEST...
"Waiting for a prompt to check in... check the audacity of this herb.."
^ nice opening line
"Still.. judging by that sig.. ya bars doin' damage is plain absurd.."
^ yea, that sig is pretty whack huh? lol... anyway, weak. nice line, but weak
"Ya punches are cheap shots.. you lack common 'cents'... ya wack..
Ain't NFL... ya poor kid.... thats why ya tryna get the quarter back.."
^ LMFAO!!! hott line! nice punch.
"I'mma expose you for what you are.. basic.. some kid listenin' to Big..
In laymans terms, you'll understand... you hold the same status as ya sig.."
^ ooooooh shit! lol that wuz tight! nice punch. basically saying he's breaking down like tha piece of shit car he talk about in his sig lol
"Callin' yaself a hustler? Man.. ya standard.. wack.. its final..
When, like I've said.. ya raw crime record consists of Biggie's shit on vinyl.."
^ i think thaz tha winning line here. that shulda been ya finisher. that shit's fuckin dope! nice hard punch. good shit
"Frontin' a D on ya headgear.. Detroit? Nah... a self-confessed dunce..
If you think I'm tired of being right all the time kid..
.......You'd be right for once.."
^ nice punch.. simple, but nice nonetheless.
overall - 7/10
next up - B. RANTIS...
Hope "Harlem's finest" is just ur screen name and not a claim to a title,
cause you obvioulsy couldnt win a battle if you were on American Idol
^ hott opener! nice solid punch.
Hey you, wrong forum, unless you wanna get dissed,
ppl. will think u like Columbus on the new world, Did he stumble on this?
^ columbus stumbled on america, BUT, it wuz a great discovery, so if he stumbled on here he must have dun something great with it. NICE TRY, ill give you tha E for effort lol. but you didnt hit cha mark with it.
no shit, i spit but dont dare look funny at me,
cause you only get cheer when u are washing laundry, or listenin' to obie, so blow me, Only got bout 10 posts but already thinking bout retiring,
cause you hitting my white balls harder than T. Woods with his nine iron
^ shit's waaaaaaaaaaaay tooo long! lol.. i like tha cheer line, tha 10 post retiring shit wuz good too. but tha whole hitting your balls thing wuz gay... it wuz a nice punch, but weak overall.
Comin' at you with kicks cause my knucks are tired of punches
cause like jello, juice, and fruit snacks you just got packed like school lunches
^ in my opinion, your best line in tha WHOLE thing. nice puinch.
overall - 7/10
......... pretty close battle, but it goes to Harlem's Finest. Simply because in my voting, he had 4 lines (punches) that made me say o0o0o0o0o0oh! and B. Rantis only had 3. Punches win battles, so Harlem's Finest won this one.
VOTE - HARLEM'S FINEST
Return tha favor B. Harlem already voted on my shit... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106743
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