Toner vs ferrarihov50

[Toner]

Hope your still there?????!!!!!!!

I'm gonna get somethin to munch. When I get back I'd appreciate some feedback. AAIght dude.

[ferrarihov50]

not bad............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....

[lillem]

i see this battle just finished up so im a vote on this shit. I think both of you lacked punches. You both got ok flow. Ferrari, ya verse seemed to just swing out and not actually hit anything. Think you should stop wit da story telling and just hit wit personals. You have the nack but not da punch. Toner, you came weak aswell, i felt you had just a lil better structure and some lines close to end there are what you should be putting through all ya lines. You should battle 10lines next time. Cause both stray off and come weak. Keep it short and hit hard, its better that way, until you get better skill. No hate just advice....

Im gonna go on toner..My vote that is....

[JW]

Toner, your a loner on that one. No motherfucker wu can read will vote for your shit.Player, no i mean wanna b, here is some advice,this ain't no chat room,its called rapbattles for reason..telling the next nigga dat u going to get munchies, wu the fuck wants to know dat shit..
Nigga ferrari kept it real from the start, he kept calling u,u laid lo,so i waited expecting some good rymz,but read your lyns,i was falling asleep....
nigga please,just take your own life now coz u a waste of space..

[pedro nok]

battle of UK cool.............................

BREAKDOWN:

Flow and structure: TONER
PUNCHES AND PERSONALS: no personals but TONER

OVERALL:TONER

could ya hit this up cos no one's votin on my battle with WORD~PERFECT and I need to get it finished so I can have a battle with a crew member to join H.I.V........so need to get it finished...............

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=86677

Thanx alot....an honest vote will be appreciated

[lillem]

look, i dont like freeposting. But the herb above should shut his mouth. I aint sticking up for anyone here, i'm on this site killing by myself. But this JW herb above seems like a waste of space, should be banned already and look you posted once. Least there having a go. People gotta elevate somehow. So shut it, or battle bitch...

[Toner]

Fuck You JW...What does that mean Juvenile Wanker. How can you comment on me..wiv your ONe post..Have some fuckin Respect, You Ugly mutha fucka...You know rap can be intelligent, not jus mindless thugs...De La Soul???? Eva heard-you need to be educated fool.

Bottom line-

I WANNA SEE JW BATTLE LILLEM!

[ferrarihov50]

I appriciate the critics and try to do better............................................ .................................................. .............................big up to lillem and proficient styles.

[Toner]

I dunno bout you but..those long linez you set really tested me. We should hook for another battle sometime in the future.

Peace

[ferrarihov50]

aight cool wit me guess i strayed a bit, i was trying to tell in a story kind a way like the way Eminem does nah mean? but it was great though your flow was okay.............................................. ..
ONE

[JW]

Look at u motherfuckers,i don't waste my time posting shit, i have a life,look at lillem 414 posts,u a wana b,get a life nigga,o the outside world dun kicked u out dun it.u computer geeks make me sick,where the fuck is this shit gonna get ya?
Lillem im a battle u later, i got shit to take care of, u the least of my worries.......

[Toner]

What a Cock???!!!!....................................... ...........................................

[_WISH_]

flow..tie
punches..Toner
originality..Toner
personals..tie

Overall..Toner took this cause his verse had better punches but it was pretty close



http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=86845

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=84570

[Toner]

Uppin 4 votez............................................. .................................................. ........................................

[Toner]

Uppin 4 votez............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......