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Thread: Who Am I?

  1. January 12th, 2004, 08:35 PM #1
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    Who Am I?

    Who Am I?

    The solitude in rhymes dilutes to contribute in conflicting minds
    Inflictin crimes causing me to salute the forever hardening times
    Searching for inner diversion leads to aspersion in inner thought
    Averting to the sub-urban….leaves my opinions lost and bought
    Changin mind channels to handle the scandals that are exposed
    I could ramble like lives vandal…...but that aint the path i chose
    Compelling questions scold sections in the neurons of my brain
    To lessen my internal fretting but I know ill always be the same
    Plus my identity aint friends with me which excels complication
    Death will accour eventully…..till then..fuck the worlds gyrations
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  2. January 12th, 2004, 08:43 PM #2
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    Wow, I expected this to be a blah, original type of piece. This actually is really good. Nice job with the vocab, and I can really see what you were meaning to say. Great job!!!

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  3. January 12th, 2004, 08:46 PM #3
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    lol

    fuck you for the first remark

    but thanks man for the 2nd
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  4. January 12th, 2004, 08:47 PM #4
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    Ahha, but really. Ahha...good job with it. Can you actually "read" my Open Mic...its the only one by me on the first page.

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  5. January 12th, 2004, 09:01 PM #5
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    lol took me a while but i did it
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  6. January 12th, 2004, 09:03 PM #6
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    this was an ok piece..
    Ur structure was nice..
    ur flow was simple words, but was still coo
    Concept - hmm.. ight
    Real short tho...
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  7. January 12th, 2004, 09:15 PM #7
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    just being original

    thanks
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  8. January 13th, 2004, 07:27 AM #8
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  9. January 13th, 2004, 07:13 PM #9
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  10. January 13th, 2004, 08:01 PM #10
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    Well This Wuz A Pretty Nice Piece, Pretty Original, Good Vocab And Flow Wuz Nice, I Could Tell With Ease What You Were Tryin To Explain With Your Words. Theres Not Really Anything Bad To Say About It Keep It Up Dawg 1

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  11. January 13th, 2004, 08:16 PM #11
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  12. January 13th, 2004, 09:04 PM #12
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    Original concept, .. good vocab usage..solid flow, & nice structure u make me proud..
    i really enjoyed this piece, u expressed very well,. = )

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  13. January 13th, 2004, 09:40 PM #13
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    I liked it................................................ ................................everything was on key holla at me
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  14. January 14th, 2004, 02:01 AM #14
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    Origin...this piece was very thoughtfull and the concept is rather played
    but you did a good job in flipping and such....the metaphors in this
    were well thought out

    on the other hand...
    watch your syllable count...some of the words seemed unneeded and
    just there for rhyme scheme's sake...10 lines isn't enough i felt robbed
    as if you owed me more for the title of the topic...and the ending didn't
    seem like an eding to me...

    /\best feedback you will ever get

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  15. January 14th, 2004, 05:56 AM #15
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    lol^

    thanks homo
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