[4] Lyricali vs [13] Understatement

[LaRyan Shabaz]

This was a good battle, with a pretty interesting topic. It really forced their hands to come up with something creative. I'm going to vote understatement because his story was, well, odd and it was quite interesting. The concept of under's made a bigger impression on me.

I replaced my glasses on my face, and nothing was as it seemed
returned to the park of happiness,that magnificent world of dreams
knowing that mirror existence was future, our world was out of luck
Sadly, the only difference I can make is feeding another duck...

That is what took my vote.
Big ups to both though. This is a good tournament.

[Evolve]

This was a dope fucking battle... props to both mc's for dropping well written verses... but

i think im gonna have to go with understatement... he had my attention from the beggining... then he twisted and turned the story nice as hell... dope imagery... an overall dope verse...

respect to both

Vote Under

[13th Disciple]

Yo......Ill battle to both of u.....understatement....u came sick dawg....thats real talk.....good vocab...way to stay on point...blah
blah blah....lyricali......i'm gonna have to give it up....u might be
a bitch in my book.....but u definately came nice.......basically....
u just came a little better than understatement....thats why i
have to give u my vote.........vote=lyricali

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=63491

[Maven.]

4-3 for lyricali
uppin

[A2Z]

im gonna give this to understatement just cuz he had better imagery and vocab

vote= understatement

[G.Hod]

4-4. . Don't ever sway in a thread like this again, A2Z.

[Key-Low]

both were deep as hell, props to both, nyce topic
understatement: wordplay: 7. rhyme scheme: 6, story: 9, total: 22
lyrcali: wordplay: 6, rhyme scheme: 8, story: 7, total: 21

lyrcali strayed more off of tha topic, what was tha first voter thinkin, lol, both verses were deep as hell, hard battle to vote on, no hate, mad props, peace, 1 luv

vote= understatement

[bribeone]

This Battle was straight out ILl.......much props to both here.....

after reading both verses in my opinion i liked understatements i dont know for some reason i was feelin his alot more,The topic was very creative wich is probally why i went with his.......this battle couldnt have been any better.......

vote=Understatement

[Ripper]

^ I agree wit bribone wit sayin dat this battle couldn't get any better. However i liked LyricAli's more. Both verses had the Ill vocab and imagery but the way Lyric's got the reader's attention was superb. Dope battle and much respect to both.

vote = LyricAli

[G.Hod]

6-5, U.S.

[Mystik Mind]

Damn Nice Battle Here...Great Drops By Both...

Understatement - Liked Your Verse Alot...Good Imagery And Vocab Used To Good Effect...I Like The Way You Used The Without My Glasses To Look At The World In A Different Perspective As To What It Might Become...Very Good Verse...

Lyric - Another Great Drop...Verse Was Very Nice To Read And Had Good Vocab And Imagery...Took A Different Route To The Topic To Good Effect And Came Out With A Truly Great Verse...

So After Reading Both Verses Several Times Because It Was That Hard To Judge My Vote Goes To LyricAli...Both Were Great Verses But Lyric's Struck Me More To The Topic And I Feel Had A Better Effect On The Reader...

Great Props To Both...

Vote - Lyricali

[Maven.]

6-6....
alrighty then.
I gots ta go vote on other battles.

[Maven.]

is this ending in a tie?

[Sand]

JeSuS JeSuS JeSuS.....

each of you came madly dope
so therefore you each recieve
mad props, both of you took
this topic and made it great.
under you gave off sort of an
apocolyptic tone, along with
dope flow and imagery, Hod.
damn...the poem your content
was .... fucking brilliant, so
you get my vote....very impressive

[Sand]

[4] Lyricali -G. Hod- Beats [13] Understatement


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