10 lines up yo spit first
no d/r votes
check in
it may take me few to type mine cuz im really fucked up
(*(*Tay~G*)*)
Vitalz
10 lines up yo spit first
no d/r votes
check in
it may take me few to type mine cuz im really fucked up
Aiight how many votes to win?
Good luck... Hurr go my shit...
All ya weak meta~phorical~phrases get SCORNED~to SHAME like JEWs that FORN~I~CATE
My words will TORCH~YA~FACE like eatin’ out a whore~wid~GENITAL~WARTS~&~AIDS
LISTEN ass~hole I’ll “LASS~O” ya verse to make sure~you~“HEARD”~I “SETTLE~THE~BEEF”
And I’ll AIR MAX ya NOSE IN to ensure ~you~ can~per~sonally SMELL~da~“FEET” (defeat) (dayum!!)
My words will turn you INSIDE~OUT so you can “IN”~“CHANT”~ya~sounds (“enchant”… think about it)
These sim~i~les slice you pretty much lit~er~ally AT~THE~KNEES so you can no longer “STAND~YA~GROUND”(fiyah!)
My PUNCHES will “FORCE” ya “AIR” out like NIKE and make niggaz wanna~“REE~BOX”
I’m come CLEANER than DE~TOX- Split ya ATOMS (Adams) so you can no longer~EVEs~drop
You finna “DREAD” how I’m “LOCK”~in~ya flow~down in this show~down
And dyin’ on “HANDS” and knees in ya HOME~TOWN is the only way you can “HOLD~YA~GROUND” (good god!!)
That's it... hahaha... Murder in tha 1st degree!! lOl... Now, don't keep me waitin' long ya hurr!! lOl... Good luck!
<==Tay*Geezy*Fa*Sheezy==>
“Play the game nigga, never let the game play you…”
ill drop my verse in a an hour cuz i dont have but 2 min to do it now .................................................. ..................
iight sorry so long heres ma drop.................
Hes getting abase so whys he tapping his foot smile on his face bout to get shook//
mistook him for the garbage man hardly hes hard so parden me mam//
your versus are plainly menial as if you start with error then start trial//
Mile length stretched out spits heard you could flow but u just broke that myth//
hes an addict to drugs cuz rap didnt embrace him with an infinite amount of love//
If whackness is a skill then ill try your methods but i need a powerful pill//
more posts shouldnt make you flyweight especially when you bite lines from die anotha day//
Im fuckin you up with versus your unable to rehearse and use your mangled worse than a rubix cube///
rude nah this is just tha start ya battle lines dont match ya need to be debarred//
depart from r&b its not far fetched to say you didnt alarm me that you a whack emcee astray//
your shit fades fades faster than a denim jacket so sensitive it blows more than when a fat ass steps on a ketchup packet..//
sorry bout lines messed up cuz i really fucked up right now.....cant see screen worth shit...........
uppin fo some votes .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..........................
uppin for some votes............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......
Damn niggaz, can we get some fuckin' votes or what?????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ???????????????
<==Tay*Geezy*Fa*Sheezy==>
“Play the game nigga, never let the game play you…”
Tay G took this one, his punches hit harder, he seemed more experenced, and his verse was batter overall!!!
no hate, both y'all had good verses jus one came better, an that was tay!!
peace
plz drop an honest vote on this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105813
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iight uppin fo some votes............................................. .................................................. .....
tay G getz vote 4 betta thrown punches......better flow..n structure
close battle
n vitalz.....juss elevate man....ur shyt waz ite tho....
good lookz
~wunnnnnn~
Uppin'........ More votes folks......... C'mon now...................
<==Tay*Geezy*Fa*Sheezy==>
“Play the game nigga, never let the game play you…”
Breakdown:
punches - tay
personals- none
flow - tay
creativity - tay
opener - tay
closer - tay
OVERALL - tay......But lose the capitals and the ~'s
LM The Life
& Times
...The Rhymes
lOl^^ Thanks 4 the advice, but no thanks. The ~s are there to show the multis and the caps are there to help the dumbfucks understand the punches. lOl
<==Tay*Geezy*Fa*Sheezy==>
“Play the game nigga, never let the game play you…”
I forgot to say....
Drop a vote on this please since I took the time to do this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106525
LM The Life
& Times
...The Rhymes
upp'n 4 votes... niggaz be sleepin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!11
<==Tay*Geezy*Fa*Sheezy==>
“Play the game nigga, never let the game play you…”
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