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Thread: SS Verse: Historical Moment

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    SS Verse: Historical Moment

    Look Down At Your Wrist, Your Watch Is Spinning Backwards
    Grey Hair Turns To Color, And In Reverse Fly Black Birds
    Reappearing Buffalo Heards, Back In The Land Before Time
    Life Goes From Old To Young, Like You're Holding Down Rewind
    The World Was Refined, No Pollution Was Yet Known
    The Air And Water Were Clean, With No Holes In The O-Zone
    And Everything Was Home Grown, When People Had Morals
    And Kids Werent Getting Shot, Over Silly Turf Quarrels
    Listen To The Chorals, They Sung Because They Believed
    They Never Questioned Faith, It Was All They Could Conceive
    And They Didnt Grieve, Never Was A Tear Wiped On A Sleeve
    They Percieved Death As A Step, To No Longer Being Niave
    Then On A Midsummer's Eve, Somebody Questioned Perfection
    Gathered A Collection, And Then Promised Them Protection
    All They Had To Do, Was Follow A Few Guide Lines For Life
    Promised Bliss After Death, But He Had Lied To Minds Alike
    So They Took A Hike, Over A Desert For Three-Hundered Years
    Never Questioned His Ambition, Never Did They Shed A Tear
    They Never Felt Alone Or Fear, Only Felt A Great Hope
    Even When Life Was Rolling, It Had Been Perched Atop A Slope
    Started To Slip Away Like Soap, Drowning Like A Sinking Boat
    Untill The Day, They Had Been Givin What They Asked For
    They Rushed Into A Belief, When It Really Was A Masked Door
    They Stepped Through The Opening, Expecting To Find Bliss
    Wandering For 300 Years, Made People Forget They Exist
    And Now They Arent Missed, A New World Has Unfolded
    While There Was No God Present, The World Had Been Molded
    Nobody Was Scolded, The Earth Took A Leap And Passed Peace
    Cause Now Instead Of Fair Justice, You Get Beat By Police
    Violence Increased, People Only Cared For Themselves
    The Only Place The Bible Is Worth Anything Now, Is On Bookstore Shelfs

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    I checked this out and voted on it... I was really feeling this hommie. You used your vocab, and your topic very well. The flow was consistant, and rhyme scheme was good. This was a nice drop, hope you win the battle in the SS league...

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    this was dope man...what more can i say everythin was good in it you didnt really lack anything..im sure ulll beat ur opponent with this unless its superman LOL

    Pz man and keep up the good work


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    This was very good, indepth, the flow was onpoint throughtout, maybe a few more multis, but the meaning behing this was fantastic, i hope you do win the SS battle, Pz
    Pot` Ed.

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    thought the concept was good and no complaints in its execution.....damn tight verse...good luck with it......pZ......
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    just a question... where in the hell was you when you wrote this??? a time machine? dunno... but yo fa ish was real ... i liked this read ... like you got ya future on ya heart... nice spit dunny

    keep goin ya thang... never stop elevating...

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    Pretty cool. What's with people dissing religion. Are all of you athiests? I think it's a good topic though.

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