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    Straight Diss To You All - Keystyle

    it's tough to rap? no you bitches just so cack
    Lmfao, Rb defining illness? but clearly y'all so wack
    members spew sum useless flaws, to N/a blemish
    since y'all be herbish, i'ma own Rb like a fucking chemist
    LLL just a fib, methods of deciding elites? utter shit
    i'ma donate "a rich hype" so y'all can ride each other's dicks
    seditious spits scatter sluts, as herbs dissolve
    & yo' top textcee? cerebal palsy sufferer, fuck evolve
    i'ma pound you dikes, repel & down you flies
    cuz battling b's like bigamy, "you bitches bound to di"
    you pussies not obese, Hall of fame drops? so shit
    i'ma call y'all prostitutes cuz you bitches' gut know skill
    whilst i aptly bruise you avid fools with maddened brute
    Rb becomes a swingers' yacht/ home to the wackest cruise
    like "killer instincts" & "word perfect", a.k.a. straight bitches
    your "original" wits come mo' softened than a hate victim
    aftermath so bloody, brains questioned like psychiatry
    (ho's crying since) i cut down Rb's legends like podiatry
    cauldron of punches poured onto y'all till your lines flake
    as solid hits leave (mo' pussies going for cover) than a feline grave
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&pagenumber=2
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...4&pagenumber=2
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...9&pagenumber=2
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...30#post1036030
    ^that's 4 links & honest feedback so don't sweat becuz i said my mind
    Last edited by brainsurgeon; January 1st, 2004 at 07:30 AM

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    ya....well the structure was nice
    and nice vocab but honestly i dont
    have a fuckin clue of wat u were talkin bout
    i thought it would b fire as most diss topics r
    but nuttin made sence, none of da metephorz
    nuttin! do u even know what Bigamy means
    just work on it okay
    peace
    Its all on me
    LA
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    He's got a point. Bring more heat next time your gonna blaze ppl dude. Other than that it was alright.

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    i dont
    have a fuckin clue of wat u were talkin bout<<<<<<yea i agree wit him........

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    those are the same links you used on your other piece, but this time you just added one more link and your feedbacks you left are shit...leave better feedback. Closed.

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