Shiznit vs Violent J

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Rules: 10 lines minimun 26 lines maximum, no hate votes, no crew votes, Both verses due by 12:00 am on 4 / 09 / 03
first to 3 wins
3-0 K.O


Violent J your up first spit that shit

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[Violent J]

Yo i was gunna b a gentleman n let ladies go first
but now i guess she's gunna b cursed
kus i dont like to rag on chics
specially ones wit dicks
dont get me wrong i aint hatin
im just sayin we coulda been matin
now u gotta get me up here dissin ya
when i shoulda been kissin ya
ya ya ya i know this is my first time
but at least i come up with a hot line...
or two
what can i say thats more than you
so as i sit here just spittin
i know ur sittin there hittin...
ya head wonder why ur in this in da first place
i know kus u cant do this normally face to face
so if u want me to change the pace
i will kus im the fastest one in this race
ur gunna take foreva to respond
in this movie im james bond
kus i got all the gadgets to win
n i dont need my kin
ok now im gettin close to my limit
so im gunna end this with some good shit
dont think ur gunna win kus ur the "shiznit"
as far as im concerned your just some bitch who thinks shes wit it

[shiznit]

Pathetic!!…only word runs through my head as I read your piece above this//
Stock market drops nonstop that no broker would bid on a lame diss//
Only truth is..your whole manhood shakes to even get into my business//
Imma release the beast..now choke on my wrist as soon as you catch my fist//
Ur 3rd grade vocab words screamin to fit in my verbs//
Realizing metaphorically ur rhyme scheme are only made to train herbs//
Damn kid..double check this ur loosin ur mind//
Just pick out letters put it together then you call it YOUR “hot line”?//
Ur style is a disease like herpes without remedy//
All you need to do now kid is get ur ass back to rap academy//
Allow me to mention “shiznit”is The Public Enemy//
A chick that no 007 could be beat the fuck outta me//
Better best be late but still beating you back on this you called “race”//
Raise my bars high up as ur mom starts to cum on ur face//
Trace your opposition don’t even try to cut and paste//
Aggressiveness of my piece now ur smellin my rhyme’s after-taste//
Violent jay…more like violent gay…//
Im “the CAT” ur the kitten I aint got nuttin more to say//
My extraordinary talents are lay down on the tray//
Ur goin back to school and in rapbattles imma stay//

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there yah have it ^^^ vote

[DixonButts]

bit from 8mile DVd battle for real time Eminem vs Some gurl

kus i dont like to rag on chics
specially ones wit dicks

my vote goes to shiznit due to this

[~HoTTie~]

both ya'll had hot punches and a nice flow but shiznit took this one....i think i heard one of ur lines b4 violent j...but i could be wrong....good job both of ya'll....congrats to shiznit though

vote=shiznit

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thats it yo... a K.O by Shiznit